Editing needs to be tweaked, trim the fat. Fair effort. Looks like you spent more time on effects than writing a short and 'funny' piece though.
thetrailertrash 3 years ago
A bit too much gate weave, maybe? It was really noticeable on the intertitles, and I think achieved more than the desired effect. Still, very nice.
mooboo2too 5 years ago
Editing needs to be tweaked, trim the fat. Fair effort. Looks like you spent more time on effects than writing a short and 'funny' piece though.
thetrailertrash 3 years ago
A bit too much gate weave, maybe? It was really noticeable on the intertitles, and I think achieved more than the desired effect. Still, very nice.
mooboo2too 5 years ago