You guys shoot in HD, and then can't even spring for a 150 shotgun mic? Your audio is shit (sounds like everything is in a tunnel), except for the song. Hopefully that's not copyrighted. Lighting needs a lot of work, a bounce card goes a long way. Premise is very funny, and the punchline sells it, but the whole thing feels too long, like you're beating me over the head with it. I also think a lot of shots could have cut much earlier. I like your stuff, just trying to help it be better.
omg this was so dumb... not funny at all.
Frwrks 1 year ago
You guys shoot in HD, and then can't even spring for a 150 shotgun mic? Your audio is shit (sounds like everything is in a tunnel), except for the song. Hopefully that's not copyrighted. Lighting needs a lot of work, a bounce card goes a long way. Premise is very funny, and the punchline sells it, but the whole thing feels too long, like you're beating me over the head with it. I also think a lot of shots could have cut much earlier. I like your stuff, just trying to help it be better.
JoskelkatProductions 1 year ago
Funny premise, but.......
LBTennis 1 year ago