If I "WERE" a love poet....... WERE WERE WERE..... not WAS. If I WERE a poet, I'd make sure I am a student of my native language, first....... But, major respect. I was engaged in this performance. But you can add to your credibility and use proper English. Or not........ because you're not a love poet.
@CarlRoeMusic Actually "If I were" is considered more formal but both are correct. It's the subjunctive mood; but you can ask a language professor for more explanation
It's difficult writting a Love poem without sounding cliche. And I believe this is the first slam poem I have every heard that did it. Excluding Buddy Wakefleild "Flockprinter".
@natopotato22 Because statistically interracial couples are uncommon. Or at least less common then same race couples. I was pointing out the impact the poem had on me.
damn dude. i wish i had a quarter of your skill, talent, and creativity with words. i actually got a lil jealous there. more than a lil. i hope you dont ever set your sights on my girl.
that one person who disliked this was too amazed by his words, and was put into shock to find out that he wasen't a love poet & hit dislike by mistake.
"I know this sounds strange, but every now and den, i pray to god dat he turned u back into one of my ribs just so i never had to spend an entire day without u."
I saw this cat at the Air Lounge in Oakland, ca. He was incredible. Hell, I bought one of his cd's. As a spoken word artist myself, I was inspired by his work and delivery.
I saw this cat at the Air Lounge in Oakland, ca. He was incredible. Hell, I bought one of his cd's. As a spoken word artist myself, I was inspired by his work and delivery.
i heard him perform this poem live! it was amazing. i think somethign new grew inside me, and his words really touched me. && i'd love to hear his voice everyday!!
BIG PROPS!!
calbonner 2 weeks ago
Ahhh #POETRY
superwoman1204 2 months ago
I watch this every time I wanna feel loved lol.
czarinafranco 3 months ago
Uhm this made me cry..? Lmao so sweet(:
loveefaithh 3 months ago
Amalia te quiere squishy.
gueritaisabel1 3 months ago
If I "WERE" a love poet....... WERE WERE WERE..... not WAS. If I WERE a poet, I'd make sure I am a student of my native language, first....... But, major respect. I was engaged in this performance. But you can add to your credibility and use proper English. Or not........ because you're not a love poet.
CarlRoeMusic 4 months ago
@CarlRoeMusic Actually "If I were" is considered more formal but both are correct. It's the subjunctive mood; but you can ask a language professor for more explanation
annamariafr 3 months ago
This is just something deep.. a woman can understand it, a man can speak it only if the have the knowledge to... This is a love poem..
I will wait for you
SuperForeverBlessed 5 months ago
I wish you were a love poet!!! Oh god knows
SuperForeverBlessed 5 months ago
4 people are love poets
7AiRBaLLiN7 6 months ago 4
wow.
charcharpants 6 months ago
God Damn I Wish He Was A Love Poet :)
SkreEm0o21 7 months ago
Vom
SmellyBellyification 8 months ago
All I can say is...YESSS!!!
FabJanie 8 months ago
If someone proposed to me like this, DONE! <3
creole2kiss 8 months ago 2
This is so beautifuul... he must get so many women
stepha1231 9 months ago
@stepha1231 Women can't handle men of poetry
omegarune2 8 months ago
This MAN!!!! Ahhhhhh Amazing :)
ExquisiteBWoods 9 months ago
This MAN!!!! Ahhhhhhhh Amazing :)
ExquisiteBWoods 9 months ago
Fuck, man. That sounds like it's about love. I'm jealous.
standtogether11 9 months ago
wow! that was breath taking.
whooopwoo0p 10 months ago 3
i raped the reply button LOLS !
SymmerBreeze 10 months ago
i am going to marry him < 3
QueenBee2314 10 months ago 3
dam..this is beautiful.
Rikaami1 10 months ago
I love this guy lol...he's awesome!
simplydeliteful10 11 months ago
How is this not corny... it's... it's not corny for some reason.
manvsfur0n 11 months ago 2
No doubt that he got laid after this performance
thedizah 11 months ago
Man you feel the ove rolling there the words
SymmerBreeze 11 months ago
He has a style that reminds me of Rives.
dylanmcbamfness 1 year ago
It's difficult writting a Love poem without sounding cliche. And I believe this is the first slam poem I have every heard that did it. Excluding Buddy Wakefleild "Flockprinter".
