Dear Uncle, Dedicated to Notorious B.I.G. & my late uncle (One More Chance)

[magicBALLIN156]

nicee bro

[darkhunter96]

Whoooa! Your flow is insane! This is hype.

[laytonathome]

this is deep and nice

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

@laytonathome thank you very much. Check out more of my music on my channel!

[MrRapRiot]

Your Good Bro, Slow Your Flow Down A Little Bit And Youd Be Even Bit, But The Tracks Meaningful Man, Good Shit(Y)

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

@MrRapRiot thanks a lot man.

[Micted6]

know your good,, yeah dude, this is what makes a person rhymes ,, theirs,, do yah thang kid,, yah words are clear,, cud hear what yah dishn and all good holmes,, got props dude,,

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

@Micted6 appreciate the kind words.

[KwyatMan]

Love the lyrics bruv! Just work on your breathing. That will help your timing help and you can more feeling into your rhymes! Real good, keep it up!

[kamden9]

damn, that was good

[enl1v3n]

a bit more practice and this track will be awesome ;] and try to do a track with better quality i understand that this is a home record but u can get better quality even at home ;) GJ man \/ PEACE.

[cantgangstarap]

that's a good shit ...i like your flow ...keep up the good work man

[diddodogaly5100]

damn.. son that was hot...

dat shyt touched me like no homo.

it mad think of my cuz da passed.

R.I.P SpIkE

[SandRuNNer22]

You Went In Bro :)

[risingsun667]

You kinda sound like Twista. Nice song, bro.

[prolifik1981]

yeah he does sound like twista i hear every word he sayin thus comin from chi town im used to hearin twista

[Jdub37348431]

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[Gratefulwun92]

Good, good, just gotta get your flow on point, I got the same issue when I spit.

[eddierob]

Keep at it man. just slow down a little but it was hot. you got the lyrics. i had that problems. i had the lyrics but ppl wud say i gotta get the flow right. its all in time man. u on the right track. 5 stars!

[Nick7Antony]

that was SO tight. rip big and yo uncle xx

[chloejoan]

that was pretty awesome. loved the lyrics. sorry to hear about your uncle x

[woopsay]

Some of the best rappers have said that when they first started they would try to spit the fastest lyrics thinking people would be impressed. Really, it just sounds overdone. Slow it down, use less words per line.

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

Thanks for your comment. What you don't realize is I'm not trying to impress anyone or rattle off a lot of lyrics. This is my style, I have several songs where I'm going slow & other songs where I'm goin at a blistering pace, on this track I felt the tempo I chose to perform at fit it perfectly, you could be right though. You're not the first to say this, but one of the few who said it respectfully. Why don't you check out my songs, "A Drunk's Pain" and "Thoughts of A Gangster" & leave a comment

[lilpimpinLc3]

the lyrics was nice but u need to sync ur voice man. I got a studio at ma friend's house and my school and I use them for some of my raps and i always sync my voice to make it sound more deeper and thing man You should check it out and try it

[DATNIGGATAYTAY]

you sound like a fake ass twista

[urshawdy]

YOU SOUND LIKE A HATER

[fumes06]

r u really his nephew

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

LOL! That's the first time someone's asked me that, nah I wrote this regarding my own uncle. I'm not related to B.I.G. just only in the way that we both love music!

[truehiphop809]

shit you tight

[Pikacu666]

Nicely done.Fuck other people, they cant do better thats why they say the its SHIT.

[danielonly123]

dude i did this once but its a short rap and i did it on skys the limit by biggie smalls and alot of people loved my rap. But nice song

[Bzillwood91]

this track is sweet with with slow beat and fast delivery goes well in contrast

Great lyrics and its composition

x zillwoodMC x

[ColoradoChronic]

this is ur best song

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

Thank you.

[snakesheba]

Very nicely done. And I understood every word so I do not agree at all that you should slow it down. They probably told Twista the same thing so you too should probably take that advice with a grain of salt.

[xElectricPulsex]

This is some good shit, but I also agree with stylesrewinde1. Just slow it down and its good shit.

[westsideforlife0]

yo me and u should do a track togethere over some of canibus's best beats.

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

Well send me the beats man! lol

[DrSeebie]

I totaly agree to stylesrewinde1. :D

[RiGolettoMicFiend]

Thanks for your comment.

[stylesrewinde1]

slow it down a bit not the beat but your flow, love the heart, just cut it up abit,silibalize my dude,other than that it's sick,get out that bone thug flow,stay away from that,trust me its not too classy and study jada,mase and big Ls flow couse your voice is sick man,im tellin you.keep it commin ....