Eh, eh, I loved the playful alliteration on this... it was absolutely brilliant, and quite hard to achieve I imagine. Particularly the "click" sounds at the beginning, I found them just perfect, I could imagine the whip coming down and the letters simply jumping into place... :)
Eh, eh, I loved the playful alliteration on this... it was absolutely brilliant, and quite hard to achieve I imagine. Particularly the "click" sounds at the beginning, I found them just perfect, I could imagine the whip coming down and the letters simply jumping into place... :)
flan984 1 year ago
You are a fine poet as well. Love the alliteration throughout the poem...sets a nice beat/rhythm. A job well done...
Bravo!!
ladyofire 1 year ago
This looks nice also. I guess the updates are good, should say again, “Brilliant poem.” The nuance is well above average.
naomie76 1 year ago
What a delight!
Idlinfarm 1 year ago