I believe your heart was in it. And as a dancer I see that you have big guts to put this up. I would suggest deeper plaits and facial expressions. Allow the music to run through your veins to reach that hand extension out with the words and meaning... basically let your self tell the story of this song and what it means to you. Zone out. don't think of the moves. overall it was an amazing performance. I can tell your beginner but more power to ya! Great performance!
that was really pretty but to make it even more amazing you should follow through with your movements and finnish them. but i liked the choreography. just go all out and follow through.
Good job, I just wanted to tell you to make sure to watch what your thumbs are doing. When dancing, you have to be aware of every part of your body at all times (as I'm sure you know) and little details like your hands can really stick out even when the rest is perfect.
This choreography didn't let the dancer show off what she can do! Not enough technique or flow! I can tell that this girl has the passion, flexibility, and grace to really go places, I'd like to see a routine that lets her :)
I think there was too much traveling, like it was run run run run stop run run run run. Ya'know? I just wished you had more stationary movement and your pace on the the pirouettes is a bit slow, im sure you could have doubled it in and added some speed. But it was goood :)
i feel like you are a very good dancer the only problem is the choreography i felt like it was just running across the room back and forth but i just didnt like the choreo. other then that you are a very good dancer and you have potiental , you need more emotion!
Its not bad to criticize someone. Thats what being a good dancer is all about. she needs emotion, and if no one tells her that, how is she going to get better? If she just works hard, I'm sure she can become an amazing dancer :)
you need to work on your technique. so do some jumps like a hitch kick or a layout or even an elusion turn. you need yo make your moves flow. and more fascial expression is needed
ive been dancing since i was three and the strength in ur legs is amazing and ur emotion is real. i can see ur into the dance but you need to loosen up a bit
yer dance is pretty but EXTEMELY boring, you need more leaps and jumps and bigger turns, my 6 year old cousin can do the moves you do. you need to step it up, too much walking around, you really look like you have no idea what yer doing.
Ask your choreographer for something more challenging; I've learned from experience it's almost the only way to really improve during a full competition year, when there is no time for intense technique classes. :)
this coreography seems a little to easy for how old you are. you need to challenge your self if you want to improve! good job though keep works towards new goals! ~Dance Hard Dream Big!~
You should really think about keeping your thumbs connected to the palm of your hands because they really attract unwanted attention when you make nice lines with your arms
I think its really good :) I like it alot, One thing i would say, and please dont take it in offense, but i think if you extend fully throughout the performance quality would improve drastically, I love the choreography though :) x
and lochead15- it's true. people do dance because they love it, but you're never going to get any better if you don't get critiqued and fix your mistakes.
Good job! Of course there is always room for improvement, but I guarantee half the people criticizing you can't do any better. There will always be negative people, ignore them. Your happiness is what matters, and if dance makes you happy stick with is!
your good but... it looks like your just a happy fairy pransing around (no offence) :/ so (advice) if i was to do this dance i would remix the song and make it slow so i could extend my moves :) hope that helps
i know what you mean. its good but it seems to be lacking.. technique? you have potential to be a good dancer tho, its just stretching your emotions to every part of you and look like youre enjoying it :)
good job but you need more work technique wise your hands look like hamburgers and you need to be more loose in your body release the tension and practice your turns !!
the dance was not good it was ok but lyrical is not just runing every were and i would advise you 2 wear the lyrical shoes so you dont hurt your feet on the wood
yeah it got kinda boring..maybe u should try something harder and spice it up a lil bit maybe add a turn combination and yea add more emotion but nice job
Choreo was kinda sucky.. you need more emotion whether your practicing alone or not.Not enough technique , your jsut running around and flailing your arms.You leaps were small..i guess it was ok
beautiful song but the song is supposed to be controlling you, you have to really feel it and give it all, not the other way around. but it wasn't completely horrible. it was rather ok. :)
im gonna have to say that its ok but i did this song at a convention a few yearts back and most of the moves were the same as they were here...i do believe in sharing choreography but really....be original please
good start...I agree with the other critics :) you need to explore the "emotional extension" side of lyrical dance! You have a beauitful figure and your turns rock, but try maybe fouttes or turns ala seconde to start getting your fee off the ground. grande jetes are beautiful when timed right but calypso and stag jumps can work as well to show off your "emotional extension" good luck and keep dancing!
