David, Alex Ryan here. Very nice work, yet when he walks down the A Block Stairs, there's some movement in the background, possibly from Niyarzi. Apart from that, a-okay.
This was good, lots of effective little touches and a good soundtrack. One thing I found awkward though was that the protagonist seems to see the stalker and we never do. Also the gun did seem pretty out of place, even surreal - would have been better if some more plausible threat could have been suggested.
Ya see, i invented the term fly along the floor. people were scared at the time, and then i found a piece of speaker that cured some shit on the ground. Yeah. Poor Barwell
Sweettt, i like it.. yeah it does look like you put quite of bit of work into it.. but its sell made =) keep up the great work. oh btw .. i LOVE your accent! and yeah you deffinatly need a sequel.
Like the theme music, 28 weeks later if i'm correct? well done on the film, well shot
jonboyjones2 2 years ago
mon dieu my hair is awful in this :S
Zeebrugge1918 3 years ago
it was pretty good!!!
Harshjog92 4 years ago 2
awsomeness!
mudkipsforall 4 years ago 2
wow that has some great editing very well made
cinemafilmreviews 4 years ago
David, Alex Ryan here. Very nice work, yet when he walks down the A Block Stairs, there's some movement in the background, possibly from Niyarzi. Apart from that, a-okay.
Alexryanthebestryan 4 years ago
All I got to say about this is: What the hell is going on? Because I'm clearly confused.
BlazikenMaster 4 years ago
Ugh, i got motion sickness...
OMG i was so expecting the person coming around the corner to be a teacher.
Who was the stalker by the way... perhaps i didn't quite get it...
~Elizabth
11spacemarine11 4 years ago
IS THIS A PWANK
neo20122 4 years ago
Good editing and filming what did u edit it with?
zadrazil 4 years ago
Thanks! Your comment on my profile led me to your short. Nice work!
Pipistrello 4 years ago
nice, some good tension built up there
andyJJcool 4 years ago
hey its stef x x x x haaa
is this one new? x u coulda told me!
hey, wheres the party song?? i really wanna see it!!!!
c ya x
oh n next tim u make a film n need a female part/a hand..... gimme a buzz x
ismellbunnies 4 years ago 2
David - I really liked the way you put the 360 shot together. That was my favorite part.
TheFamousStacie 4 years ago 2
This was good, lots of effective little touches and a good soundtrack. One thing I found awkward though was that the protagonist seems to see the stalker and we never do. Also the gun did seem pretty out of place, even surreal - would have been better if some more plausible threat could have been suggested.
ranmatim 4 years ago 4
Hey man... nice vid... Love the music... ps. those boys are quite cute ;) nice accents too.... can't wait to see more
treefingerss 4 years ago 4
pretty damn good, the toy gun kinda ruined it a tad but the music worked well nd loved the guy on the phone's accent lol
harrythetoad 4 years ago 2
WHO is the perso in the video?
Tha main one. JACK.
HMMMM...
hardfall3000 4 years ago 2
its pretty cool, the 28 days later music was really a good touch
qwerty33x 4 years ago 2
nicee!!! 5 starss
thanks for posting on my last LOVE video !!!
take care
byeeeeeeeeeeeeee
alexandermain 4 years ago 2
Hey man!
Nice vid, good choice of soundtrack too! Hehe! Pretty good stuff, i'll email you some more stuff. But good work!
Roland
DIProductions1 4 years ago 2
O_O
niyazi93 4 years ago
Ya see, i invented the term fly along the floor. people were scared at the time, and then i found a piece of speaker that cured some shit on the ground. Yeah. Poor Barwell
kakashigaiden3 4 years ago
Sweettt, i like it.. yeah it does look like you put quite of bit of work into it.. but its sell made =) keep up the great work. oh btw .. i LOVE your accent! and yeah you deffinatly need a sequel.
masonar 4 years ago
lol, snijibjak thinks that he can make a better one, hahahahahahaha
niyazi93 4 years ago 2
this video owns david i cant wait to make a better one with you
snijibjak 4 years ago
well in my honest opinion, it would've been so cool if barwell wasnt in it, and if the 360-less boy hadn't posted a comment. yeah well yeah
kakashigaiden3 4 years ago
^^
Silly Dom.
davidburch 4 years ago
lol, not bad :P
lemonsofdoom 4 years ago
>: D
Analwyrm 4 years ago
Hahahaha, you used the 28 Days Later soundtrack, love it!...That was awesome, best video you have made yet.
SmokeTwoJoint5 4 years ago
looks cool, you should make a sequel!
niyazi93 4 years ago