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  • It's good but maybe you should add maybe some back hand springs :)

  • good but i feel like your running around a lot if your using that for sytycd then you need to put in all your tricks in the begin inning or they could stop you

  • this was 4 years ago.. she cant work on shit. its already done hahahha

  • what is this song called?

  • awesome! lol might i just say i really like your pireouettes. i cant do fuettes. i always suck at those an who knows why lol but oyur really good

  • WOW! Amazing! I wish I could dance like that!

    

  • You are a great dancer, but as a piece I didn't much care for it. It seemed like filler steps connecting to big jumps or turns, but no real dance movement or story telling. Still, wish you all the best and I'm sure you have a great dance career ahead of you!

  • you can do all the moves, get inspiration and some more emotion, not just in your face but in your moves too.

  • your technique and tricks are great! just work on your style.

  • your really good a bit wobbly and maybe she dosent want to put up her hair a lot of dancers dont do that because they feel in control!

  • does anyone know the song to this?

  • @misstaylee1 It's "Please Forgive Me" by David Gray :)

  • You're compensating for your lack of power when you come to the end or your turns that you're bouncing. Work on that.

  • Put your hair up. Please!

  • i think you are a incredible dancer and dont listen to what others think i know i cant do that!! You did awsome and i hope you got the part. oh and whats that little red smudge on the like bar??? lolz

  • Quel est le titre de la chanson ?

  • did you make it? you did a wonderful job dancing regardless of what people say.

  • WEEEEEEEEEEEE

  • I don't think the song went well with the movements.

  • all i see is hair. if you actually are into the music and being expressive... maybe it is hidden under that hair. you are a good dancer... maybe a strong emotional lyrical piece would be a better choice.... just make sure that hair isn't in the way :P

  • did she make it???

  • no offense, ur not getting on the show with that audition

  • just one word: WOW! I am impressed :)

  • It's a lovely dance, but please pull your hair back. It's distracting from your performance. Look professional when you "try out".  That will also aid for any auditions. Good luck!

  • how far did you make it?

  • Really nice ! Whats the song???

  • what is SYTYCD?

  • @dancedanceled so you think you can dance

  • @xdancergirlx01 oh thanx i thought it was a studio or something

  • @dancedanceled So You Think You Can Dance

  • you look like you have so much fun

    :D

  • u go girl but work on the najenshys

  • @Splat771 what is a najenshy??

  • @Splat771 whats najenshys?

  • also dont put turns in second....there is too much turning, and not enough of original choreography. Too many turns comes across as too competitiony. You have great technique though! but the moves are very common....try and come up with something unique...something that will make you stand out :) good luck!

  • u are beautiful to watch. great dancer

  • smoother transitions, more abandon with your back, tighter technique on your turns

  • Your wobbling on Your turns, all in all it was very good, but we need to spend more time on your emotion. You don't look like your enjoying yourself!!!!! Put more energy into everything you do. U look like your dancing half heartedly!!! Move your Ass! Your leap was amazing (= I am saying your an amazing dancer, but u aren't

    quite ready for SYTYCD!!!!

  • Your a great mover but you have no connection to the song. IT does not come from anywhere!

  • YE Need to Show a LOT more Passsssion but U weree fukin great.

  • It's got lots of personality, i'd add a couple more leaps and jumps though. haha

  • this is really cool!! for the turns with arms in 1st, it looks like you are leaning a bit to the leg that is up, and when your arms are in high 5th, they are a bit too far behind you-- if you can see your hand by looking up with just your eyes (not your head) they are in the right position (I teach ballet and EVERYONE has these problems, including myself-- turns are DIFFICULT) Really cool piece though-- your extensions look gorgeous!! :)

  • @dollyfan08 you probably dont even know HOW to dance sweetheart...

  • geez control your thumbs. esp when u turn. hamburger hands

  • For this song put a little more power into your Leap instead of the prep it would make your leap look amazing not just good.

  • its good i liked it but its just you need more work

  • Not quite good enuf to make the show but work work work until you are.

  • it was good. but not everything was fluid with it. it felt like you pieced together several different moves. and those parts are strong and good, but the each move doesnt transition into the next as fluid as it could. Maybe a little choppy you could say. but you did well. just dont let the nerves to get you. i could feel how anxious you were. :)

  • if you're auditioning for sytycd... then learn how to turn

  • @TDWgirl6 and you need to learn how to spot talent because she has ALLOT of talent!!!

  • @TDWgirl6 Whoa. This is NOT constructive critism. This is you just being absolutely rude. Her turns were perfectly fine for a dancer who is probably not as powerful in turns. For all we know she could be fabulous at performing and leaping. Sometimes turns aren't peoples forte. Please learn how to criticize PROPERLY.

