i just felt actors moved a little slow, the edit between the two angles when he was changing clothes was somehow mechanical, after watching it, i expected the credits to be real post it notes as opposed to graphic ones.
Thanks to everyone who said all the great comments. This was my first script I wrote, and the first movie I directed. If you want to follow me, feel free to subscribe to this channel.
"ohhaha...here, let me get that for you" ? really? what a whore, acting is like......harsh. lighting is a little over the top too, unless your going for that "set / over head lightings/ interview on cam" look.
This was really charming.. and even though a little long foe YouTube attention span.. I stuck it thru to the end.. Quite good.. The acting was also up to par.. everything came together very well on this one. 5 stars. Were the paintings on the wall in the Apt done by one of the students involved in this.. They were very good as well. They also get 5 stars.
Very nice video! I enjoyed it. But, don't you think it gives across the wrong message? She didn't like him for who he was. . . She was actually in love with the post it notes.
I have to disagree. The notes were just giving him an idea how to behave, which he would have screwed up, if he would be alone. The notes were like a friend you asked how to behave before a date.. =)!
So I think she definately fell in love with him and not with the post it notes.
Not really. The notes were just giving him a little push in doing what he was afraid to do. In the end the guy doesn't need a note to act on his feelings - kind of a metaphor for not being scared to give something a try :)
i like David Brown's screenwriting
TheWoodySupreme 2 months ago
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TheCSNya 1 year ago
haha funny video! dont bail! xD
crazybrandon88 1 year ago
The story is good, but the acting really could be better.. it makes the movie seems a lot more ''made-by-a-amateur'' like..
S3llies 1 year ago
aww that was cute
kcaseyfrench 1 year ago
it was enyoyable, a good idea, keep up the good work, and getting better and better, greetings from far away
squall2231 2 years ago 5
if only this was real life
weirdoinchains 2 years ago
great idea!
Prolitiker 2 years ago
I love how he's looking for the notes at the end to tell him if he should kiss her or not.
ChantoriaDemona 2 years ago 6
well i guess ur right!
paulmc8623 2 years ago
great idea, but something about this bothered me...I can't quite place my finger on it...maybe it was the dialogue? kinda awkward
TheonenonlyRMD 2 years ago
hey dude they're just students not pro... EASY will u.
I think they need more encouragement than anything
paulmc8623 2 years ago
I'm not trying to be difficult. I did like the short and the concept. I was just giving constructive criticism.
TheonenonlyRMD 2 years ago
i thought the awkward added to it because thats what his type of character would do
mumsbread 2 years ago
yeah that's true. that's another way of looking at it
TheonenonlyRMD 2 years ago
very very nice,
i just felt actors moved a little slow, the edit between the two angles when he was changing clothes was somehow mechanical, after watching it, i expected the credits to be real post it notes as opposed to graphic ones.
yasserghoneim 2 years ago
that was a great short film begining was a little weird but it pulled through. And very cool concept.
Jellochevy 2 years ago
Thanks to everyone who said all the great comments. This was my first script I wrote, and the first movie I directed. If you want to follow me, feel free to subscribe to this channel.
: )
DerekHowe 2 years ago
Well done! I can't wait to see what I am going to act in!
damita1976 2 years ago
dude..that was cool...
hahaha..like it
flutter1224 2 years ago 2
terrible terrible flow but good concept.
real anti climax tho
TheDGreene 2 years ago
finishing is very surprising. good one.
konikula 2 years ago
The dialogue is really shoddy, sorry!
magoobaguy 2 years ago
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platformtwenty8 2 years ago
that was surprisingly good.
jakechapy 2 years ago
If you think this one is surprisingly good, you might like another one better: search for " dark comedy 10 AM ".
platformtwenty8 2 years ago
haha this was awesome. i liked the concept alot, but im gonna agree it could have been executed a bit better
blah97840 2 years ago
god the guy is really awkward
WoWanate 2 years ago
Ya, no kidding. I wonder if that was acting or if he's like that in real life.
Hmm... clicking on my username might give you the answer... ;-)
JoshRimer 2 years ago
coolest short in a long time :-D
FilmsWENT 2 years ago
I really did like the short. I was so-so about the ending, but over all, it's a good movie.
Keep up the good work, guys.
FrederickCross 2 years ago
"ohhaha...here, let me get that for you" ? really? what a whore, acting is like......harsh. lighting is a little over the top too, unless your going for that "set / over head lightings/ interview on cam" look.
sublimeboy245 2 years ago
I like the idea, but it was poorly executed.
cartoonguyBT 2 years ago
This is a great concept, but I agree with what was said before me - It could've been done a lot better.
onearmfrog 2 years ago
I'm at 5:53 and done. Too lame.
thebellrang 2 years ago 3
good call, i finished it....ending was a joke. cliche` to the max.
sublimeboy245 2 years ago
very cute!
calicatty123 2 years ago
funny stufff
playahata4realz 2 years ago
This was really charming.. and even though a little long foe YouTube attention span.. I stuck it thru to the end.. Quite good.. The acting was also up to par.. everything came together very well on this one. 5 stars. Were the paintings on the wall in the Apt done by one of the students involved in this.. They were very good as well. They also get 5 stars.
taddoo7 2 years ago 3
Me too. Lol, I really have bad attention span.
04ray25number2 2 years ago
i thought that was great! well done xD
yumyumjewellery 2 years ago
I guess the acting was fine, good direction of camera shots wud have made the difference
wissarb 2 years ago
Acting mad me throw up.
Although the video itself wasn't too bad.
effectsgroup 2 years ago
.... ahhh acting is not natural..
Wjboyz 2 years ago
poor acting
m1k30r 2 years ago
The script seems amazing, the acting could have been done a lot better.
