this is brilliant. really. I'm a writer myself, just as jealous of Sarah Kay's magnificent abilities - but this poem and video is quite brilliant and touching :)
Mediocrity? You don't have a mediocre cell in your entire body, I can tell that by watching just two of your videos. You're killing me, mate - that poem is everything I wish my poems were!
Good sir, where do you get off? Where do you get off wallowing in what you call mediocrity? Surely, you missed me on the tip of your sword when you slayed me.
@BreadAndBullfights Thanks! But it has to be published to perform it in Debate :/ I appreciate it though! I've been looking for a poem like this for quite a while! I'll be sure to look into some of your other poems :)
@1Brihama I was planning on doing it for Speech and Debate too.... clearly I'm not as original as I thought I was... what state are you competing in because I would hate to spend the time working on this only to find out someone else has the exact same piece.... (But this is a great poem! I definately want to do it!)
@MyLastingImpression Well, before you start memorizing or practicing, make sure its allowed in your state! I'm in Wyoming, and I guess video sources count as publications, so I can perform it here, but When I got to larger meets, I have to perform a different poem. MAKE SURE ITS ALLOWED! Its a FANTASTIC poem, and I will be doing it at Wyoming meets, but I'm not sure what the rules are where you live. So feel free to perform it :) just make sure you look at your state Rules.
@1Brihama It is allowed in my state so I'm going for it :) Good luck this year! And a big thank you to BreadAndBullfights for writing and sharing such a great poem with us!
fucking brilliant. i laughed i cried
savlover8 6 days ago
could you please send me or post the lyrics/words to this :) thank you!!
goeun0707 3 weeks ago
Oh goodness this wrenched my heart even more so than "B". I quite adore you!
needsmorefunk 3 weeks ago
Haha I was going to like it until I saw the last bit! You do great work, man -- neither pity nor resignation suit you. Keep performing :)
toffeesquares 1 month ago
this is brilliant. really. I'm a writer myself, just as jealous of Sarah Kay's magnificent abilities - but this poem and video is quite brilliant and touching :)
halfelfgirl 1 month ago
this is great!
kotyayv 2 months ago
WHY DOES THIS ONLY HAVE 3K VIEWS.
whatyouhavetamed 2 months ago
AMAZING!!!!!
queenshorty5291 2 months ago
error noted he is Australian
kaymonaitor 2 months ago 5
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PoetryETrain 2 months ago
:)
therachel20100 3 months ago
ooh this is damn good.
rashedly 3 months ago
It kind of up sets me that ur calling him cute. he is SO much more than "cute".
laurag333 3 months ago
"I resign myself to a life as a... as a walrus."
Mediocrity? You don't have a mediocre cell in your entire body, I can tell that by watching just two of your videos. You're killing me, mate - that poem is everything I wish my poems were!
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tiecethepoet 4 months ago
british accent (check)
good looking son (check)
amazing poem (check)
i could bear you that son :)
kaymonaitor 4 months ago 55
@kaymonaitor ... Australian, my friend... Australian.
redxraccoon 3 months ago 3
@kaymonaitor british ... ?
rashedly 3 months ago
@kaymonaitor I'm no expert but I believe the accent is aussie.
simchamo 2 months ago
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brownet83 2 months ago
@kaymonaitor lol its an Australian accent. :)
sarakahh2 2 months ago
@kaymonaitor He is Austrailian...
valiantlittletailor 1 month ago
@kaymonaitor Australian...
Pouroushair 1 month ago
Good sir, where do you get off? Where do you get off wallowing in what you call mediocrity? Surely, you missed me on the tip of your sword when you slayed me.
ViralSin 4 months ago 2
Is this published? I would like to perform it in Speech and Debate!
1Brihama 4 months ago
@1Brihama It's not published but you're welcome to perform it wherever! When you do try to video it and upload to youtube so we can see.
BreadAndBullfights 4 months ago 2
@BreadAndBullfights Thanks! But it has to be published to perform it in Debate :/ I appreciate it though! I've been looking for a poem like this for quite a while! I'll be sure to look into some of your other poems :)
1Brihama 4 months ago
@1Brihama I was planning on doing it for Speech and Debate too.... clearly I'm not as original as I thought I was... what state are you competing in because I would hate to spend the time working on this only to find out someone else has the exact same piece.... (But this is a great poem! I definately want to do it!)
MyLastingImpression 3 months ago
@MyLastingImpression Well, before you start memorizing or practicing, make sure its allowed in your state! I'm in Wyoming, and I guess video sources count as publications, so I can perform it here, but When I got to larger meets, I have to perform a different poem. MAKE SURE ITS ALLOWED! Its a FANTASTIC poem, and I will be doing it at Wyoming meets, but I'm not sure what the rules are where you live. So feel free to perform it :) just make sure you look at your state Rules.
1Brihama 3 months ago
@1Brihama It is allowed in my state so I'm going for it :) Good luck this year! And a big thank you to BreadAndBullfights for writing and sharing such a great poem with us!
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MyLastingImpression 3 months ago
I love the end bit :)
clownfish000 4 months ago
This is fantastic, are you published?
TubaGirl01 5 months ago
nice! lol are you a fan of doctor who?
apqcelloman 5 months ago
You're cute. And your poetry made you cuter(; haha
gummiebaerrs 6 months ago
This was just beautiful the metaphor with the rose and the thorns and everything was truly amazing.
LittleRED707 6 months ago 13
The last bit, the part where you ad lib'd about your "pool of mediocrity", was AMAZING! Truly.
MarisaRocksOut 6 months ago
Your voice sounds a lot like Robert Sheehan's from Misfits.
Jennessis 6 months ago
"a pool of my own mediocrity". nice--a line that disproves itself.
jhnhouseholder 6 months ago 3
You are beautiful and you happy my heart.
missmarimack 7 months ago 2
This is really really good
Inuyashaloveskagome1 9 months ago 6