people NEED to critize what the dancer is doing wrong or else they will just keep making the same mistakes over and over again. you NEED emotion! the moves were very very easy. keep up the good work though
critism is always sumtin a dancer needs tuh improve demselves wether their havin fun or not so i tink ppl shud stop bein nice she needs tuh stop runnin about and i agree dat she does need alot of work but if she keeps it up she will do really well other dan dat d dance waz a bit mediocre frm a dancer's point of view
Why do some people have to be so rude. Did you ever think that maybe some people are amatures... and that they dance because they love it and not to be the best? Sometimes people on here just prove the stereotype of the stuck up ballerina! You llok beatiful and you can tell that you're having fun!!! Keep dancing :)
@lochead15 i totally agree with u! everyone is critisizing how she needs emotion and how her dances were easy but she was just having fun and showing poeple what she can do. she probably had not been dancing for a long time. poeple never think about that. they just say all this crap about the persons dancing. really she shut up becuz u dont even kno her so u cant pick out problems that she has to get better at. SHE DID AN AMAZING JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
@lochead15 ... Not to seem picky... But Ballet dancing and Lyrical dancing arnt the same thing... But I do agree with you. Still though, you shouldn't assume that all ballet dancers are stuck up, I really hope that I am not.
either a lyrical dance is wonderful...or suckish...and this one needs more work...sorry...but it's true..it needs more! it needs to pop..and be emotional...not just doing moves and running around.
THIS SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You were running around WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to much. This dance wasn't choreographed at all. Looked very much like a freestyle. You kept doing the same moves over and over. This wasn't good. It was AMETURE at BEST!!!!
i personally thing its verygood im sick of every dance being all the convulsions and acting as a tree like it jsut gets boring and this song is very pretty. i think its good.
very good but just put your whole self into it just let the music take you and let your body just flow with it like no one is watching you :) very nice though
It wasn't horrible. The only thing that would have made i better is if you had actually looked like you wanted to be dancing. I never once saw a smile on your face, and you just seemed to be going trough the motions.
wow that is really rude. she isnt even big. oh so she is fat because she is toothpick skinny? that is the stupidest thing i have ever heard in mu life.
I agree with tjensen12, in your moves, like arm movements.. just finish them off, it kind of looks like at some points your flailing your arms around, be a little more tight with them, also i feel as if your a little off beat, But hey, dancers dance for a reason, and they do the movements for a certain reason that's close to them. So yeah, good job.
I actually think you did really well. Most people here are probably judging you by their levels of experteeze, but at the point that your at you did great. I did think you could have added some more levels in there somewhere but overall it was amazing. Keep it up.
u are way to stiff and ur movements dont flow you need to make it more grace full and not make it look like you are about to fall on you face. i am 15 and have been dancing for 12 years of my life so i do know a thing or 2 about dance and the steps are good u just need to make them a little more cleaner but good idea it wasnt terrible
i agree with most..you really need to let loose and just let go of all the emotin and leave it on the dance floor. i can tell that you have the emotion but your not truly giving it your all. even the tiniest movements will look so much more amazing and better with all of your emotions put into them
I agree with most saying you need more emotion. Let yourself go. However, I disagree with those telling you it was bad choreography. You didn't choreograph it, you did what you were asked to do. I enjoyed the choreography, looks similar to the moves I used when I did it 4 years ago. I wish I could dance again.=[
rly put feeling into it..it just looked like you werent enjoying it..feeling is the most important part of a lyrical. so rly put your emotions into it..and maybe do a little bit more of movement..it was good. i liked it. but i think you could do more. youre a good dancer so yeah. and with technique..rly get it. but over all it was good.
yea ur dancing does look a bit dead...but i love ur steps and stuff, i think u can add in some more stuff in it... to make it look like ur actually doing something
I think you have beautiful lines, and it flows, wonderfully. I think you can put a bit more emotion into it. this song is a very hopeful and passionate song, other than that amazing
You look amazing. Ignore the people who can't follow the golden rule. (aka chill out-you don't know her or have any right to say this crap) Your dance looks like you do enjoy what you are doing, even if it isn't complicated. not everything has to be so hard.
