Strummed Guitar

[speedhax76]

change the snare :) something like snare and clap mixed

[ClarkSkillman]

The last note in the riff the lowest one isn't part of the key you are in.

[Tokentool]

its the rythem strums your doing there out of key just re adjust them and that will sound mint

[Cole15Magic]

i agree... it doesn't sound 'bad' at all- but something sounds "off"

[bikaz06]

@Cole15Magic do u mean off as in off tune? if yes can u tell me exactly at what time.. thanks

[Coldplayfuckingace]

@bikaz06 around 0:21-0:23. One of those notes in the chord is not in the key as it sound dissonant. Or maybe that was your intention

[felixcruzazul]

its good but something is wrong