Hey man, ok so I got what you were saying...after rewinding it a couple times. I understand but you might want to think about rewording it cause it's kind of vauge. Not sure excatly what your singing of still until the halfway point in the song. from then on it's beautiful. except I didn't like the ending. How after we know she's close to death the next min and a half or whatever you stopped the story line and started ...crying about her. we don't want that. finish the story somehow.
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system989 2 years ago
but props for making the song.. you can't be perfect the first time and somtimes its good to hear a fresh ear. Keep going, could be a class A song!
bwshoemaker 2 years ago
Hey man, ok so I got what you were saying...after rewinding it a couple times. I understand but you might want to think about rewording it cause it's kind of vauge. Not sure excatly what your singing of still until the halfway point in the song. from then on it's beautiful. except I didn't like the ending. How after we know she's close to death the next min and a half or whatever you stopped the story line and started ...crying about her. we don't want that. finish the story somehow.
bwshoemaker 2 years ago
nice song Damon... i will have to listen to the rest now...lol.
get james to play the drums or something..piano...flute...?
ultralight9 3 years ago
That's a cool song. It grew on me as I listened.
PBSmusic 3 years ago