Nice vid, but noticed 2 things.., first off ur got two music tracks playing, second in your editing your cutting mid sentence..... Dont get me wrong iim not putting this down as im fairy new to the whole machinima/fan trailer thing but those 2 things fixed would make it better... Cheers, plus i just upload my 89 trailer so its good to see people stoll love the orig.. :)
@shaneanus Thanks, this was just for fun honestly. The whole storytelling of my trailer is off really. The scenes are cut mid sentence because those were the lines I wanted to set the tone of the trailer, when I do a serious one I'll make it tidy.
@filmswithnads if this is just mucking around around, witch it def wasnt a bad trailer.....id like to see what you can do when you get serious.... cheers.
Cool you had the ending
Kingoftheunknown100 6 months ago
Nice vid, but noticed 2 things.., first off ur got two music tracks playing, second in your editing your cutting mid sentence..... Dont get me wrong iim not putting this down as im fairy new to the whole machinima/fan trailer thing but those 2 things fixed would make it better... Cheers, plus i just upload my 89 trailer so its good to see people stoll love the orig.. :)
shaneanus 8 months ago
@shaneanus Thanks, this was just for fun honestly. The whole storytelling of my trailer is off really. The scenes are cut mid sentence because those were the lines I wanted to set the tone of the trailer, when I do a serious one I'll make it tidy.
filmswithnads 8 months ago
@filmswithnads if this is just mucking around around, witch it def wasnt a bad trailer.....id like to see what you can do when you get serious.... cheers.
shaneanus 8 months ago