hey Doug, you sound great and so does your new equipment. :)
but i wanted to go just a step further and give you a little constructive criticism, take it any way you like. the riff is very repetitive (but its a neat riff, don't get me wrong). even if you don't wish to use the more conventional verse/chorus(bridge) method of song-writing... perhaps you could switch it up a little and break from the annoyingly repetitive (neat) riff once in a while? :) good work.
@Creamella I don't mind constructive criticism at all! I agree that the chords are repetitive and would've benefited from some variety. I actually did use the traditional verse/chorus/bridge method for this song, but that probably gets a little lost because of the repetition.
The main goal of this song for me was really just an exercise in writing a song in a genre outside of my comfort zone. I was trying to write with an up-beat hopeful music style. To write a song that would make me smile.
I'm using an epiphone les paul that I've replaced the electronics in with Seymour Duncan pickups. And yes I will probably post some more Cash before too long. Thanks for the comments!
you should make us be able to download this its amazing
thecolemantv 6 months ago
hey Doug, you sound great and so does your new equipment. :)
but i wanted to go just a step further and give you a little constructive criticism, take it any way you like. the riff is very repetitive (but its a neat riff, don't get me wrong). even if you don't wish to use the more conventional verse/chorus(bridge) method of song-writing... perhaps you could switch it up a little and break from the annoyingly repetitive (neat) riff once in a while? :) good work.
Creamella 1 year ago
@Creamella I don't mind constructive criticism at all! I agree that the chords are repetitive and would've benefited from some variety. I actually did use the traditional verse/chorus/bridge method for this song, but that probably gets a little lost because of the repetition.
The main goal of this song for me was really just an exercise in writing a song in a genre outside of my comfort zone. I was trying to write with an up-beat hopeful music style. To write a song that would make me smile.
hotbot86 1 year ago
I like it man. Congratulations, you earned a comment from the great QuotidianHegemony.
QuotidianHegemony 1 year ago
love that rhythm!
theamazingsupergirl 1 year ago
oh yeah, i love your sound!
mommaLaughing 2 years ago
About as decent as any act you'd find in a pub.
se7en1976 2 years ago
smile a bit when your singin :) wikid song
paulmccarthy1989 2 years ago
i really like your style. i'd like to hear you do a sublime cover.
777hectorable 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment. I love sublime, I may have to put up a sublime some some time.
hotbot86 2 years ago
like it, really nice :)
missfits0602 2 years ago
that was fucking sick
audtr 2 years ago
Amazing! you have future :D
upacosmo69 2 years ago
good lyrics great rhythm awesome SONG
danekoolaid 2 years ago
Very good man!!!
cliko67 2 years ago
Hey, nice original, I like the guitar lick you have there!
serenataorg 2 years ago
Thanks, glad you like it :)
hotbot86 2 years ago
hi what guitar is that and r u going to be singing any more johnny cash songs good singing n guitar playin
bobb12381 2 years ago
I'm using an epiphone les paul that I've replaced the electronics in with Seymour Duncan pickups. And yes I will probably post some more Cash before too long. Thanks for the comments!
hotbot86 2 years ago