Sorry Brother! but on the line..waqt ka darya. . . . you went out of beat!! Accent needs to be improved..plus Maaththaay vocals as if you are very exhausted while dubbing the vocals...
Over use of Delay effect in vocals! and finally! Music Mein Bay Sura Chaljata hai..Bay Taala (Off Beat) Nahin!!!
So work on both! and dont put such tracks on your channel which destroy your image! Rgds.
An audience would appreciate to see visual expression on a singer...dont hide yourself, let us see you sing and feel part of the song. This way you would be able to liven up a song. Take care and happy singing.
Thanx for asking me to comment..First and foremost if you are seriously thinking of pursuing a career in singing, get yourself a good mentor. U have got a good voice but tends to sound flat in some lines...sounds mono tune. I also feel that u would struggle with higher notes. These issues would be resolved through practice and guidance. Good luck and thanx for asking me to comment.
I am not a trained singer but you asked for my comment.. You have a good voice and rhythm sense but sometimes your words are sounding more conversational then in tune with the music. Listen to the original and work on it .you will do fine.
nicely sung...
ishaagarwal1988 11 months ago
great sung and u r a great singer
fakhar033 1 year ago
well sung!!!keep it up
rearaj 2 years ago
he has to reyaz alot ..
joyaan 2 years ago
well done keep up practiceing
hitmontana47 2 years ago
hats off man!
though u cud hav sung it in more 'sur'
but.. u sung well... Good job!
try auditioning in Indian Idol.. =P
adeel21 2 years ago
In music it has to be excellent or nothing! No room for average!!! Achcha hota hai ya phir kuch bhi nahin hota NO COMPROMISE!!!!!!! simple rule!
JunaidJamshaid 2 years ago
@JunaidJamshaid i totally agree with you!!
drkkabaap 2 years ago
Sorry Brother! but on the line..waqt ka darya. . . . you went out of beat!! Accent needs to be improved..plus Maaththaay vocals as if you are very exhausted while dubbing the vocals...
Over use of Delay effect in vocals! and finally! Music Mein Bay Sura Chaljata hai..Bay Taala (Off Beat) Nahin!!!
So work on both! and dont put such tracks on your channel which destroy your image! Rgds.
JunaidJamshaid 2 years ago
i love this song
AHRZAMANBALASY 3 years ago
Well Sung Dude
nevildadrewalla 4 years ago
Thanks buddy
sri2808 4 years ago
For a first time recording on a track, i think its a Good job buddy. Got to work on the pitch a lil bit. Make the song a lil smoother.
MegaGB 4 years ago
An audience would appreciate to see visual expression on a singer...dont hide yourself, let us see you sing and feel part of the song. This way you would be able to liven up a song. Take care and happy singing.
superrated 4 years ago
Thanks for your suggestions.
sri2808 4 years ago
Thanx for asking me to comment..First and foremost if you are seriously thinking of pursuing a career in singing, get yourself a good mentor. U have got a good voice but tends to sound flat in some lines...sounds mono tune. I also feel that u would struggle with higher notes. These issues would be resolved through practice and guidance. Good luck and thanx for asking me to comment.
superrated 4 years ago
I am not a trained singer but you asked for my comment.. You have a good voice and rhythm sense but sometimes your words are sounding more conversational then in tune with the music. Listen to the original and work on it .you will do fine.
besura 4 years ago
Thanks. Sure. I am working on that.
sri2808 4 years ago
good job dude.you need to do a bit of work on diction though.5 stars.
vgentertainers 4 years ago