While I appreciate trying to follow in RoosterTeeth's grand footsteps I think you should add more originality to make the story yours, you know? Plus get better mics. Otherwise its good.
I am fully aware that ther are some paralels with RvB, the fact of the matter is, it's not. the running story will be much different. The fact that there is a red and blue team in a canyon is about the only paralel to RvB. once the stort progresses you'll see that we're different.
While I appreciate trying to follow in RoosterTeeth's grand footsteps I think you should add more originality to make the story yours, you know? Plus get better mics. Otherwise its good.
Eienaoi 3 years ago
I am fully aware that ther are some paralels with RvB, the fact of the matter is, it's not. the running story will be much different. The fact that there is a red and blue team in a canyon is about the only paralel to RvB. once the stort progresses you'll see that we're different.
OutOfHandFilms 3 years ago
coolio
lazites 3 years ago
Not bad. But I would increase the volume on Fodder and Trigger's lines, or overlay them somehow. I couldn't hear them too well.
Vorhias 3 years ago