Autumnmechanics 1 year ago 3
"i pray to God he turns you back in to one of my ribs just so that i wouldnt have to spend a whole day without you" ... nice
truinred 1 year ago 20
dude this is so amazing, i am getting goose bumps!
yupitsme09 1 year ago
I just didn't want it to end! lol
ABKpride 1 year ago
:D dude I cant stop smiling :D I feel u brother :D speak to the heart
pkwarrior68 1 year ago
Oh my gosh I'm sitting here blushin like he's talking to me
kacidp 1 year ago
I actually wanted to clap when it was over
oinfinityyy 1 year ago
@oinfinityyy i did clap XD
Lordman138 1 year ago
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@oinfinityyy i did clap XD
Lordman138 1 year ago
@oinfinityyy i clapped lol
yupitsme09 1 year ago
DAMN SON.
aydapadi 1 year ago
SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK!!!!!
JustKauze 1 year ago 5
He gives me chills !
DansaMansa 1 year ago
i was listening and watching the video get closer to the end of the video! and mt head was like "Ahhhhhhh, don't end!"
what a poem. i'm glad he's not a love poet because it makes little treats like this even more special!
lookwotisaid 1 year ago
“Let’s put it like this: I wanna be your ex-boyfriend’s stuntman. I wanna do everything that he never had the courage to do like trust you. "
fucking beautiful !!
the24thuke 1 year ago 30
@the24thuke "Honestly, when I kiss your lips. I can taste the next 60 years of my life." <3 omg. I died at that part!
LionDomoRaawrs 1 year ago 5
@LionDomoRaawrs hahah he is epic .
the24thuke 1 year ago
" And every time our lips touched, I could taste the next sixty years of our lives..
SinglowsweetSunny 1 year ago
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Mzme23 1 year ago
IWIPS WORLD CHAMPP!! WHOOT!
dulcecita216 1 year ago
i looooove this poem!!!
Dezboobaby 1 year ago
very interesting article... but not as cool as weedyelp.com... marijuana dispensary finder lolol
ilbcnya99 1 year ago
he's got great timing
soupinabox 1 year ago
i wonder who he fell for
poet1111 1 year ago
OH MY GOD. *Drool* HE IS AMAZING!!!!!
domovoi14 1 year ago
I listen to this when I'm down... What an incredible poem. :)
ViolaFedora 1 year ago
four sad people have never been in love...
kissingandtelling 1 year ago
can i marry him? :)
44sabsi 1 year ago
It is good but I am wondering if he had a lot of influence from Rives another amazing poet that did an amazing piece "If I controlled the internet."
Thaxorin 1 year ago
Damn. I'm a straight white male, and EVEN I just fell in love with him. XD
IronSideZer0 1 year ago
@IronSideZer0 Why does it make a difference if you're white or not?
natopotato22 1 year ago
@natopotato22 Because statistically interracial couples are uncommon. Or at least less common then same race couples. I was pointing out the impact the poem had on me.
IronSideZer0 1 year ago
someone likes saul williams.. not to say it wasent dope but this is sauls style to a t.
jscix 1 year ago
So, my heart is won over. No lie! Wow.. ahahaha :)
RAAYSHiiNE 1 year ago
haha stumbleupon brought me here butt damnn this guy got gamee
lilbomber2342 1 year ago 2
man this is sooo good i'm going to use this poem to my girlfriend :) keep puting your heart and mine one the mic man.
darkunknown2 1 year ago
Damn.. I think I just fell in love. :)
NessaLeigh85 1 year ago
You are by far one if the dopest poets in the game!
toyapilgrim 1 year ago 5
There's already a poem like this out... not original. But good job non the less.
hotblooded666 1 year ago
This sounds nice, but there's nothing real here.
gibax 1 year ago
@gibax I want to know something that you consider "real" because, whatever it is, it would probably blow my mind until it cums.
millinexec 11 months ago
That's beautiful.
skipp22 1 year ago
this muhfuka
bcthegift 1 year ago
Amen!
kgordon5584 1 year ago
damn dude. i wish i had a quarter of your skill, talent, and creativity with words. i actually got a lil jealous there. more than a lil. i hope you dont ever set your sights on my girl.
pokinsmot 1 year ago 4
@pokinsmot If you guys don't live in the same city, you should be fine. :P
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truly mesmerizing..