Follow through with the moves a bit more and it'll look cleaner ^.^
And hey to the person who called her fat; I think she's gorgeous for the fact that she's not an effing twig. Curves are prettier than angles and sharp bits.
everyone on here is so critical of everyone. she is good. her dansing is good. everyone has their own level of dansing and you cant make mean comments about it. she is good at dansing her level. so cut out all the critical crap
hmmm, was okay, i would say that its a really bad choreography. but your dancing is actually quite good. your techniue is good and you have loads of potential but you just need to let yourself go.
well- i thought it was good :) but then again i'm not a professional dancer... i just like it :) it's a good effort- yeah! but take their advice and you'll become a great dancer with hard work :)
you a wonderful dancer really im jelous but i do think you should ptu more moves in your dance i wanna see more lolz 8DDD loved it
XyourcutebabbyX 6 months ago
I believe your heart was in it. And as a dancer I see that you have big guts to put this up. I would suggest deeper plaits and facial expressions. Allow the music to run through your veins to reach that hand extension out with the words and meaning... basically let your self tell the story of this song and what it means to you. Zone out. don't think of the moves. overall it was an amazing performance. I can tell your beginner but more power to ya! Great performance!
vacation89282 9 months ago
You're very good, but I do aggree with some people, you could use more emotion<3 good job thougggh(:
TaylorBrooke1123 10 months ago
that was really pretty but to make it even more amazing you should follow through with your movements and finnish them. but i liked the choreography. just go all out and follow through.
pnuthead42 11 months ago 2
Good job, I just wanted to tell you to make sure to watch what your thumbs are doing. When dancing, you have to be aware of every part of your body at all times (as I'm sure you know) and little details like your hands can really stick out even when the rest is perfect.
CaitlynNason 11 months ago
This choreography didn't let the dancer show off what she can do! Not enough technique or flow! I can tell that this girl has the passion, flexibility, and grace to really go places, I'd like to see a routine that lets her :)
LaVieEstDanse 11 months ago 3
@LaVieEstDanse I agree, I felt like this seemed to easy for some of the things she looked like she could do.
CaitlynNason 11 months ago
the heart and the movements are there, but it just needs a little bit extra.
Rumbledumblebable 1 year ago
i didnt feel it at all girl... more emotion and less running around. put more power in it
studioraynaud 1 year ago
are you wearing foot undeez?(: lol
juicyPiX 1 year ago
i felt absolutely no emotion, and no inclination to be awed. keep trying, practice makes perfect
(:
saraesthetic 1 year ago
Show off your flexibility more, try doing pirouettes instead of so many chaines turns. I think you were perfectly flowy :p haha
jessicamhanner 1 year ago
no offense, but you're not really dancing enough, like sum other people said..just running a lot. <3 the song :) and a walk to remember!
tayswiftyfan100 1 year ago
I think there was too much traveling, like it was run run run run stop run run run run. Ya'know? I just wished you had more stationary movement and your pace on the the pirouettes is a bit slow, im sure you could have doubled it in and added some speed. But it was goood :)
jennatestani 1 year ago
you are a good dancer.. so dont listen to anybody else darling
leighNrich 1 year ago 2
i feel like you are a very good dancer the only problem is the choreography i felt like it was just running across the room back and forth but i just didnt like the choreo. other then that you are a very good dancer and you have potiental , you need more emotion!
TheMakeupMondays 1 year ago 3
you have to flow, not doing the steps in cha-cha, but you did really well!!!!!
wostrich1 1 year ago
Your alright, but i got bored with the routine 22 seconds in.
ilovekissing24 1 year ago
i love the song i love a walk to remember! your a really good dancer!
beachbabe5150 1 year ago
connect your arms to your back!
