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  • thats shiiiit

  • garbage...

  • love this

    

  • damnnn i love this!!

  • damnnn i love this!!

  • lol why should i writh to email if i can get this beat with youtube to mp3 program fail for you

  • Do you know what it feels like to wake up and not really give a fuck How you days going to go feels like u ran out of luck And you say no to anything you use to want to do Look around and watch the world pass you Who would knew that would by me In front of the store bummin cause we didnt have no money When i was in school i laughed and thought it was funny But in the real world they ran me crazy Everbody told me i need to straightin up with the drugs Guess i never had sumbody there for the hug.

  • this is very good :( i love it thumbs up if you agree

  • i like writing,everyday in my life i keep fighting,keep charging on an d on like a viking,i write bars to make a change,coz i feel these childrens pain,look at the 3rd world countries,they treat us people like monkeys,kids starving there all hungry,truth is our society is a piece of fukery,

  • for real this is my most favorite beat you make, idc how old it is

  • haha i love writing crap on here just to see what the emotional readers have to say ...wow

  • watch?v=yRTtROLrz5c

  • i waited 1:09 for a drop then turned it off!

  • coool

  • hey i sent u an email about getting the wave file for this beat. if i could get it to write somethin too that would be great. i promise i will do it justice, you can check out a few vids on my channel jkofroth89 if u wana make sure im legit.

  • been a bad boy since the start hear voices up stairs mary u tart i cry i skylark im eavesdroping peace hopping holly rabbitt keep stopping i aint poping out my sockets ill explode like a rocket yeah im only 9 but u cant stop it its my topic rap its my hobit i mean habit no ingles no need prez i got the doh lets steal some mow i ant a thug the story off me being mugged what is this lust for music trust i abuse it refuse to be kind i want to change before i become insane like dad this beats sad

  • Beat is kinda sexy....I like

  • =D

  • check my beats too

  • ATTENTION ALL EMINEM FANS

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  • tight beat! Check some of mine out on my page. I gurantee you won't be dissapointed.

  • she does not love me no more :(

    in fact neither does my brother and im dating his ex :( i cant believe it ima slit these damn wrists soon if my life dont turn around fast

  • hey, think i can rap on this, send u my part, and then u can sing a hook to go w/ it?

    i've been following up on sum of your work from time to time and u're really good at doing wat you do.

    let me know,

    best regards...Aldo

  • i cant express my feeling how could you find the words ina rap i nee to know by tommarow night plz i need help shes never gonna love me again

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  • worse instrumental ever no wonder u put sad to get view faggot fake ass

  • @98711919 this is actually very emotional but you wud know you kno those nightly rapings

  • @98711919 learn to type hoe

  • @hotrick12 oo learn to type when i made one mistake ? lol get a lifer yer?

  • @98711919

    2 mistakes. first one being...your birth

  • @98711919 suck my mother fucking dick bitch im tired of this shit going out its the best thing ever

  • he que paso a lo underground se luse pana que mas se podia pedir yo te doy mas que puntos me inspira el flow pana esta del corte pa seguir a la evolucion yea por eso

  • Mommy I remember livin back on 8Mile with no one home, Tammy (bio mom) said "Shawn Ill be back see you later alligator" I sat at home alone I was three years old with empty bottle in my hand I found out my mom was fucking around with two guys each day so I say thank alot mom for giving a fuck about me I was three livin in a cold home with no fucking heat my mom didnt feed me when I was little so I say now hope you burn in Hell Tammy I wish I could slit your neck

    this shit is true about me

  • Could I Have This 4 A Song .... ??

  • this beat is hot i would love to use it for this mixtape im doing

  • Love this!!! : )

  • dam I like this one

  • look at mi inside my eyes stop telln mi these lies been seein u with other guys telln mi that u luv mi sayn u wan be mi baby heared these lies saw these guys u mussy had them hypnotized no! but this isnt rite tell mi wat type life this is got my drama shown like show buz fuk the world fuk ur friends hope u neva c mi again fuk u hoe n keep the kids
  • hey i rlly like this beat its AMAZING. I was wondering if i could borrow this beat for a project i was gonna use it for.its for my english class. I have to make a video on poverty. I will give you full credits at the end of the video and i'll even e-mail you the video after i finish it i need to know as soon as possible plz reply the moment you get this. thank youuu ^.^. my e-mail is sweetheart_girl495@hotmail(dot­)com

    thank uu :)

  • this beat is sick this wil help me wit more song keep doing you

  • i will murder a few of your beats and send you the complete song Little star is my fav and im putting it on my mixtape

  • where the hell did u get "sad?"

  • @tnjfolife for views ^.^

  • @joeyclaris7 oh, ok.

  • @tnjfolife hahah i was wondering the same thing

  • @tnjfolife its very emotional

  • i call this one stay true to you'reself uh huh see i stayed true to myself and never followed no lessons i pick my next move each day is a blessing and im tryina fly higher capture everythought it was my desire to fly away, blowin out smoke mind aint here to stay cuz im on another level, have so many goals so i aint gonna settle for nothin less, lookin at my life and the no paychecks when i was workin hard, gonna find away to make the sun shine through rap eryday doinwat i do
  • stay beautiful like ur music and you will go far

  • CHECK OUT THE BEATS UP ON MY CHANNEL

  • girlss pretty.

