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  • i like David Brown's screenwriting

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  • haha funny video! dont bail! xD

  • The story is good, but the acting really could be better.. it makes the movie seems a lot more ''made-by-a-amateur'' like..

  • aww that was cute

  • it was enyoyable, a good idea, keep up the good work, and getting better and better, greetings from far away

  • if only this was real life

  • great idea!

  • I love how he's looking for the notes at the end to tell him if he should kiss her or not.

  • well i guess ur right!

  • great idea, but something about this bothered me...I can't quite place my finger on it...maybe it was the dialogue? kinda awkward

  • hey dude they're just students not pro... EASY will u.

    I think they need more encouragement than anything

  • I'm not trying to be difficult. I did like the short and the concept. I was just giving constructive criticism.

  • i thought the awkward added to it because thats what his type of character would do

  • yeah that's true. that's another way of looking at it

  • very very nice,

    i just felt actors moved a little slow, the edit between the two angles when he was changing clothes was somehow mechanical, after watching it, i expected the credits to be real post it notes as opposed to graphic ones.

  • that was a great short film begining was a little weird but it pulled through. And very cool concept.

  • Thanks to everyone who said all the great comments. This was my first script I wrote, and the first movie I directed. If you want to follow me, feel free to subscribe to this channel.

    : )

  • Well done! I can't wait to see what I am going to act in!

  • dude..that was cool...

    hahaha..like it

  • terrible terrible flow but good concept.

    real anti climax tho

  • finishing is very surprising. good one.

  • The dialogue is really shoddy, sorry!

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  • that was surprisingly good.

  • If you think this one is surprisingly good, you might like another one better: search for " dark comedy 10 AM ".

  • haha this was awesome. i liked the concept alot, but im gonna agree it could have been executed a bit better

  • god the guy is really awkward

  • Ya, no kidding. I wonder if that was acting or if he's like that in real life.

    Hmm... clicking on my username might give you the answer... ;-)

  • coolest short in a long time :-D

  • I really did like the short. I was so-so about the ending, but over all, it's a good movie.

    Keep up the good work, guys.

  • "ohhaha...here, let me get that for you" ? really? what a whore, acting is like......harsh. lighting is a little over the top too, unless your going for that "set / over head lightings/ interview on cam" look.

  • I like the idea, but it was poorly executed.

  • This is a great concept, but I agree with what was said before me - It could've been done a lot better.

  • I'm at 5:53 and done. Too lame.

  • good call, i finished it....ending was a joke. cliche` to the max.

  • very cute!

  • funny stufff

  • This was really charming.. and even though a little long foe YouTube attention span.. I stuck it thru to the end.. Quite good.. The acting was also up to par.. everything came together very well on this one. 5 stars. Were the paintings on the wall in the Apt done by one of the students involved in this.. They were very good as well. They also get 5 stars.

  • Me too. Lol, I really have bad attention span.

  • i thought that was great! well done xD

  • I guess the acting was fine, good direction of camera shots wud have made the difference

  • Acting mad me throw up.

    Although the video itself wasn't too bad.

  • .... ahhh acting is not natural..

  • poor acting

  • The script seems amazing, the acting could have been done a lot better.

    It's was pretty good overall.

  • Very nicely done :).

  • OMG LOL

  • it was cute but i didn't like the acting

  • I was waiting tor the postit to tell him to come out of the closet.

  • Good idea. Horrible acting, bad music.

  • Awesome story, awful acting (in my opinion)

  • he was still a looooooooooooooooooser

  • This short film made me very nervous but I liked that about it and enjoyed the overall experience. Thanks for sharing!

  • haha that was cool

  • That was a good story, but bland >.>

  • wow this must be what being shy is like

  • too bland for me

    very boring and monotone..

    acting wasn't too good, music could've been better

    better then what i could do though xD

  • she has a BIG nose!

  • he really likes to say "fuck"

  • what are you talking about? The word "fuck" is only mentioned a few times throughout the whole video.

  • Acting wasn't very organic.

  • cute

  • i usually like vfs films but this one to me was realllly weak! the guys is waaay too plain!

  • One word: SNES

  • ahah i thought that same thing

  • very nice! =) post its... very original.

  • this guy reminds me of Rooney from "the doodlebops"

  • lol, best video so far.

    the sticky notes is a great idea for a change.

  • 5/5

    it's ur best video! :D

  • hes a douche

  • I really liked this video. Haha all the sticky notes.

  • the guy acted weird...nobody is like that

  • this is very different! 2 thumbs up!

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  • hahahah that was great. "FUCK THE NOTES"

  • That was awesome!

    Yeah the acting could have been better but you know what, the story was so endearing I barely even noticed and the guy's nervous energy kinda worked.

    Nice one :)

  • Nice, interesting concept!

  • Fantastic video.

    Great work.

  • I loved it! Awesome story! Made me laugh

  • The actor sux.

  • No acting could have been a little better, but wonderful story line!

  • I thought she was very elegant...

  • she is ;-)

  • that's awesome, great stuff :)

  • I love the subtle gestures, like the patch of grass that separates them.

  • Fantastic!

  • cool idea...the end rocks!

  • 4:50 Super Nintendo!

  • genious

  • I really liked this! I have to mention that the acting was horrible in my opinion, but I loved the concept.

  • that was cute :)

  • cuuuute!

  • cute!

  • That was great!

  • that was such a lovely and cute story! it really make me laugh, I totally love it !!

  • This was awsome, really creative :)

  • This was very awesome!

    If you would take the story line and make it longer and interesting, then you could make an oscar award winning movie out of it, I am sure...!!

  • love the concept and d idea of post it

  • absolutly awesome ;)

  • haha!

    not gonna lie it entertained me : D

  • loved it! i have a crush on the guy now!~<3

  • Very nice video! I enjoyed it. But, don't you think it gives across the wrong message? She didn't like him for who he was. . . She was actually in love with the post it notes.

  • I have to disagree. The notes were just giving him an idea how to behave, which he would have screwed up, if he would be alone. The notes were like a friend you asked how to behave before a date.. =)!

    So I think she definately fell in love with him and not with the post it notes.

  • Not really. The notes were just giving him a little push in doing what he was afraid to do. In the end the guy doesn't need a note to act on his feelings - kind of a metaphor for not being scared to give something a try :)

  • soooo true gud comment

  • aw cute story LOL

    && the movie reminded me of one of those 90's shows or something... I don't know how to explain it but ya :)

  • it seems like a kiddish version of eagle eye.

  • THAT WAS GREAT, loved it!!!

  • that was really good. :)

  • Great film! I loved it. :D

  • good job

  • brilliant, well done, loved it

  • wow this is awesome 5 stars

  • holy crap the main guy looks and talks and acts the same way when he talk like this guy i know lol

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