Good storyline. Man goes out, mad villain comes and kills family of man, he vows vengeance. There's one problem though, you make the events happen kind of weird. If the woman knows the clown's a murderer, wouldn't she try to escape because she's pregnant and wants to bring the child to safety? How the hell does the man get C4s?!
The story would have been good. Flesh out the characters a bit more. Don't kill the clown, Let the clown be the fuel of Dark Avenger instead! Note: give the man a name.
Is it from Marvel Comics? I was not be able to watch it.
Rex8483 1 month ago in playlist More videos from kristovfur
Good storyline. Man goes out, mad villain comes and kills family of man, he vows vengeance. There's one problem though, you make the events happen kind of weird. If the woman knows the clown's a murderer, wouldn't she try to escape because she's pregnant and wants to bring the child to safety? How the hell does the man get C4s?!
The story would have been good. Flesh out the characters a bit more. Don't kill the clown, Let the clown be the fuel of Dark Avenger instead! Note: give the man a name.
shermanng10 3 years ago