97heyheyhey 1 year ago
U need a little more energy and emotion..U have great potiental but just work on loosing up and flowing..Less walking..Simple routine nice job
EmiahIzAwesome11 1 year ago 3
Its not bad to criticize someone. Thats what being a good dancer is all about. she needs emotion, and if no one tells her that, how is she going to get better? If she just works hard, I'm sure she can become an amazing dancer :)
taylorbrookhall 1 year ago 5
you need to work on your technique. so do some jumps like a hitch kick or a layout or even an elusion turn. you need yo make your moves flow. and more fascial expression is needed
roxysrules664 1 year ago
You have potential, you just need to pursue it.
iDancer33 1 year ago
ive been dancing since i was three and the strength in ur legs is amazing and ur emotion is real. i can see ur into the dance but you need to loosen up a bit
fersureluver2000 1 year ago 2
you're good. just need emotion &to relax your hands/wrists.
ohyeahjessalicious 1 year ago
yer dance is pretty but EXTEMELY boring, you need more leaps and jumps and bigger turns, my 6 year old cousin can do the moves you do. you need to step it up, too much walking around, you really look like you have no idea what yer doing.
howtobeagangster101 1 year ago
it just looks like your running, hitting a move, running, hitting, etc
xoNickJisaCutieox 1 year ago
Ask your choreographer for something more challenging; I've learned from experience it's almost the only way to really improve during a full competition year, when there is no time for intense technique classes. :)
Safanta 1 year ago
not in any way does she look like an amature & i've been dancing for 20 years.
aliGuuuu 1 year ago
you can tell that she is amature however nice idea ;) i
chippylippyLoo 1 year ago
this coreography seems a little to easy for how old you are. you need to challenge your self if you want to improve! good job though keep works towards new goals! ~Dance Hard Dream Big!~
mckdorf33 1 year ago
Nice tech, :) I don't know your age but you look to old to do kicks, turns, and traveling the whole time.
09smartcookie 1 year ago
Good job!! Try to loosen up at the shoulders. Lyrical should be very flowey. You have a lot of talent and p[potential though!!!!!!
ivafaber07 1 year ago
You should really think about keeping your thumbs connected to the palm of your hands because they really attract unwanted attention when you make nice lines with your arms
brewill95 1 year ago
I think its really good :) I like it alot, One thing i would say, and please dont take it in offense, but i think if you extend fully throughout the performance quality would improve drastically, I love the choreography though :) x
LiziMazizle 1 year ago
smilesunshine005- you're right.
and lochead15- it's true. people do dance because they love it, but you're never going to get any better if you don't get critiqued and fix your mistakes.
skinnyjeanslover17 1 year ago
uhm dudes she probaly just in beginners n for a beginner her technique is really goood not once wasnt her feeth pointing!
goshhhmannn88288 1 year ago
you stayed on the same level alot, i didnt see any floor work or any interesting jumps :/
smilesunshine005 1 year ago
very pretty
JonChacawPurPur 1 year ago
ehh its okay
karolprincesstalk 1 year ago
Good job! Of course there is always room for improvement, but I guarantee half the people criticizing you can't do any better. There will always be negative people, ignore them. Your happiness is what matters, and if dance makes you happy stick with is!
MostlyLemonade 2 years ago
um do less running add some more difficult combos to show that your really good at what you do.
idinakristinwicked 2 years ago
Gosh! Ppl are rude! I think she is doing what she loves to do,and she doesnt care what ppl say.
MakalaRose123 2 years ago
BLeh
Lov3Danc34Ever 2 years ago
i agree with the two below
you need more technique and more variety. like they said below its prancing around too much. But there's potential :)
lovecomesonce 2 years ago
your good but... it looks like your just a happy fairy pransing around (no offence) :/ so (advice) if i was to do this dance i would remix the song and make it slow so i could extend my moves :) hope that helps
ShanonMaries 2 years ago
i know what you mean. its good but it seems to be lacking.. technique? you have potential to be a good dancer tho, its just stretching your emotions to every part of you and look like youre enjoying it :)
jamspice11 2 years ago
its boring and not good.
