Kind of unsteady and bland. Use more emotion and slower a bit to keep it steady. Otherwise, good, i guess
jessiepink8 8 months ago
Get more emotional, this is an emotional piece. Notes are one thing but the whole dynamics deal is just as important. And don't speed up at the end. it ruins it.
Keep up the good work!
PianoFreeak24 1 year ago
Good job! I'd say you got a good career ahead of you! ^.^
TheWulfMaster 1 year ago
Kind of unsteady and bland. Use more emotion and slower a bit to keep it steady. Otherwise, good, i guess
jessiepink8 8 months ago
Get more emotional, this is an emotional piece. Notes are one thing but the whole dynamics deal is just as important. And don't speed up at the end. it ruins it.
Keep up the good work!
PianoFreeak24 1 year ago
Good job! I'd say you got a good career ahead of you! ^.^
TheWulfMaster 1 year ago