Scars on my arms, by declan storey, ( original),

[Yummyoreoss]

this is so catchy! lyrics are really giiid! :)

[declanacdc]

@Yummyoreoss thank you so much really appreciate it :D

[kapok35]

very cool ^^

[declanacdc]

@kapok35 thank you very much :D

[tmf223]

Good job buddy!

[declanacdc]

@tmf223  thanks alot m8

[notsuchaclevername11]

very good.

[declanacdc]

@notsuchaclevername11 hey thanks alot for checking out my video

[declanacdc]

@Tamiachan23 thank you for checking out my song, this really means alot to me , :)

[GrayTrousers]

ace job m8... i could relly imagin seein this at a gig... :D keep em commin

[declanacdc]

@GrayTrousers thank you very , much, and love the comment :D

[narut13]

Sounds good man.

[declanacdc]

@narut13 thanks for checking out this

[MrPentatonicablues]

Amazing*****

[declanacdc]

@MrPentatonicablues thanks alot

[xAmyMusic]

I love it! gaaah, you are so amazingly talented. I wrote a song a few days ago too, maybe you could check it out? :D

[declanacdc]

@xAmyMusic thank you so much for this brillant brillant, yea i definly check it out now

[chusma0]

Well done for writing and then showing your own song! It takes a lot of courage!!

Bravo!

Chloe :)

[declanacdc]

@chusma0 hey, thank you for the comment, yea it does take alot of courage, but i don't mind people watching my videos , it is just when there in the same room i don't like it :L

[6billiondeaths]

alrite again mate,

agan the playing is good as is the singing. In terms of arrangement and tried an change it up for the chorus a wee bit - perhaps using the finger-picked barre chords you showed at the end of the video as the chorus melody?

lyrically it could be polished up more but is pretty decent where it is.

you got a Maroon 5/The Kooks quality going man, i like hearing new stuff man to keep it up eh

[6billiondeaths]

@6billiondeaths in terms of arrangement i would try an change it up for the chorus a wee bit*

[declanacdc]

@6billiondeaths , thanks alot again , for the feedback, yea i never thought of that, i did cahnge the chorus from , d,f,c to d7, f,c, but i will definly try out the barchords on it,

to me this is a good song,

yea thanks alot, they are great bands , but i wouldn't be in2 them, but still , really apreciaated

[6billiondeaths]

@declanacdc this is a good song lad you have a lot you can work with here - if you do a kind of updated version let me know so i can have a listen eh,

take care

[declanacdc]

@6billiondeaths yea , will do , cheers, cya

[declanacdc]

@Hippie1944 thank you

[chrisbryantguitar]

Nice one bro!!! Also liked the stuff you showed us at the end of the video...the barre chord version was SICK! Keep it up man...you are going places.

[declanacdc]

@chrisbryantguitar hey, man , thanks alot for such agreat comment,

i checked out your new original:)

[JHDELIVERY22]

Love it, quality song :)

[declanacdc]

@JHDELIVERY22 thanks alot for the brill comment,