kimaccelerando 2 years ago
good dance
JHollingsworthh 2 years ago
you need more emotion and to make ur moves longer and to extend
mauracopley 2 years ago
This dance is kind of bland and you need more emotion when you dance, whether or not you're just practicing.
nalacali14 2 years ago
i can do better
britishlover69 2 years ago
good job but you need more work technique wise your hands look like hamburgers and you need to be more loose in your body release the tension and practice your turns !!
lveamd 2 years ago
the dance was not good it was ok but lyrical is not just runing every were and i would advise you 2 wear the lyrical shoes so you dont hurt your feet on the wood
love2jdb1 2 years ago
yeah it got kinda boring..maybe u should try something harder and spice it up a lil bit maybe add a turn combination and yea add more emotion but nice job
lilkc13 2 years ago 2
this was pretty good but you look like you were boredd... you should do harderr dances,(: your more experienced then your letting on with this dance.
brennnaaaa 2 years ago
is was kinda boring with u running around but i feel like u could have done soooo much better u had amazing kicks!
rawrspaceman 2 years ago
I really, really like this :)
chilintheair654 2 years ago
je pense qu'il faut que tu danse beaucoup beaucoup plus...et que tu travaille ta technique.... ne publie pas de vidéos comme ça sur youtubes...bye
ptitdoudancer 2 years ago
bring more passion into it. and dont make your preps so noticable just go into it. try some more advanced cheoreography.
andeedancr 2 years ago
Choreo was kinda sucky.. you need more emotion whether your practicing alone or not.Not enough technique , your jsut running around and flailing your arms.You leaps were small..i guess it was ok
Moderndancer16 2 years ago 4
stop runnin around and just dance
MiissConceiited 2 years ago 4
too much running around
LPyaya09 2 years ago 4
choreography wasnt really good at all..
taytaybaby23 2 years ago
at 1:10 your jump was kinda pathetic!
jennatestani 2 years ago 2
its a glissade. rude.
kysaprimadona 2 years ago
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jennatestani 2 years ago
you need to relate it to some kind of feeling
tinklb12396 2 years ago
too much technique, you need to be more fluid and explore different movements that feel natural, and fit your emotions.
strenght4l 2 years ago 2
beautiful song but the song is supposed to be controlling you, you have to really feel it and give it all, not the other way around. but it wasn't completely horrible. it was rather ok. :)
loveapple27 2 years ago 3
im gonna have to say that its ok but i did this song at a convention a few yearts back and most of the moves were the same as they were here...i do believe in sharing choreography but really....be original please
qazwas55 2 years ago
i knw this video is old, but dont stick your thumbs out. i loved the dance! put those thumbs in.
tbs311 2 years ago
good start...I agree with the other critics :) you need to explore the "emotional extension" side of lyrical dance! You have a beauitful figure and your turns rock, but try maybe fouttes or turns ala seconde to start getting your fee off the ground. grande jetes are beautiful when timed right but calypso and stag jumps can work as well to show off your "emotional extension" good luck and keep dancing!
joeelliottroxmysox 2 years ago
your emotion in this dance is lacking.
you need to feel the song. its a great song. and it seemed your feet were always on the ground. try some jumps or extensions!
smilesunshine005 2 years ago
people NEED to critize what the dancer is doing wrong or else they will just keep making the same mistakes over and over again. you NEED emotion! the moves were very very easy. keep up the good work though
bugdancer1614 2 years ago 61
@bugdancer1614 there wasn't a lot of dancing....
foshothebest 1 year ago
@bugdancer1614 i AGREE SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!
guysdancetoo 1 year ago 2
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kitkatTwilight 2 years ago
wow thats a really good dance to a really good song just need more emotion
morgz1351572 2 years ago
very pretty dance
LMNGRL88 2 years ago
it was pretty, careful with the claw hands.
banditja 2 years ago
Uv got the moves, but put a little sole into it! dance is like drama, facial expressions r huge. good job thou!
