It would be interesting to see this series as a full length one, it has all the makings of a steampunk science fiction show. The same way Farscape totaly turned conventional science fiction on its head to become a cult classic in the late 90's. I miss that show, especially the Hynerian despot Rygel the 16th. And of course, all of its characters.
Dude, this video has the best guard in the world. Because the best guards don't care about security, they care about when their next piss break is and when they smoke lol.
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I agree that the show needs more character development, as well as more dialogue to help that development along.
Also, this might sound odd, but I think the show needs a smidge more humor... maybe a character for comic relief or /something/, b/c the show gets boring without it.
Finally, I don't know whether it's bad acting or directing, but when the Cyborg told the guard to get out of the way, he really ought to shove him out of the way if he's angry or means business, not gently nudge him...
I'm not hooked yet, but I'm willing to follow this up and see how it develops. The main character has a fancy face, but that's about all you can say about her. We need more character development. Yes you can squeeze that in 9 minutes. :P
I really like the idea, but hardly anything happens in these 9 minutes. and I am not suggesting to have more action. I like to see more character development; the protagonist's motifs are still uterly unclear, and she doesn't have any personality. the main villain looks great physically, but has no character as well. neither does the doc.
in these 9 minutes, she broke into the facility, saw some babies, took something and left... that not much, even considering the time limit...
This looks like it could be an amazing show if it got some professional attention. Better acting, better fight scenes, better camera work, better plot development, better everything really. you have a great story to start out on but it's just not working with what you have.
Very interesting world that seems like it's really got something to offer, but the almost total lack of plot and exposition is really starting to wear on me. I know it's generally better to show than tell, but pretty much all we've been shown so far is Riese running away from guys in pointy hats.
Consider that on a normal television show we would have just seen the first episode (ie 40-45 minutes.) I'd guess this is a show that saved money on scriptwriters to make their costume designers stand out.
Oh dear, finally someone who have the same point of view that i have! I really hate this, i watch only because i love the cast & because everybody said " OMG AWESOME ", i thought i had a problem!!
Yeah, that;s kinda of a lousy deus ex machina, seriosly, the wolf's gone for most of the series and then randomly show's up in the moment of desperation?
@WildBuck007 wolves have since been deemed vile and corrupt by The Sect. The species is thus targeted for extermination, forcing Fenrir to hide in the wilderness whenever Riese enters civilization. to answer your first question
So far this only looks cool because it LOOKS cool. Aside from it being very visually pleasing, aside from that it doesn't offer that much yet. I hope it gets better in narrative development with some time...
The one problem I have is that age-old functionality problem. Those gears on that guy look they were put there with glue, and they aren't even moving! What's their function?
Otherwise, he's a cool-looking character with a neat voice track.
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It's just really, really bad. Bad premise, bad direction, bad cinematography, actors fumbling with bad cliched dialogue, and a plot you could drive a semi-trailer through...
The series just keeps sliding. It started strong but really I'm not sure if I'll bother further from here.
The episodes are still far too dark in lighting and far too light on content. Really nothing happened in this episode that couldn't have occurred within two minutes - yet it took eight. I have been given no reason to care whatsoever about the character, the Sect, or the world it takes place in - in fact I know barely anything about them at all.
Also - a warehouse filled with wooden crates of unsedated, unincubated, babies? Really? How is this even a feasible thing?
There's really no reason to fear the Sect if they are this horribly inefficient. I managed to keep suspension of disbelief for a guy with gears glued to his clothing but this is a bit much. Especially if we are supposed to believe that a warehouse filled with unsedated babies would be silent until the villains show up - there would have been constant crying.
Seven minutes of filler. Honestly, the episodes just seem to be getting fluffier and fluffier. The first ones were full of plot, but these last ones have been disappointing.
CrazyT6969: Some people might be very offended by your comment. Not everyone who watches this video will appreciate or even tolerate comment like that. What does that one comment say about your personality and what you're thinking about?
This could use some serious character development. The show doesn't explain what's going on, who the characters are, or why there is any tension between the characters. It's like a video game without the cut scenes.
oliverakhan: Would you rather have them take 20 mintues to explain every little detail about each character individually before starting off the major plot points and story line?
Or would you rather let them continue doing it the mysterious awesome way and let the story AND character developement happen naturally as the story progresses? If you want more information just visit the dang website.
I don't want a lot of detail. I just want enough to know why I should care about this character other than (1) she is pretty and in danger, (2) she has a cool pet, and (3) there are babies in boxes.
