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From: MrRobAtchison
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  • If you were in NC I would hire you!'

  • LOVE THIS!

  • Two people hating.....this was beautiful

  • Me encanto -> i loved it man.

  • this is too my wife. well done bruv

  • you killed it i wud love to team up i write too

  • WOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

  • beautiful

    

  • you killed it man. great!

    

  • AMEN ! BRO....

  • Nice dude

  • Wow you have such talent, and I could tell you really meant what you were saying. I am Hispanic but I truly think God has gifted black people with the ability to make great profound poetry.

  • Beautiful ..

  • Love this and the others can't wait to hear more

  • LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! IF YOU NOT MARRIED YET YOU WILL BE SOON KEEP BRINGIN IT

  • Do you have a brother? LOL. This was awesome!

  • Beautiful ode to your wife

  • Truth in words and glad you letting the ladies know we have a heart too. Peace

  • 2 dislikes got to be the two girls that broke up with him before his wife

  • Love it!!! But just because u said it doesn't necessarily mean that u mean it. I hope u actually feel like that for somebody now or someday! cos some people truly deserve it.

  • beautiful. Open and honest. I shared this with my girl, cuz thats how i feel.

  • lovely !

  • Beautiful wish more men expressed themselves like this !!! Beautiful eyes btw :))

  • wow..

    

  • i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!aw!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • wow that was beautiful.

  • that was soooo good!!!)))) loved it

  • Awesome job, would love to see this up on the Deep Underground Poetry website

  • i love it!!!!!!!!!

  • That was hot

  • This was dope AF.

    

  • umm.. i started bawling.. this is amazing..

    

  • wow ur rapping bro lol. Its dope tho.

  • Very good keep it up!

  • beautiful

  • very nice....

  • Dope man!! God Bless!!

  • Beautiful!

  • That was beautiful.

  • i love this so much :)

  • wow i love this

  • keep up this is hard bruh

  • DOPE FAM!! I HAD TO POST THIS ON MY SITE!!

  • I have been waiting for this !!!!!!! Glad to know u r still writing!!!!!!! God Bless u!!! And God bless & cover your marriage and anything birthed from it. Stay Encouraged!!!

  • loved itt!

  • Really Nice !

  • Really Nice!

  • I am posting this on my fanpage...I love this....beautiful....

  • That was a tight piece keep it up bro! God is using you in a big way!!

  • That was really nice

  • You should definitely post more. Love your work...

  • i love your poem "she" your gifted. you inspire me to keep writing. I write poetry too, but dont have the balls to recite on you tube. im going to try tonight though, so stay tuned!

  • i absolutely love this

  • Wow. This was truly an amazing piece. Hopefully one day I can the voice in my pieces become as strong as the one in yours. Keep doing your thing :)

  • awww

  • Wow! Your wife is a one lucky girl!

  • Love it! Wish my husband felt like that....:(

  • LUCKY CHICK

  • wow, amen! " i'm just glad God let her be apart of my life, because i was not aware that man could take angles to wife." :)

  • wow, amen!

  • Nice! You got some good stuff

  • Amazing!

  • Beautiful!!!

  • One of my new favorites, keep it up man.

  • I love it

  • oooh I love this! you got it

  • This is a wonderful, wonderful poem. Keep doing yo thang!! Much Love, Peace, and Respect. Lyrical Brown Eyes

  • This is a very beautiful piece. Very beautiful poem about Real love and Maturity. Congratulations to the both of you.

  • Good job!!! I did a she is poem myself... Keep up the good work.

  • Loved it!;)

  • wow, wow, wow.

  • Love it! 

  • I love it hmu on the inbox we should chat

  • That was amazing!

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