  • @LovelyPrincessCloud OH thanks mom- i didn't promise id be nice.. at least i am being honest

  • @TDWgirl6 First off, I'm not your mom. I don't want to be your mom. And I have no inclination of trying to be your mother. But when it comes to critiques, you don't need to be blatantly rude like you just were. So please, instead of pulling the "at least I'm being honest" card, (and believe me, I'm always honest), pull another excuse out of your butt or get nicer. Nobody wants to take criticism from a bitch.

  • @LovelyPrincessCloud impeccable vocabulary, but if you really have no 'inclination' to be my mother than stop riding my ass like a mom would. I am sharing my opinion, i wasn't even being BLATANTLY rude, i simply informed her that I have had a lot of friends go through the SYTYCD process and turns are a huge contributing factor. if i was posting my SYTYCD audition on youtube it would be flawless and i assume everyone else has the same take on the situation

  • @LovelyPrincessCloud so when she falls out of a turn i assume she can't do one. and btw.. nice videos i can see you're a REALLY cool kid.. lames ass

  • @TDWgirl6 Actually, what you said was, "If you're going to audition for SYTYCD...learn how to turn." And now, when she falls out of a turn, that doesn't mean you should automatically assume she can't turn. That's just an idiotic point. As for my impeccable vocabulary, I have the grammer to back it, kid. And as for my videos, they have nothing to do with our argument. I make them for my friends and if I wanted to post MY dance videos, I would. :) No one's perfect, biotch.

  • well i liked my self 

    but do tie your hair back its a little distracting and not safe

  • You are so graceful... I really rather love this clip :)

  • good... fell out of a triple though...

  • I like

  • Y does she have 2 tie her hair back

  • @anlgirl101 because it makes it look unnecessarily disorganized when her hair is whipping around every where, and it can whip you in the face, there are certain dances where it is fine to have your hair down, but this is not one of them

  • The song is called Lightning Idk who sings it.. My officer's from drill team did a dance to this my sophomore year it was to die for.. This routine was awesome but next time.. Fix your hair!! We want to see your face when you dance!!

  • tie your hair back!!!!!!!!!!!

  • did you go to sytycd? :o

  • You did good. But, you should definitely work on your pirouettes and turns because you were wobbling.

  • @kookiez555 That's what I was thinking, they wobbled and the judges will notice that and cut you.

  • @kookiez555 probably because her hair's in her face. pin that shit back. it's distracting!

  • sorry for pointing out the obvious, but your hair was really distracting and took the attention away from your amazing dancing

  • I love the way you dance, the song is adapt to you

    What's the name of the song?

  • you've made it to vegas congratzzz lol!

  • Nooo! it is b-e-a-u-tifull... Love your styl

  • I agree with everyone else about why you should tie your hair back...but! if you're like me--you like the movement of your hair when you dance. So! here's a possible solution--when you dance part your hair and wear it half up/half down (just to keep your bangs out of your face). anyway nice routine

  • the dance would have been alot better if your hair was pulled away from your face. it took away from your dancing but otherwise amazing!

  • Your so good. I think theres a lot you could still learn though. I felt like you lost your center a bit in a few places which, for a dancer, is not good. You should also work on stage presence and putting an emotion behind your fance and really show it because if it was there i didnt see it. Pin your bangs back at least, if not all your hair so it doesnt look like your hiding behind it. Keep dancing!<3

    --A fellow Dancer

  • U should go and try out

  • yeah you're a super incredible dancer, but honestly. I felt nothing watching you dance...

  • @headautomatica11 ... i felt a chubby coming on, shes hot.. i dont know shit about dance though

  • @headautomatica11 I think maybe a little better quality and less hair in the face would help her! :) if you could see her face expressions it might help :)

  • so wat happened did you make it???

  • man!!!!! ur pirouettes!!! they r soooo amazin !! plz teach me!! :D

  • i love this song! (: great job by the way! and as for everyone else, lose hair gives dynamic to the routine!

  • is this ballet ?

    

  • you desperately need to pin your hair back somewhat.. maybe not in a ponytail, but get it out of your face.. also, work on your core muscles... i noticed you didn't have complete control in your leaps and pirouettes.. it's all about your core muscles.. if you dont have a strong core, then you cant be in control of your dancing

  • i liked her hair going every where......

  • this is REALLY GOOD!!!!!!! but don tie your hair up all the way.... just out of your eyes!

  • I thought it was amazing!! Just a tiny tiny bit more control though (:

  • great routine, no confidence at all tho. MORE CONFIDENCE GIRL!!!