If the show's makers are reading this, I realize you've probably already shot and are doing post-production on the first season. But who is Riese and what does she want (other than to save babies, because everyone wants to do that)?
I think if they take away the credits at the end we will be able to watch an additional 60 seconds of the show :D over all I'm gonna keep tuning in to find out more! Love it, love it! :D
You've got me hooked! Good job please keep it up! :D and everyone just needs to sit tight and let the plot develop the way it should. You have to remember that this is only the fourth episode. the plot and characters are just getting started. Can't wait for the next !
Lots of tension going in this one. the episode seemed to fly by. I agree, however, with those viewers saying that we need a little more plot and depth per episode. I'm having a bit of a hard time getting into the world when i know nothing about it, or the Sect. All we know is that that they're behind some shady happenings. Why are they so evil? What made them this way? What sort of views do they advocate/oppress/force on the people of this world?
they shouldnt have made it 10mins a episode. it feels a little boring cause the main char havent said a word yet and stuff >.>;; im wondering if itll even make it to syfy
You really need to do more to establish the world. What is the Sect? Are they the government a "sect" of the government, a secret organization? And the main character is coming across as pretty flat at this point. So far it seems like all she does is poke around places and run from guys in hats. Here's a question to ask yourself, if everything she's fighting just disappeared, what would she do? At this point, it seems like shed keep wandering the woods.
Awesome, Bens character is perfect, i always saw him as a great villian character. I am glad to see some of my favorite actors from syfy shows come together and make a kick ass web series. I cant wait to see ryan robbins on here, this is going to be fanastic. But i am bummed i have to wait almost a month to see another webisode! Go Reise!
You know, for a series emphasizing how awesome it is, nothing much has really happened. Then again its a web series and still kicks the crap out of most of the other dramatic ones, if not all of them.
The show is definitely moving slowly, sometimes I wish they'd spend more time on plot than on on atmosphere, which is excellent there is no denying its a well filmed series.
Herek looks like Mike Mignola's character from the Hellboy comic series Karl Rupert Kroenin with all the gear and cogs.
akatsukimercenary 2 years ago
It would be interesting to see this series as a full length one, it has all the makings of a steampunk science fiction show. The same way Farscape totaly turned conventional science fiction on its head to become a cult classic in the late 90's. I miss that show, especially the Hynerian despot Rygel the 16th. And of course, all of its characters.
akatsukimercenary 2 years ago
Aww! Mr. Fangs <3 ... I mean the BIG dog ^^
ksym 2 years ago 2
I think she's said about three lines since episode one, she needs more dialogue, I feel~
rachelseagroatt 2 years ago 5
An episode doesn't really develop enough for you to get the entire point. I personally think this would make a better movie, not a web series. :/
KachiOya 2 years ago 3
The dog is back! Hooray!! I am totally enjoying this...it's great!
ourelton 2 years ago
Dude, this video has the best guard in the world. Because the best guards don't care about security, they care about when their next piss break is and when they smoke lol.
DiehardMechWarrior 2 years ago 5
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I agree that the show needs more character development, as well as more dialogue to help that development along.
Also, this might sound odd, but I think the show needs a smidge more humor... maybe a character for comic relief or /something/, b/c the show gets boring without it.
Finally, I don't know whether it's bad acting or directing, but when the Cyborg told the guard to get out of the way, he really ought to shove him out of the way if he's angry or means business, not gently nudge him...
neglabable 2 years ago
I'm not hooked yet, but I'm willing to follow this up and see how it develops. The main character has a fancy face, but that's about all you can say about her. We need more character development. Yes you can squeeze that in 9 minutes. :P
wolfke1979 2 years ago 3
@wolfke1979 I agree......
KachiOya 2 years ago 4
This has so much potential but falls very short of the mark its trying to hit
GoreGrindingTerror 2 years ago 4
I really like the idea, but hardly anything happens in these 9 minutes. and I am not suggesting to have more action. I like to see more character development; the protagonist's motifs are still uterly unclear, and she doesn't have any personality. the main villain looks great physically, but has no character as well. neither does the doc.
in these 9 minutes, she broke into the facility, saw some babies, took something and left... that not much, even considering the time limit...
Bepartofmynovel 2 years ago 5
Yes it could use more of this or some of that. blah blah blah, But it's good. I'm hooked! Hope you make it to the big leagues!
aehammond 2 years ago 2
Excellent production values for something put out on Youtube - very visually impressive. Looking forward to seeing more.