It's was pretty good overall.
Gurdaur 2 years ago
Very nicely done :).
ZacharyReichenbach 2 years ago
OMG LOL
prettyrickymicky 2 years ago
it was cute but i didn't like the acting
kimiC8 2 years ago 3
I was waiting tor the postit to tell him to come out of the closet.
RDJim 2 years ago 9
Good idea. Horrible acting, bad music.
Andoreasu 2 years ago 2
Awesome story, awful acting (in my opinion)
XaviNL 2 years ago 3
he was still a looooooooooooooooooser
Aciel88 2 years ago 3
This short film made me very nervous but I liked that about it and enjoyed the overall experience. Thanks for sharing!
lloxton 2 years ago
haha that was cool
JuniorX 2 years ago
That was a good story, but bland >.>
PilpherStory 2 years ago
wow this must be what being shy is like
jaseth1337 2 years ago
too bland for me
very boring and monotone..
acting wasn't too good, music could've been better
better then what i could do though xD
Lardothefox 2 years ago
she has a BIG nose!
GuitarGhost123 2 years ago
he really likes to say "fuck"
Thewaterofthepool 2 years ago
what are you talking about? The word "fuck" is only mentioned a few times throughout the whole video.
xmoonrabbitx 2 years ago
Acting wasn't very organic.
ScottRoseVideo 2 years ago
cute
JudeKays 2 years ago
i usually like vfs films but this one to me was realllly weak! the guys is waaay too plain!
Shideh8 2 years ago
One word: SNES
BoostHack 2 years ago
ahah i thought that same thing
yumyumjewellery 2 years ago
very nice! =) post its... very original.
desireezy310 2 years ago
this guy reminds me of Rooney from "the doodlebops"
occocooccoco 2 years ago
lol, best video so far.
the sticky notes is a great idea for a change.
letsshoot 2 years ago
5/5
it's ur best video! :D
mita14 2 years ago
hes a douche
Kirklandsucks 2 years ago
I really liked this video. Haha all the sticky notes.
saruhara 2 years ago
the guy acted weird...nobody is like that
DeadInTheFace 2 years ago
this is very different! 2 thumbs up!
StudioTibet 2 years ago
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natenate88 2 years ago
hahahah that was great. "FUCK THE NOTES"
Jennamber15 2 years ago
That was awesome!
Yeah the acting could have been better but you know what, the story was so endearing I barely even noticed and the guy's nervous energy kinda worked.
Nice one :)
popaddict 2 years ago 3
Nice, interesting concept!
surendertorandomness 2 years ago
Fantastic video.
Great work.
DaaSpankNacide 2 years ago
I loved it! Awesome story! Made me laugh
kewi90 2 years ago
The actor sux.
erenNtR 2 years ago
No acting could have been a little better, but wonderful story line!
canadassweetie 2 years ago
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she is ugly. but good vid
philip711videomaster 2 years ago
I thought she was very elegant...
canadassweetie 2 years ago 3
she is ;-)
StudioTibet 2 years ago
that's awesome, great stuff :)
BPhelmet 2 years ago
I love the subtle gestures, like the patch of grass that separates them.
stenchinator 2 years ago 2
Fantastic!
CaptainRandomGirl 2 years ago
cool idea...the end rocks!
coconut994777 2 years ago
4:50 Super Nintendo!
Scorch033 2 years ago
genious
urbis92 2 years ago
I really liked this! I have to mention that the acting was horrible in my opinion, but I loved the concept.
shanbananx 2 years ago 3
that was cute :)
threepointonefour 2 years ago
cuuuute!
fantasyfight123 2 years ago
cute!
kiddychild101 2 years ago
That was great!
mynameisnotmaddie 2 years ago
that was such a lovely and cute story! it really make me laugh, I totally love it !!
romanticfox01 2 years ago
This was awsome, really creative :)
anpe91 2 years ago
This was very awesome!
If you would take the story line and make it longer and interesting, then you could make an oscar award winning movie out of it, I am sure...!!
NinLor 2 years ago
love the concept and d idea of post it
jaychou1592 2 years ago
absolutly awesome ;)
OneMoreStepCloser 2 years ago
haha!
not gonna lie it entertained me : D
jthree68 2 years ago
loved it! i have a crush on the guy now!~<3
otakuQT 2 years ago
Very nice video! I enjoyed it. But, don't you think it gives across the wrong message? She didn't like him for who he was. . . She was actually in love with the post it notes.
entish01 2 years ago
I have to disagree. The notes were just giving him an idea how to behave, which he would have screwed up, if he would be alone. The notes were like a friend you asked how to behave before a date.. =)!
So I think she definately fell in love with him and not with the post it notes.
NinLor 2 years ago 3
Not really. The notes were just giving him a little push in doing what he was afraid to do. In the end the guy doesn't need a note to act on his feelings - kind of a metaphor for not being scared to give something a try :)
popaddict 2 years ago 3
soooo true gud comment
02quik 2 years ago
aw cute story LOL
&& the movie reminded me of one of those 90's shows or something... I don't know how to explain it but ya :)
RUBYxx12 2 years ago
it seems like a kiddish version of eagle eye.
Palmcrusher 2 years ago
THAT WAS GREAT, loved it!!!
demetry13 2 years ago
that was really good. :)
woahhhhitslisa1 2 years ago
Great film! I loved it. :D
darkpivotpro 2 years ago
good job
kidflip12017 2 years ago
brilliant, well done, loved it
sweetjemimer 2 years ago
wow this is awesome 5 stars
DigitalPhantomFX 2 years ago
holy crap the main guy looks and talks and acts the same way when he talk like this guy i know lol
deathscore 2 years ago