Lilythesinger 2 years ago
critism is always sumtin a dancer needs tuh improve demselves wether their havin fun or not so i tink ppl shud stop bein nice she needs tuh stop runnin about and i agree dat she does need alot of work but if she keeps it up she will do really well other dan dat d dance waz a bit mediocre frm a dancer's point of view
zane0505 2 years ago
i think you shouldnt listen to thoes who are rude,
i probably dance like you. and i only dance because i love it. keep it up imporiive
simplycassy00 2 years ago
Why do some people have to be so rude. Did you ever think that maybe some people are amatures... and that they dance because they love it and not to be the best? Sometimes people on here just prove the stereotype of the stuck up ballerina! You llok beatiful and you can tell that you're having fun!!! Keep dancing :)
lochead15 2 years ago 33
@lochead15 i totally agree with u! everyone is critisizing how she needs emotion and how her dances were easy but she was just having fun and showing poeple what she can do. she probably had not been dancing for a long time. poeple never think about that. they just say all this crap about the persons dancing. really she shut up becuz u dont even kno her so u cant pick out problems that she has to get better at. SHE DID AN AMAZING JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
booptie1990 1 year ago 2
@lochead15 ... Not to seem picky... But Ballet dancing and Lyrical dancing arnt the same thing... But I do agree with you. Still though, you shouldn't assume that all ballet dancers are stuck up, I really hope that I am not.
unscenced 11 months ago
dun listen to th rest. keep it up. its gd(:
bethiame 2 years ago
pretty song and pretty dance
crystal0angel 2 years ago
there is a pole in the middle of the dance studio floor nice place for one lol
crystal0angel 2 years ago 2
i didnt like it,.,it wasnt original and it was too easy,.,=/,.,you dont need to know ballet to do that,.,
ChLo0oex 2 years ago
you don't suck. it's just a bit mediocre.
you were running a bit much
and remember you can always use the floor.
more work will do a lot of good, keep it up
definedstyle 2 years ago
either a lyrical dance is wonderful...or suckish...and this one needs more work...sorry...but it's true..it needs more! it needs to pop..and be emotional...not just doing moves and running around.
sedvillemm95 2 years ago
THIS SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You were running around WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to much. This dance wasn't choreographed at all. Looked very much like a freestyle. You kept doing the same moves over and over. This wasn't good. It was AMETURE at BEST!!!!
Breshaye86 2 years ago
Make sure you don't box your arms when you are doing your turns but good job. You dance a lot like I use to and we look sorta alike haha how ironic
BlytheB010 2 years ago
zzzzzzzzzzz............ boring
dramaQt25 2 years ago
i personally thing its verygood im sick of every dance being all the convulsions and acting as a tree like it jsut gets boring and this song is very pretty. i think its good.
LaLaLMRdancer 2 years ago
you are running to much.
you need a little more technicality.
breanna712 2 years ago 3
what is this..
00purpledaisy00 2 years ago
good job :)
xoxolemonhead 2 years ago
i just dont like the choreography.. you're a good dancer but use some more emotion. its a lyrical dance.
shanirideshorsesss 2 years ago
YOU SUCK! Never dance again.
give it up.
Kelsey1236 2 years ago
whoever cherographed it, it didn't work so much. your a pretty good dancer, just get more technical trainign.
SYDNEYxoxox4488 2 years ago
i like the choreography and i dont think you run around too much.
toomanypassions 2 years ago
umm, you run around too much! haha.
myaccount34501 2 years ago 2
good choreography though at a lot of times it doesnt really seem to fit with the beat of the music
ksb8160 2 years ago
this was my solo song 2 years ago!
jluvsdance13 2 years ago
very good but just put your whole self into it just let the music take you and let your body just flow with it like no one is watching you :) very nice though
rubygirl1235 2 years ago
It wasn't horrible. The only thing that would have made i better is if you had actually looked like you wanted to be dancing. I never once saw a smile on your face, and you just seemed to be going trough the motions.
Sillystarryeyes 2 years ago
I think youre great!