Chworktap 2 years ago 7
I am scary masked bad guy. Hear me moan.
"Hmmrhh."
"Umpgh!"
"Mrrrrroagh."
vRoja 2 years ago
This looks like it could be an amazing show if it got some professional attention. Better acting, better fight scenes, better camera work, better plot development, better everything really. you have a great story to start out on but it's just not working with what you have.
skywalker040 2 years ago
Hot chick lead, darthvader wannabe bad lead, and countless faceless minions...
Yawn...
This looks like a bad version of the original "theif" video game. minus the plot.
Whitehorze 2 years ago
come on i hope this gets better like more plot and more fenrir.....
42Unknowns 2 years ago
Guys, I stumbled upon your lovely web creation. I must say it's a nifty piece of work. I unfortunately must say I'm COMPLETELY HOOKED!
The only slight beef is no moving parts on the minutia of timepieces but the sound and ambiance are whizbang on!
If you loved Firefly or you love any scifi-fantasy youtube films, you'll definitely love this.
tdcmoncton 2 years ago
when the 5th episode is coming????????
maria12345666 2 years ago
January 4th
Krissie678 2 years ago 2
What does she say on 3-47?
westfilmtv 2 years ago
Very interesting world that seems like it's really got something to offer, but the almost total lack of plot and exposition is really starting to wear on me. I know it's generally better to show than tell, but pretty much all we've been shown so far is Riese running away from guys in pointy hats.
joshuas88 2 years ago 5
Consider that on a normal television show we would have just seen the first episode (ie 40-45 minutes.) I'd guess this is a show that saved money on scriptwriters to make their costume designers stand out.
farquestor 2 years ago
the plot line is confusing and not explanatory but it's still really good.
cos1663 2 years ago
I KNOW THE WOLF THAT PLAYS IN IT!
RoxyAgilityRox 2 years ago
ENTIRE TEAM IS BABIES!
patmason91 2 years ago 2
Awesome!! I enjoyed these a bunch. Keep up the stellar work.
abukii 2 years ago
Wow, technology hasn't been upgraded since 1910?
GryphonsBard 2 years ago
this show is starting to piss me off.
4 episodes and no one knows what is going on.
I'll give this show 4 more episodes of my time, if I get no answers by that time Im done.
EliteSasuke 2 years ago 2
Oh dear, finally someone who have the same point of view that i have! I really hate this, i watch only because i love the cast & because everybody said " OMG AWESOME ", i thought i had a problem!!
mandy00025 2 years ago 3
nope, you and I see things the same here.
I doubt any of these people know what is really going on also. I must say though, the costume design is really good.
EliteSasuke 2 years ago 2
Just wondering where the wolf was. Then there he was using that guy as a chew toy lol
Apparently kids these days dont need food or cleaning. Breathing and being stuffed in a box is all they need. Wow ! Who knew ! lol 0_o
WildBuck007 2 years ago 3
Yeah, that;s kinda of a lousy deus ex machina, seriosly, the wolf's gone for most of the series and then randomly show's up in the moment of desperation?
AwesomelyAwsome 2 years ago
@WildBuck007 wolves have since been deemed vile and corrupt by The Sect. The species is thus targeted for extermination, forcing Fenrir to hide in the wilderness whenever Riese enters civilization. to answer your first question
elirulez123 2 years ago
that guard was really enjoying his piss
turtle53081 2 years ago 3
@turtle53081 Lol I know! He's like, "I've been holding that in since the first episode!^_^"
CoffeeCupGoodness 2 years ago
im looking forward to see much more riese episodes, and maybe seasons,
im really impressed, and i can wait for more
gratz !
eQuillibre 2 years ago 3
So far this only looks cool because it LOOKS cool. Aside from it being very visually pleasing, aside from that it doesn't offer that much yet. I hope it gets better in narrative development with some time...
TakeApart 2 years ago 2
I feel the same way too. I wish they could extend every episode to 20 minutes to get more excitement.
TLC2287 2 years ago 2
The one problem I have is that age-old functionality problem. Those gears on that guy look they were put there with glue, and they aren't even moving! What's their function?