  • hey i realy think you got skills. sounds good. keep doing wut your doing. dont let tha haters stop ya. sounds great.

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  • this is dope

  • this is not bad its nice? maybe that weird gitar or how u write it but i like it .

  • death affects me in a negative way as i drop down to my knees and pray i know its goin to hapen either way i just got a few words to say momma lynda i never showd you appretiation and ppl hating telling me its my fault your gone if only id have stayd home it wuldnt be blamed on me fuck it the misery and my consience is chokin me so hard i cant breathe its not ok to live like me 1 deep call ro and tell em he gotta patna rip danta your in my heart from now on out only true words come from my mouth

  • dawn........i wana get the number of the chick

  • its not bad but i dont like the hihats or shakers too much

  • best i like ya

  • nice beat .. more beat .. i love it ..

  • i lik it

  • I see what ya see Believe what I believe Think what I think Monster in ya dreams Im right there when ya awake from ya sleep Ya there to push me when I lean I here when ya feel deep To make you smile when I think my words are cheap Ya make my love float like a leaf In the breeze in the summer heat I feel your heart like a drummers beat Over the seas I will swim to yabeach Just hear you laugh your voice Im pleased I will walk from the west to the east North to the south to be with a queen
  • @GMAC520 nice love it good job!!!

  • @TheHaters911 Thank you.

  • @GMAC520 dat was fucking sick bro

  • @crzyscooter Thanks. Appreciate it.

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  • hey me and a friend of mine are about to get some studio time and wanted to use this for one of r songs let me no if i can you will get full credit for the beat

  • ayo this fye i wanna write to it i have an ent hit me up

  • Rap? More like RnB.

  • @dohboyal cool

  • @dohboyal nooo buuddyyyy learn musiccc

  • where do you make these beats im 14 and im trying to be a DJ

  • sounds like a 90s game in the beginning

  • wow sick!  nice job

  • JOEY RULES

  • like your beatz u bad girl

  • wtf this doesnt suck u fucking hater michyyzaking u gay as hell and want attention fuck outta here

  • is there anyway u can slow the pace of this beat down?

  • I howl at the moon,watching porno cartoons,

    boning big black bitches that look like baboons,

    with pubic hair on their heads,

    underarms are more like dreads,

    and they cum oil all over my bed spread,

    i was mislead,

    thought I was getting a hot red bone,

    but all I got was an STD and some dome

  • Steady i go, nobody knowz, how i keep it inside. you can see the pain in my eyes, they tell the truth, better then wordz. livin my life like a curse, every verse i write goes deep, thinking like a i'm nothing to thiz world. i keep praying to lord to ask forgiveness, listing up my sins, gotta finish wat i started. Messin up pplz lives and that whyz, i need to go find a place to die. my rymes hurtin, my wordz are tunin to worse.

  • Keep it clean I know it hurts, but sometimes baby words make it worse,. Now im sayin this rhyme to bide some time, so I don't think about all the words they shout, Keep it commin let me see, all the thing I know ain't me, Man this life is dope can't get no hope, stop fighting and stand up straight, I ain't got no love I ain't got no hate. I just got some time to make. This song it aint so crude just sit and see , that what I'm sayin just aint so rude.

    thanks for the beat

  • everyday i wake up and just feel like my neck is breakin/ tryin to deal with all of lifes little expectations/ like will i fail will i make it lifes so hard sometimes i just cant take it/ im bruised and beaten laying naked when my girl walks up to me and says hun we need to talk/ please baby im asking u not to be mad at me but i just found out i have HIV/ tears start droppin my face is in the palm of my hands/ i lost so much strength i cant even stand/ im lost and dont understand/

  • put a nice hook on this in the money is in the bank it g-o-o-d

  • fl studio

  • @Emphaysez 2/5

  • Well, I'm happy as long as I get a rating.

  • Story of my life bro, 4/5

  • Deep.........i like it

  • and it sounds so sublime, the truth when you spit it/ but if you speak the truth will they hear it/ and will they even get it/ black president and aint a damn thang different/ It's a new day, government makin new crack/ 03 to 2010, aint got a troop back/ so we do trap/ and we do hustle/ and we do fight, cause we goin through struggles/ Keep ya head up, God love you/ Wear that on ya heart/ and never let em stop you from bein you/ world comin to an end, tell me whats new/

  • more 2 come check me out gave it ma best shot ya click me

  • that was awful

  • @b00mz911 dude no. Stop. ST0P!

  • what the literal fuck?

  • @b00mz911 LMAO>>W0W WTF W4S TH4T

  • ur, ur just... just messed up bro.

  • funny beat

  • ITS HELGA!!!!!

  • Who is the fugly chick

  • @nessie0bella0edward the one who made this beat

  • @joeyclaris7 not ugly at all

  • @joeyclaris7 hahaha way to go idiot

  • @joeyclaris7 what the fuck man disrespectful little waste's ... anyways joeyclaris ive took one of your beats and made a track to it check it out on my channel named judging book by its cover ... hope you like it and ive made sure it states its your beat :)

  • @joeyclaris7 You're beauty is not for anyone to judge. I prefer to judge people by what they accomplish and you make beautiful beats! keep up the good work from East Coast USA!