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michgozmangoz 1 year ago
that one person who disliked this was too amazed by his words, and was put into shock to find out that he wasen't a love poet & hit dislike by mistake.
SoftTwilightBeauty 1 year ago
Whoa, I could imagine if he was a love poet.
CaptainCreature 1 year ago
"I know this sounds strange, but every now and den, i pray to god dat he turned u back into one of my ribs just so i never had to spend an entire day without u."
DATS DEEP!
famoussas1989 1 year ago 3
"I will message yur back untill your skin sing song that yur lips don't know the words too.". That line gets me ever time. The best hands down.
w3irdkid2u 1 year ago
aww. :')
mimorcy 1 year ago
Madddddd Props!
01MLin 1 year ago
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I saw this cat at the Air Lounge in Oakland, ca. He was incredible. Hell, I bought one of his cd's. As a spoken word artist myself, I was inspired by his work and delivery.
gametime155 1 year ago
I saw this cat at the Air Lounge in Oakland, ca. He was incredible. Hell, I bought one of his cd's. As a spoken word artist myself, I was inspired by his work and delivery.
gametime155 1 year ago
"I wanna be your boyfriends stuntman...and do all the things he was too afraid to do." Loved it!!
kulalei 1 year ago
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Tenderheart
Just check the young brother out at Illusion in Pflugerville, TX He was on his "A" game...The man is great....
Godisable755 1 year ago
Just check the young brother out at Illusion in Pflugerville, TX He was on his "A" game...The man is great....
Godisable755 1 year ago
<3 Its hard not to like it :D
sbarriaful 1 year ago
i love this
asianbitchh 1 year ago
i want him. lol
bklyngiggle 1 year ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww loved it!!!!
Shakez09 1 year ago
tried spoken word and failed terribly.. did have the pleasure of catching this dude live though..amazing
tgcf4 1 year ago
wow
slo1986 1 year ago
I LOVE IT
wakkomomo 1 year ago
soo good!!!
haley813 1 year ago
i wish i was creative as this.
so amazing and creates a vivid image in my mind.
jdeseodulce 1 year ago
i had the pleasure of meetings rudy yeterday at a open mic thing at miracosta and he killed it lol hes definatly improved his onstage swag lol
Reptargoezrawr 1 year ago
he's amazing
melabelle22 1 year ago
I love him. he is amaizing!! he came to my school today <3
omgitskelsey4 1 year ago 2
Looooove it.
sbaybex 1 year ago
hahah♥
KarriahsdusiiD 1 year ago
I LOVEEEE THIS!
sweetjodz 1 year ago
Heather Lynne is my musician...
ooog78 1 year ago
this is beautiful <3
he should be a love poet also cuz this is the cutest thing ever.
kaggirl2468 1 year ago
wow, it's too bad he's not a love poet...
m8cct 1 year ago 144
@m8cct But imagine if he HAD been:P
gosesnuff 1 year ago
@m8cct It really is too bad he's not a love poet. He might be pretty good at it.
ciaochowbella 1 year ago
just perfect. we all deserve this type of love. perfect love.
Suzie9144 1 year ago 13
i heard him perform this poem live! it was amazing. i think somethign new grew inside me, and his words really touched me. && i'd love to hear his voice everyday!!
andisparklesparkle 1 year ago
sent shivers down my spine . you are amazing ! i love it, i absolutely do! one of the most beautifulest thing i have ever heard <3
TheEllyssasian 1 year ago
omg.. this dude is fire !!! I LOVE IT!
PreciousSparks 1 year ago
That was beautiful... *snaps*
krutchaz 2 years ago
deep. loved it
JFAK1967 2 years ago
He's amazing. That would've made a dope love poem...if he were a love poet.
BerDinosaur 2 years ago 175
NICE! I like this a lot!!! :D
pandagiftwrap 2 years ago
Yeah man. That was super dope.
bkarrots 2 years ago
This is ridiculously on point.
PrettyRagdoll 2 years ago
that was probably one of the best poems ive ever heard if not the best.
cptalaue 2 years ago 2
*im not a love poet but if i was*....lol rudy coulda fooled me...dude is sick w/words & that poem would make any woman happy
ladymuziklover 2 years ago
this is so cute!
FuqkTheWorld1 2 years ago
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I really like this. Wow, that was GREAT!
mzerickaa 2 years ago