I like the first one the most.
KindaMayvelle 3 years ago
I personally like the first try, but then again, I haven't done an indepth analysis, good job though, your sister has promise!
Kei163 4 years ago
Sounds really good,I especially like the third rendition. but I think your pitch should go up just a tad at the end of it, so it feels more like a question, but other than that it's really good. ^-^
AnnaTheDorkQueen 4 years ago
I like the first one the most.
KindaMayvelle 3 years ago
I personally like the first try, but then again, I haven't done an indepth analysis, good job though, your sister has promise!
Kei163 4 years ago
Sounds really good,I especially like the third rendition. but I think your pitch should go up just a tad at the end of it, so it feels more like a question, but other than that it's really good. ^-^
AnnaTheDorkQueen 4 years ago