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From: pangamoon
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  • ok, first of all, actresses r girls

  • First off, what the hell are you doing posting a story on youtube? Second, learn how to write. As a writer myself, you make me sick to my stomach. I hope this is fictional, because it reminds me of all the stuck up bitches I had to deal with in school who thought they were smart and funny. There is nothing romantic about teen pregnancy and pedophilia. You make Steven King look like H.P. Lovecraft, you ignorant bitch. Good luck figuring that reference out. Now excuse me, I am going to go puke.

  • In 500 characters I cannot even begin to respond to this overwhelming flood of hypocrisy and idiocy. First off, this is YouTube for Christ's sake. Don't post a 25 second video of some ugly jackass' face and then include what is perhaps the worst written story ever written as a description. Seriously, have you EVER had a shred of education? You do not capitalize words in a sentence at random and everyone calling you a good writer should be executed. Why this was recommended to me I'll never know.

  • AWESOME!

  • lol you posted this like 2 weeks ago so i'm late! well not really becasue i'm not subbed but i'm totally subbing now! lol this story is so interesting its so different i'm totally reaeding on!!

    i LOVE it!!!

  • my history teacher once said she dated a guy named max burger so the last name does exist and i feel sorry for max

  • oh mah gawd.. AWESOME! your an amazing writer! XD can't wait for the next one!

  • awesome post next one soon pwease thnx PEACE LOVE JB

  • next one please loved it

  • awesome!!! plz post the next one?????

  • awesomeeee!

  • omg, it was amazing. i can tel im going to LOVe thisss. [[[:

  • ur first episode was amazing!! ahh it was nick jonas staring at her!! I wish he wasn't a drinker or smoker thoughh.

  • luved the first

    eppi...!!!

    cant wait for more..!!!

  • Amazing!

  • Great first episode :)

    Can't wait for the next one =D

  • love it make the next one pleaseee

  • Lol I LOVE Twilight I'm rereading the series lol! POST NOW IT ROCKS!

    xoxoDanitichenor97xoxo

  • love it!!!

    is the next one out yet?!

  • I loved it. (:

    It was an incredible first episodee. (:

    Can't wait for thee next onee.

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