Otherwise, he's a cool-looking character with a neat voice track.
originaldiello 2 years ago 3
episode 4! yay!
iamscribbled 2 years ago 2
A steampunk borg - no good can come of this. ;)
I'm looking forward to more episodes!
totem12 2 years ago
Yeah, I want a pair of those goggles... just to have.
luckylucyb 2 years ago
very nice costumes ;)
kawieichheisse 2 years ago 3
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I enjoy comedy and train wrecks. All thats missing here is a laff track.
dedrumful 2 years ago
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It's just really, really bad. Bad premise, bad direction, bad cinematography, actors fumbling with bad cliched dialogue, and a plot you could drive a semi-trailer through...
dedrumful 2 years ago
And yet you've commented on every episode I see. If you hate the show why are you still here?
craiggyanderson 2 years ago 7
@dedrumful
Aha! Ahahahaa! Hoo! He! Ha!!! Lol. You talk as though you can do better. But, oh well! You're entitled to your opinion.
destaniofhearts 2 years ago
many questions, no answers...can't wait for chapter 2 :)
firnantok 2 years ago 3
Is it me or is the guy in the weird suit reminesent of Hellboys Kroenen?
AlbinoMonkeyC 2 years ago
I was just thinking that!
That's the creepy guy without a face, right?
EdouardDubois 2 years ago
Yep!!
AlbinoMonkeyC 2 years ago
Babies with tatoos - I love it!
WeirdMinnesotaGuy 2 years ago 2
that man in that creepy suit with that creepy voice is just..............creepy!!
carolthorn 2 years ago
i like it keep on coming
septumholder 2 years ago 3
The show keeps getting better, and more interesting by every episode. Great job, can't wait for more!
mmkloi 2 years ago 2
The show is missing the bare essentials in the plot and how it is presented. And its quickly losing its audience....
4evergreen143 2 years ago
The series just keeps sliding. It started strong but really I'm not sure if I'll bother further from here.
The episodes are still far too dark in lighting and far too light on content. Really nothing happened in this episode that couldn't have occurred within two minutes - yet it took eight. I have been given no reason to care whatsoever about the character, the Sect, or the world it takes place in - in fact I know barely anything about them at all.
I like supporting new work but its weak.
SvenTSexgore 2 years ago
Also - a warehouse filled with wooden crates of unsedated, unincubated, babies? Really? How is this even a feasible thing?
There's really no reason to fear the Sect if they are this horribly inefficient. I managed to keep suspension of disbelief for a guy with gears glued to his clothing but this is a bit much. Especially if we are supposed to believe that a warehouse filled with unsedated babies would be silent until the villains show up - there would have been constant crying.
SvenTSexgore 2 years ago
@SvenTSexgore
The people obviously have found a way to feed babies with plotholes. Plotholes are very filling and calming.
OnceAndFutureNoca 2 years ago 5
Seven minutes of filler. Honestly, the episodes just seem to be getting fluffier and fluffier. The first ones were full of plot, but these last ones have been disappointing.
miisspelled 2 years ago 3
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I like how the wolf just comes out of no where! And why does robobitch sound like he has a dick in his mouth???
CrazyT6969 2 years ago
CrazyT6969: Some people might be very offended by your comment. Not everyone who watches this video will appreciate or even tolerate comment like that. What does that one comment say about your personality and what you're thinking about?
KardSsen 2 years ago
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Dicks in mouths, apparently. The question is...whose mouths?
keysersozae 2 years ago
This could use some serious character development. The show doesn't explain what's going on, who the characters are, or why there is any tension between the characters. It's like a video game without the cut scenes.
oliverakhan 2 years ago 2
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helloyaman 2 years ago
oliverakhan: Would you rather have them take 20 mintues to explain every little detail about each character individually before starting off the major plot points and story line?
Or would you rather let them continue doing it the mysterious awesome way and let the story AND character developement happen naturally as the story progresses? If you want more information just visit the dang website.
KardSsen 2 years ago
That's a false dichotomy.
I don't want a lot of detail. I just want enough to know why I should care about this character other than (1) she is pretty and in danger, (2) she has a cool pet, and (3) there are babies in boxes.
