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  • Reasoning With Vampires is awesome.

  • I have the same whiteboard as you!!! :D You rock, you smart :)

  • hey...You;re pretty attractive and smart! Stay awesome!

  • I love your sass. I totally agree with your stance on Mrs. Meyer. Very sound :)

  • I like your face. It's nice to see that the cute British voice has a cute face to go with it.

  • just to say, im a girl and i do NOT believe in Edward or Jacob, i dont particularly like Meyer because she ruined the vampire storys, but i would like to say that she did a good job with The Host which i did enjoy, but of course everybody has their own opinion like i said before

    meganh4540

    meganh's books and movies

  • Reasoning with Vampires is an awesome Tumblr.

  • ...I love you :3

  • idiot

  • Wow your actually quite good looking :)

  • I can understand what you mean. I been writting a bit fighting scense in Mortal Kombat fanfic. I've been watching some of fighters skills but still looked up their own fighting moves,and being creatived with them too. Also you can't always have the characters be 'the fighter who can't be defeated', But not all story is about fight scenes becaues there's more to it.

  • I get what you mean. I tried my hand at quite a few fight scenes, and every time I write one out I keep going back to add some needed detail that I missed.

    On a side note, I believe that from now on we should refer to Smeyer's books as Toilet, Naive Moron, Excrement and Bloody Dreadful.

  • @TeddyBearDancers Ah. :)

  • The haters you tend to mimic don't actually exist on these pages... I don't think they'd want to subscribe to someone as logical as you =P

  • @TheAmatuerArtist D'aww, thanks. :)

    I actually am a bit puzzled as to why they haven't all come down on me like a ton of bricks yet. o.0 Ah, well.

  • how cud u say u hate her? like this : i hate stephanie meyer

    no no i see what you mean, and agree with you,

    <3 =D

    i also agree its hard to write action-y scenes

  • Grammar Nazis unite!

  • Thank you for the tumblr page! I find myself speaking corrections, then have to react my soul from waterfalling out of my mouth because there's no help for that level of stupid.

  • lo nice to see you in the flesh for once! Great vid mate :)

  • @JohnHutch lol, cheers. :)

  • You forgot to mention that Smeyers doesn't donate to charity. That's what I hate most about her. That being said, action scenes are hard to write. Well, unless they're SLASH "action" scenes. I find those very easy to write. ;) Research can be hard, too, especially if you grew up in an age with no Internet, but as you say, that doesn't excuse it. If Smeyers spent less time eating twinkies and KFC, and more time writing, she could write an action scene and do research.

  • @nicolebmoviesFTW2

    Leave twinkies and KFC out of this!

  • Jane Eyre :D I think it must be one of my favourite 'classics'.

    I totally agree about writing action scenes, I just tend to procrastinate an awful lot whenever I end up at that point. It takes ages for me to end up going back to that point.

    I respect the fact that Smeyer's tried to write something, but I hate what she's created.

  • If you'd like, I'd gladly share an wiki ripping on the Twilight series. My favorite page is called "Rebutting the Twilighter Arguments", a page dedicated to responding to shit like: Y DU U PPL WANT TO RUIN MY LIFE?? Y R U SO MEAN? Y DO U HAVE TO PISS ON SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL AS TWILIGHT?

    Infinte lolz for me.

  • Writing action scenes is my FAVORITE part in writing. All the time I have been writing the action scenes are putting pressure onto my skull and when that part comes up I can finally release the pressure.

  • I'm not a writer in the sense you're talking about Writer, but I am a poet and a lyricist, and writing can sometime be a pain in the ass. Especially when you put down what you're writing, to think about it some, come back and realize what you just wrote is crap.

  • When I have to write action scenes, I go away from my computer and I get myself really, really bored so that I'll HAVE to come back and write it because I feel like I'd die of boredom if I didn't.

  • What I hate:Millions of feminists fought for their rights in the 19th century.Just for this..this bitch to come and write Twilight,this dumb girl being obsessed with her pretty boyfriend,of course,if he dumps you=>JUMP OF A CLIFF.

    So all the fight was in vain,because now all those naive girls are searching for Edward,because without a boyfriend you are a nothing.They will have a kid and name it Renesmee.The same boring life-get married,kids,grow old,die.Cliche.Even in reality.

  • If I really hated her, I would hate her only her writings and attitudes...

    Well, I'm still waiting for your review about Jane Eyre. :)

  • I can't wait for the Jane Eyre review!

  • Oh, I thought I was the only one who despised writing action scenes. I always feel like they ironically have no action in them, and the critical point in the story has the worst writing.

  • And I am always editing them. @WordDrink

  • Fighting scenes are always the hardest to write (For me, some romance parts of the books, as well, for some reason) and find myself trying to hurry past writing it even though I know it's one of the most important parts. But once I get into, I'm INTO it.

  • I'm actually fairly good at writing action scenes, and the fights do come to me relatively quickly. Hell when I'm writing my fantasy stories sometimes I have to stop and just turn on some music or something and swing around my own sword because I get too involved with the action on a mental level it kinda takes over xD.

    But just because I can write actions scenes doesn't mean creating the set-ups is easy for me. Nor is finding the right words for them.

  • @Bluemagus

    We're all like that. BTW have you checked out Limyaael's Fantasy rants?

  • @ZeroMyHero99 Send me an email and I'll check em out.

  • I agree, writing action scenes can be difficult and time consuming :( but I've actually found I like writing the action scenes :D

    Are you absolutely right! Without a decent action scene a story does seem flat.

  • lmao I'm loving the Reasoning With Vampires tumblr. I think the tags are part of what makes it awesome. "the cullens aren't a coven; they're a sorority," "that's what she said (but she said it very primly)," "i whispered angrily." Thanks for posting the link ^^

    Y'know, as an English major, I have to wonder how well SMeyer did in university.

  • I've been writing a horror novel about four groups trapped in a labrynth full of cannibals and vampires. I've run into an issue, I'm running out of characters to brutally slaughter.

  • @TheGeoshark lol! XD

  • @WriterfromNowhere Yeah, my I've got no issue writing gory killings and action scenes, just everything else gives me trouble!

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  • i would hate to be her editor - because it would kill me that my publishing company wants her book at all and that i have to work with that crap. gladly i'm not in that position and i wouldn't like to be even fpr all of the worlds money. too painful

  • I agree with you on the difficulty on writing action sequences. I just finished a fantasy novel. There were plenty of sword-swinging and spell casting fighting scenes. They were tedious at first, but I added an under tone of character development to make it more fun for me. Something like, having a calm noble knight going berserk in battle and later feeling remorse about it.

  • @Cairothejackal That actually is a very good way to make an action sequence thought-provoking rather than just mindless action. :P

  • Like a wise man once said, you shall not hate. (Yes, Darren Shan reference.)

  • Urban Dictionary was right, she is crap.

  • @soundscaper18 Yup. :P

  • Love your videos Writer, you have a great way with words and get your points across so clearly.

  • @ronvins Well, I try. :)

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