More you, less animals. The first thing I should see is your face. 12 mins is too long. Give me 5-15 second hits of a dozen different things you've done - compress the segments more. Suit up for the freefall, then cut to the middle of the freefall. Get a nugget about parasailing, get your reaction to it. This-that-this-that-this-that. If you want to get into more detail or length, give a link to longer videos. You're cute, energetic, fun, and I like your glasses. What else do we need? 8^)
More you, less animals. The first thing I should see is your face. 12 mins is too long. Give me 5-15 second hits of a dozen different things you've done - compress the segments more. Suit up for the freefall, then cut to the middle of the freefall. Get a nugget about parasailing, get your reaction to it. This-that-this-that-this-that. If you want to get into more detail or length, give a link to longer videos. You're cute, energetic, fun, and I like your glasses. What else do we need? 8^)
billbertRIOR 4 months ago