Alot of people see dance as a sport more then art, movment and something to enjoy, I think they suck.
keep working and doing what youre doing, gj!
againstgravity 2 years ago
everyone please look at my lyrical solo video to wild horses and please please please give me some feedback! thanks!
hdance247 2 years ago
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you are very fat.... ;/;/
PrincessArwena 2 years ago
find another skill other than putting people down. You don't have to be a size zero to dance.
Sillystarryeyes 2 years ago
You do not have reason .
PrincessArwena 2 years ago
wow that is really rude. she isnt even big. oh so she is fat because she is toothpick skinny? that is the stupidest thing i have ever heard in mu life.
ChEeRnInJa13 2 years ago
not bad actually, only i agree with the persons who say it looks like YOU don't enjoy it..
but hey, rly nt so bad!!! you go girl
lipglossygirl 2 years ago
I remember dancing to this song when I was like 6. Ah... I loved that dance.
giggle2012 2 years ago
Finesse. Learn it
leeshapesh09 2 years ago
I agree with tjensen12, in your moves, like arm movements.. just finish them off, it kind of looks like at some points your flailing your arms around, be a little more tight with them, also i feel as if your a little off beat, But hey, dancers dance for a reason, and they do the movements for a certain reason that's close to them. So yeah, good job.
surprisesex 2 years ago
I actually think you did really well. Most people here are probably judging you by their levels of experteeze, but at the point that your at you did great. I did think you could have added some more levels in there somewhere but overall it was amazing. Keep it up.
Mocmocs 2 years ago
technique technique technique. u need some more ballet
kiradance93 2 years ago
OMG pointe your toes at 1:10!!!!
Maddancer18 2 years ago 5
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Need to lose some weight in the hindquarters.
Crusadist1099 2 years ago
ahhh! i lOVE doug!
hehe
katieluvsyeww 2 years ago
yall just leave her alone!! i think you're beautiful...yes, u could use more practise but so what, i loved it!!!
shutup402 2 years ago
need to relax if your gonna do a lyrical dance
xmaddyo 2 years ago
u are way to stiff and ur movements dont flow you need to make it more grace full and not make it look like you are about to fall on you face. i am 15 and have been dancing for 12 years of my life so i do know a thing or 2 about dance and the steps are good u just need to make them a little more cleaner but good idea it wasnt terrible
kksowhat 2 years ago
more energy!!!!!!!!!!
flowerhero 2 years ago
You need to stretch more and do things full out
tjensen12 2 years ago
i agree with most..you really need to let loose and just let go of all the emotin and leave it on the dance floor. i can tell that you have the emotion but your not truly giving it your all. even the tiniest movements will look so much more amazing and better with all of your emotions put into them
kostrutter09 2 years ago
to stiff relax let your chest go a little its lyrical dont be so placed let your emotions flow through your body:]
dancer58morgan 2 years ago
OMFG
i love doug!
haha
omgitsCAITIEnEMMIE 2 years ago
I agree with most saying you need more emotion. Let yourself go. However, I disagree with those telling you it was bad choreography. You didn't choreograph it, you did what you were asked to do. I enjoyed the choreography, looks similar to the moves I used when I did it 4 years ago. I wish I could dance again.=[
plypom07 2 years ago
i like the steps but it looked like you were a little all over the place and very tight. keep practicing tho!!
LittleWhiteShoes 2 years ago
rly put feeling into it..it just looked like you werent enjoying it..feeling is the most important part of a lyrical. so rly put your emotions into it..and maybe do a little bit more of movement..it was good. i liked it. but i think you could do more. youre a good dancer so yeah. and with technique..rly get it. but over all it was good.
ACdancer13 2 years ago
just let loose girl, good job
xoCare 3 years ago
commmoonnnnn let loose!!!
