Continue to keep your stories b-roll rich - show me the sidewalks and beaches - show close ups of the filter as we talk about it. Good first attempt. Avoid cliche language lie " We are going to ask ... ".
Well researched but a lot of info from one source. 1;00 of read is a long time without stimulating the audience. Stand up is under exposed. Switch up delivery with a combo or interviews (expert), streeters and VO's to convey the key information. Some of the b-roll matches very well with the audio track.
Continue to keep your stories b-roll rich - show me the sidewalks and beaches - show close ups of the filter as we talk about it. Good first attempt. Avoid cliche language lie " We are going to ask ... ".
ENGmohawk 1 year ago
Well researched but a lot of info from one source. 1;00 of read is a long time without stimulating the audience. Stand up is under exposed. Switch up delivery with a combo or interviews (expert), streeters and VO's to convey the key information. Some of the b-roll matches very well with the audio track.
ENGmohawk 1 year ago