First, it's effectively an attack ad. Ron Paul has run a shockingly positive campaign so far, only attacking issues and not the other candidates. Let's not sacrifice that now.
Second, the music is overbearing and almost sinister. Something a bit happier brings viewers a positive impression of Ron.
Good job. Excellent potential in there for an ad...cut nicely against the music. I think there may be some better shots to use at the end during the "vote this", but can't suggest what....
Go getem.
rrgaul 4 years ago
I like this one a lot but it _is_ an attack ad so maybe it should be rethought to make it more positive.
RP 08 FTW
ProspectorSam 4 years ago
This is excellent! I've seen about 20 so far and this one was so cool I logged in to comment.
rekutyn 4 years ago
Nice idea, mared by a few things though:
First, it's effectively an attack ad. Ron Paul has run a shockingly positive campaign so far, only attacking issues and not the other candidates. Let's not sacrifice that now.
Second, the music is overbearing and almost sinister. Something a bit happier brings viewers a positive impression of Ron.
thecactusman17 4 years ago
i like it!!!
keep up the good work
ndnspongebob 4 years ago 3
Nice!
culturalnomad 4 years ago 3
oooh I really like this one, great use of music!
davyjames 4 years ago 3
Good job. Excellent potential in there for an ad...cut nicely against the music. I think there may be some better shots to use at the end during the "vote this", but can't suggest what....
cabinone 4 years ago
awesome? lol; this commercial probably ended last :P I'm actually ashamed to have it online; I didn't know they would publish all of them
GHoeberX 4 years ago
I think it was good! I've watched most of them and if you haven't - perhaps you wouldn't be so hard on yourself ;)
mosqueetobite 4 years ago
awesome!
Takezou07 4 years ago
sick!!!
auraldanger 4 years ago
Very nice job!
philistineau 4 years ago 2
Nice! Good JOb Ghoeber
Benaiahh 4 years ago 2