(without loosing your technique of course)
I WANT MORE UPS AND DOWNS!
you play it too safe.
its too much and turn and drag and release.
i know this is supposed to be flowy and all, but i would like to see you "hit" more, ya know? put some power behind your movements.
coold00dfasho 3 years ago
erm...
you need to work a bit on your technique.
piques, and side jumps.
i think that this dance choreography doesnt play to your strengths.
you seem like a good dancer,
just like your heart isnt in it
radkiderooo 3 years ago
yea ur dancing does look a bit dead...but i love ur steps and stuff, i think u can add in some more stuff in it... to make it look like ur actually doing something
GiGi19sUmax 3 years ago
I think you have beautiful lines, and it flows, wonderfully. I think you can put a bit more emotion into it. this song is a very hopeful and passionate song, other than that amazing
Krys10Marie755 3 years ago
You look amazing. Ignore the people who can't follow the golden rule. (aka chill out-you don't know her or have any right to say this crap) Your dance looks like you do enjoy what you are doing, even if it isn't complicated. not everything has to be so hard.
I love this song!
seventyfivedollars 3 years ago
Follow through with the moves a bit more and it'll look cleaner ^.^
And hey to the person who called her fat; I think she's gorgeous for the fact that she's not an effing twig. Curves are prettier than angles and sharp bits.
Nice extension of the leg at 1:18 btw
LuviBai 3 years ago
Nice movement-try not to run around so much- it makes you look kinda lost or confused.
PGAUSJ 3 years ago 2
it wasn't her choreography. she learned it at a convention.
plypom07 2 years ago
You might want to work on your Peacka's (sp?)
But gooood effot.
:)
alimackie 3 years ago
piques
PGAUSJ 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
you too fat
bakla6 3 years ago
ok criticize her choreography and style all you want...but not her body type. That's just rude
love2sing819 3 years ago 2
lol you suck..
latinababy999 3 years ago
sorry you werent to good
madds901 3 years ago
and i just spelled dacing wrong. lol ooops but yeah dont be critical
kgirlsinger 3 years ago
everyone on here is so critical of everyone. she is good. her dansing is good. everyone has their own level of dansing and you cant make mean comments about it. she is good at dansing her level. so cut out all the critical crap
kgirlsinger 3 years ago
im sorry but i wasn't impressed. it was quite boring. a lyrical dance is supposed to have emotion and this didnt have any.
dancerchiclpm 3 years ago 2
that was very boring
dancer19102 3 years ago
low level of technique, hardly any emotion
-_-
kattdancer777 3 years ago 2
i'm sorry but ehh!
lyrical is suppost to have alot of emotion.
And I didn't see any at all.
to much repeating things, thing off more variety of stuff and it would look alot better
Chriget97 3 years ago 2
it was ehhhh....too much turningg..try to get more into it...:)
MingLing134 3 years ago
please take this vid off
SaVaNNaHLoVeSBaLLeT 3 years ago 2
ur arms are horribl!! they need to be stronger! and put more emotion and power behind ur dancing! it will look so mch better1!!
x0nicolex03 3 years ago
Sometimes people run slowly, spin, and thrust their body to music and call it a lyrical dance.
life4sorrows1893 3 years ago 2
choreography is not very good.
StarryNight88 3 years ago 5
next time..put some energy on dancing..u look like a vegie darling...there are lots of running..try to put more powerful steps..ok????:)
ecahrica17 3 years ago
bad choreography. and u need more energy and u need 2 move more.. like make the audience think the song and dance is alive and make them interested.
kyliiekeen 3 years ago 6
Gurl U love to dance i can see that!
I'm not tryin to diss..But make ure movements bigger and get into the feeling of the song a little more yah?
Overall go for u dreamz!!!!! :):)
Latiina397 3 years ago 2
that was from tremaine?? i went there last year! which one was doug?
danceforlife123456 3 years ago
u suck
dancerlaurac 3 years ago
hmmm, was okay, i would say that its a really bad choreography. but your dancing is actually quite good. your techniue is good and you have loads of potential but you just need to let yourself go.
Laurenbaby001 3 years ago 2
wow.... i've never been so bored.
lemmonandlime 3 years ago
you didn't do anything.
7895123578946 3 years ago
im sorry but that was so boring
i can pick that up just watching it
running from corner to corner with some turns and arm gestures.. timing is poor
hunibunilove 3 years ago
well- i thought it was good :) but then again i'm not a professional dancer... i just like it :) it's a good effort- yeah! but take their advice and you'll become a great dancer with hard work :)
gr8fun4u2013 3 years ago