  • @nessie0bella0edward fucking asshole, shes beautiful. If you dont like it get off the page.

  • this ait bad wat are you all talkin bout... mabey it's not rap... more like hip hop R&B mabey. it's good

  • killa beats....not

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  • I like it but its too fast :)

  • jadore cette instru!!!! je fé ke l'écouter en boucle!!!!

  • I love it!

  • ahhh joey claris is ur name wow... thought u was a girl anyways ur very beautiful... and 5 stars.

  • i am a girl

    JC

  • @joeyclaris7 am i allowed to rap off of any of this beats/instrumentals?and post dem as a response . i'll give a link ... and stuff to ur page n tell everyone to subscribe?

  • @Soru475 lol yeah check out the newer beats tho... these beat is super duper old

  • @joeyclaris7 dude u make baadass beats. ur the shit dude!

  • @joeyclaris7 who cares this sucks this aint rap its cap you trippin fool

  • @mitchyzaking ;) it dont matter :D u should prolly go check out my new stuff :D

  • Lol, Don't worry about him hes just a troll look at his other comments, all hate comments trying to annoy people

  • sorry Im stresed everybody hates me on this CRAPPY website people kids infact telling me to DIE painfully and slowly Im 20 freakin 1 sorry Ill subcribe its cool

  • this is very nice

  • this is a R&B...Fuck R&B!!!

  • dam dis female snapped, gotta give her 10 stars 4dis, good beats an a pretty cute girl, hit me up an add me, see if we can make a song.

  • put some bass up

  • dat iz SWEET

  • A female producer? Damn girl, you took that women's rights thing to the next level. I'm diggin' that shit mami. Yo', if you need a rapper/mcee/music writer, I'm your dude, just hit me up one time mami. I'm out holla at ya' boy ya tu sabe.

  • she's ur girl ?

  • she is me....

    jc

  • You are very beautiful:)

  • This is your track homegirl ?

    Shit it's good !!

    How much ?

  • i dont know rap, but this is a great work

  • your killin it! i have a few things i wanna put over this, do you mind if i use the beat? =) (not to sell or anything, just for fun)

  • ahh yeah.. ..... .... i been living of the shadow of death being alive there's no end, how pity my life if there's no one will come to lift me up. i been dreaming for so long to take me there in such a beautiful world of peace... nyhahahahha.... luv the beat...

  • sick sick can i use it for my rap ill send u my lyric if u wanna first read

    holla back(Y)

  • Did you mean my lyrics? cause normaly I like to spit my own lyrics, either way let me know.

  • MrLOKUST:

    Wow dude, just fucking wow. You write some sick shit.

  • thanks man I appreciate the positive feedback,

  • It's all good, man just keep at it. You shouldn't let skill like that go to waste

  • INSANE. 5/5

  • while rappin on this, the focus will be shifted too much on the beat, it is very noisy.

    too much happening if u know what i mean

  • sick

  • WOW I liked it :)

  • good job homie, keep it up.. i'ma rap over it

  • nice flow homie

    check ot my vids for my rap songs

  • u r realy talented hey listenn I added your e-mail 2 my liste if you don't mind a realy wanna talk 2u I'mma young morroccan rapper n I need some help 4 my next song ba the way I rap in english

  • ben je nederlands?

  • omg, heard one om my beats and saw this on the right side.

    I wanna curl in our hair :)

  • this is so tight is got me speechless...........

  • NICE!!!!!!!

  • did you midi the heyboard??

  • this beat is hot

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  • Awesome beat i might have to holla at you for this one... oh and btw you are the epitomy of beauty lol

  • wow lol.... yo kidson kidson i spit dumb shit jus cuz its fun... watch out for my nerf gun

  • nice beat joeyclaris, u got real talent

  • not bad

  • its cOo.. a little repetitive?

  • shoot a couple of these instrumentals to a real rapper.

  • nice one dog this beat got me writin another rap so nice one keep it up

  • not feelin it not enough kick i cant wreck this shit

  • Suggest you look at my latest beat please :) Hope it is more appealing to ya

    Peace

    JC7

  • whats the name of your latest beat so i can see if its fire homie

  • The first three videos u see on my chanel page :)

    JC7

  • Damn you're cute. This is a nice beat though :)

  • ooohh!!!..thats really awesome..fiinally i look a giirl interested..by the RAP!!.. YEEAH!!.. keep going girl..i like ur beats..and can i make a song whit ur beat?

  • dang girl ur awsome i really like what ur doing i give u ur props ladies can do just as muxh as a man ur good can u help me out and lend me some beats i'll give u ur props and get u some major gigs if my cd makes it.

  • very nice!! (:

    See also:

    /watch?v=f2FL7YODY9I

  • wait. a girl made this??

  • Yes sir ;)

    Jc7

  • not that you deserve any more credit for being a girl or anything, but i never could imagine an attractive female sitting at a computer going through the tediousness of making beats...

    so props =p