If the show's makers are reading this, I realize you've probably already shot and are doing post-production on the first season. But who is Riese and what does she want (other than to save babies, because everyone wants to do that)?
oliverakhan 2 years ago 5
I think if they take away the credits at the end we will be able to watch an additional 60 seconds of the show :D over all I'm gonna keep tuning in to find out more! Love it, love it! :D
LEOWOLFE037 2 years ago
You've got me hooked! Good job please keep it up! :D and everyone just needs to sit tight and let the plot develop the way it should. You have to remember that this is only the fourth episode. the plot and characters are just getting started. Can't wait for the next !
tigerblues213 2 years ago 2
Lots of tension going in this one. the episode seemed to fly by. I agree, however, with those viewers saying that we need a little more plot and depth per episode. I'm having a bit of a hard time getting into the world when i know nothing about it, or the Sect. All we know is that that they're behind some shady happenings. Why are they so evil? What made them this way? What sort of views do they advocate/oppress/force on the people of this world?
xqueseraserax 2 years ago
someone have any idea y these people are kidnaping the babies??????
maria12345666 2 years ago
More plot please! This isn't a one hour or even 30 minute episode, this is less than ten. Less framing more action!
wanderingdreams 2 years ago
The series looks great but they could fit more plot movement into each segment, many of the sequences could be cut tighter.
berrybananaz 2 years ago 2
Can't wait for more!
Stefani37 2 years ago
Another great ep guys, keep up the good work! I'm hooked and can't wait to see the next episode.
lscott24 2 years ago
they shouldnt have made it 10mins a episode. it feels a little boring cause the main char havent said a word yet and stuff >.>;; im wondering if itll even make it to syfy
Darksassy 2 years ago
@Darksassy, that's not really they're goal anyhow. the creators have said they want to remain a webseries as long as they can.
xqueseraserax 2 years ago
o's thought they were just trying out web 1st then moving 4wards but still i think 10min a epi is 2 short
Darksassy 2 years ago
You really need to do more to establish the world. What is the Sect? Are they the government a "sect" of the government, a secret organization? And the main character is coming across as pretty flat at this point. So far it seems like all she does is poke around places and run from guys in hats. Here's a question to ask yourself, if everything she's fighting just disappeared, what would she do? At this point, it seems like shed keep wandering the woods.
WhenYouveGoneGuru 2 years ago
@WhenYouveGoneGuru Agree, because right now you can't understand the whole point what they are trying to say with this series
the0new0shadow 2 years ago
Yay, Fenrir's back! =D Another great episode; Bit more tention - Love it. Can't wait for the next one =)
mega99916 2 years ago
I like all of them =) nice work guys
yanislav16 2 years ago
Awesome, Bens character is perfect, i always saw him as a great villian character. I am glad to see some of my favorite actors from syfy shows come together and make a kick ass web series. I cant wait to see ryan robbins on here, this is going to be fanastic. But i am bummed i have to wait almost a month to see another webisode! Go Reise!
hbriffa 2 years ago
the wolf needs more screen time! 15 secs is not enough!
cruelascension 2 years ago
IT CANNOT BE DOWNLOADED!!!
darkhowlingwolf 2 years ago
I hope the rest of the series keeps to this general standard of 'made of win' :-)
EC10Classified 2 years ago 3
This really is an awesome web series. Subscribed!
Blitz71193 2 years ago 3
I found it interesting that the doctor crouched and held his ears. I thought the others did because they are trackers. Great job.
hardworker424 2 years ago
Happy the wolf is back! He was great!
Another cool episode!
LanteanWhale 2 years ago 2
this is great it doesnt need action to be great just the atmosphere and mystery keeps me on the edge of my seat, oooh the magister is awesome
adias06 2 years ago 4
Good job guys.
Krissie678 2 years ago 4
Absolutely fantastic as usual!
shelma32 2 years ago
Definitely the best web series I`ve stumbled across.
vegetta00 2 years ago
You know, for a series emphasizing how awesome it is, nothing much has really happened. Then again its a web series and still kicks the crap out of most of the other dramatic ones, if not all of them.
PeterWDawson 2 years ago 3
Good good =] Episode 2's been the best so far though. Keep 'em comming ;)
5*'s
JamesHazBeHaiTyme 2 years ago
The show is definitely moving slowly, sometimes I wish they'd spend more time on plot than on on atmosphere, which is excellent there is no denying its a well filmed series.
Mathieas 2 years ago 3
haha short but hey good all the same time. Although I do hope the series will give more than just this, I had very high hopes for it :)
track818 2 years ago
it was pretty much just her avoiding a couple people & her dog fuckin' some guy up.. Oh Well, i liked it. (: five stars, haha.
xXxMckennaaxXx 2 years ago
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WHOOO!! First comment!!!
Nathanseals 2 years ago
jerk...
ZachValkyrie 2 years ago