  • I really hope she got in! I love the way she does turns & that was a great combo (:

  • very good girl ...

  • did the audition turn out?

  • you alost hit the table

  • @starlight8761

    but she didnt

  • beautiful(: i love this dance! good job!

  • great on pirouettes on kicks! -fellow dancer

  • as a fellow dance i must say good job!..but i notices that you stumbled a little on your turns

  • Your lines are beautiful :)

  • AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • oooooh i love that last jump :D

  • Great turns!

  • i love it!!!! did u try out this year ?????

  • This was AMAZING!!

  • very goood... !

  • INCREDIBLE, your pirouettes and tilt jump were outstanding!

  • hwo far did you make it?

  • great job!

    : )

  • that.... was... AWESOME!!!!! your jump at :54 is that called anything in particular i LOVED it

  • Yes, please answer us! Your audition tape looked beautiful, how far did you make it through sytycd? :)

  • i wish it was longer! i didn't want to stop watching!

  • could someone please tell me what the song is ?!

  • @braceleTxD

     David Gray - Please Forgive Me

  • @cmanza1 thanks alot !

  • wunderbar! wirklich!

  • Exelent performance, the song is???

  • where can we see some more viedo of you dancing?

  • Aamazing you are so GOOOODD !!

  • this goes surprisingly good with "King Astma - Invaderz" that is playing in winamp while i watch this :]

  • this is really good!

  • woow. your really good. whats the song called that yur dancing to?

  • Amazingggg!

  • cool =)

  • do you compete because your good ?

  • song?

  • They cut half of the people before they even enter the building just based off of what you look like. 

  • Nice dancing. Also wonderful LEGS! More women should have calves like that!

  • You are a beautiful dancer. We need to see your face though, and don't hop those turns.

  • if you diddnt make it what chance do we have

  • @givemethatefron SYTYCD is so you think you can dance it is a dancing show on Fox i think...?

  • You're soooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! YOURE GOING TO MAKE IT.

  • You're so good! What is SYTYCD?

  • if you didnt make it...i have no chance

  • How the hell didnt you make it.?!

  • Beautiful extensions Bravisimo ^_^

  • Really good, a lot of good dynamics and strong technique but for the love of god PLEASE TIE YOUR HAIR UP!!!!!

  • damn you're amazing!

  • your technique and turns are great. however, if you danced with your hair up your spotting for turns would be much easier.

  • really good :D

  • very good but i felt like it was mostly just technique, leaps, and turns.

  • It's amazing!!!

  • i would vote for you!

    well done

    :)

  • How farr did you get??

  • ur a lot better than me but im not suorised u didnt make it. there isnt something speical about u. no emotion and lots of similar choreography. not to be mean at all but i didnt love it. but u have WONDERFUL technique and if u keep trying ur going to be amazing. like i said ur WAYYYYYYY better than me so i probably shouldnt b talking but even look at my videos ur better lol. look at dear john or jar of hearts or angels on the moon. but u have really great potential .keep it up

  • how did you not win?

  • you should def try out again ur awesome!

  • awesome choreography where is the dancing?

  • You should try out again

  • you are a beautiful dancer! 

  • mpravo afrotitakiiiiii dwse ston lao sou 8eama :)

  • damn!!! work it girl!!

  • i looove it <3

  • tie your hair back you can't even see your eyes

  • @xthatsHOWitGOESx It's called feeling... letting you hair flow just completes the concept of Passion...

  • did you make it?

  • wow!!! i'm super duper impressed. amazing job girl!!!

  • did you try out?? you def. should have gone far! you're awesome.

  • beautiful!! 

  • gorgeous :)

  • very pretty dancer, dont drop your releve while you turn though

  • wowza!

  • beautiful tilt!!

  • pretty sure u can dance. don't you dare give up!

  • you're a bit too stiff, be a bit more graceful and let yourself go. work on your pirouettes a bit more. your technique, overall, is impressive though!

    i hope over the past two years, you've improved!

  • well done I enjoyed your interesting jump about 0:53 ...well done. keep dancing.

  • You are a great, powerful, graceful dancer! :)

  • Rushing the movements just a little bit. But part from that. your wonderful to watch :)

  • i think that your spins need more control. and i think that instead of rushing your movements you can kinda relate more to the dance,

    but you have beautiful jumps !

  • what song is this?

  • Your sexy. U can dance. I like it

  • That's really good but it didn't fit the music I don't think...

  • heyy i can do that to im in dance for imagine dance and i do lyrical

  • Your really good :D

  • get your hair out of your god damn face!

  • @jessicaBARBIEDOLL lol ikr it was bugging me too!!