This song is okay... Great simplicity and effort put into, but I disliked some parts, and the ending was completely off and wrong to my ears. I advise you continue working on that ending of your song. :P Peace!
i made this one song up i dont have a name for it yet but at first i just thought it was a song that i figured out how to play but my mom and dad didnt reginize it so i started righting it down also i just want to say that the song that you have made up is amazing piano is my favorite instrument oh and i have not posted the songs yet ya i also have another song called lost in the woods its a short sad song the other one is longer than yours so hope you like my commet
I love this song. Some people say theyve heard it before but seriously most songs sound the same. If you added really good lyrics than it most likely would sound anything like another song. It was great!
It is really good! It's simple to make up songs on the piano for me! All you have to do is just play cords mainly and people think it's amazing! I have one posted but more of my songs are comming up soon! But you did really good! How long have you been playing?
Well you might think its already a song that exists, he says not. I compose myself and realise sometimes that i use parts of songs that aleady exist but are stored in my "subconsciousness". thats how it happens.
you know what, i made this song long before telephone was invented. i use the the same cords. kinda funny. i wonder what would happen if i had made telephone before lady gaga made it?
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg ur gai becoz u sed owenkennedy11111 cant play when u cant spell chords fag fag fag fag i am owenkennedy11111 so u gay and i can play
I wish i was that good at piano even with playing my guitar I made a vid to have peopl;e help me on my song If you guys can check it out and give me soem advice it would be cool
Umm no you couldnt. Your probably someone who doesnt even know how to play a musical instrument and has nothing better to do but say your better than everyone else at somthing you probably cant even do
its a really good song i like the chords and the way you put them together but the timing is very sporadic , try playing it with a metronome good work tho :)
Yeah I know how that is, Im working on my next CD so I need to perfect all my songs to my liking, so far I got like 4 perfected. and Im currently making two more. But you should upload it when your done! Check mine if you want, I need some criticism anyways.
you shouldent perfect songs to YOUR likeing, you should perfect them to other people's liking, increases your ammount of sale an how much people like your music, if you only perfect it to your liking, only people that like the same kind of music that you do will like it, thats what i have found out anyway, dont know if its the same for everyone.
well, I dont think I should really make my songs sound anything other then what I would pefect them to be. Alot of people like my music and I write songs for a reason. Personaly if Im pissed one day Il write a song about it, Im not going to make that song sound like a club beat. And the other way around.
lol, thats not what i was trying to say, i dont mean change the entire genre of the music. usualy perfecting means minor ajustments to the music, ask other people what they think of it when you are perfecting it, and what you should change. if you ask other people what they think, generaly it will help you become a better musician, and more people will come to respect your music.
i havent heard this anywhere.. i hate when ppl see previous comments and they feel like saying the same thing to not sound dumb.. what is this other song ppl say it sounds like?
dude i swear i have heard this melody before. but i dont blame you, sometimes i make up a song and come to notice it sounds very much like another song.
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Loser. Can't make up a song.. ON PIANO!?!?!?! I've heardthis song on a C.D you freak. Do somthing better with your life than trying to steal other peoples work.
I believe you should experiment the different tones on your keyboard and see if it sounds better as a different version, and if you find a good one, you should upload it :)
I like the 31 second area...still, after it reaches one minute it sounds kind off and weird...no offense but I'm just saying it doesn't connect well and the the right key doesn't match well with the bass keys...
Can you guys please listen to my 2 made up songs because I want to know which one is better. If you like it please can u tell everyone because i would love to have more comments views and subbs.
MAKE A TUTORIAL DUDE IT'S SO GOOD!!
blinkyblinkyb1 1 month ago
Much much More than AWESOME!! love ya!
meenal26ify 3 months ago
Nice work! Checkout the short song I just made! Im still working on my more complex one....
klrpiano 5 months ago
This song is okay... Great simplicity and effort put into, but I disliked some parts, and the ending was completely off and wrong to my ears. I advise you continue working on that ending of your song. :P Peace!
LinkBulletBill 5 months ago
nice
yzktewered304 6 months ago
lovee it ! sounded ahhh-mazingg !
LedaKhim 6 months ago
this is a nice song. clean her up and it'll be amazing.
tsukemaru1 7 months ago
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mandy1356 7 months ago
i have been listening to this song over and over again because i love it so much you should get the song published
marilysabe 7 months ago 7
@marilysabe
thanks
monster98012 7 months ago
i have been listening to this song over and over again because i love it so much
marilysabe 7 months ago
i made this one song up i dont have a name for it yet but at first i just thought it was a song that i figured out how to play but my mom and dad didnt reginize it so i started righting it down also i just want to say that the song that you have made up is amazing piano is my favorite instrument oh and i have not posted the songs yet ya i also have another song called lost in the woods its a short sad song the other one is longer than yours so hope you like my commet
marilysabe 7 months ago
@marilysabe
i like it
monster98012 7 months ago
I love this song. Some people say theyve heard it before but seriously most songs sound the same. If you added really good lyrics than it most likely would sound anything like another song. It was great!
gapaee21 9 months ago
hey if you don't mind can I use this for a song? x
QueenBling1 10 months ago
I love it!!!
misterbobisme 10 months ago
cool and my son made a song on piano not that good but his only 10
jeremydupas 10 months ago
its not already invented!?
jeremydupas 10 months ago
Good song. But the intro is a bit long.
ImAbOrInGiDiOtOfDeTh 1 year ago
sounds like beyonce halo.
Strawnament 1 year ago
@Strawnament
too bad i made this song before halo was written
monster98012 1 year ago 5
@monster98012 thats nice. good work?
Strawnament 1 year ago
haha i have the exact same keyboard xD
samborambo664 1 year ago
I love the "depth" that you gave this song. The right-hand notes would be good for a harpist to play, it's the kind of music like plucking strings.
Cadatroopa 1 year ago
nice man that was awesome
djman9111 1 year ago
...0o0
EPIC!!!!!^^
SleonHikari 1 year ago
this is a really good song, i also have just made my own song.. keep up the good work$
afromant903 1 year ago
It is really good! It's simple to make up songs on the piano for me! All you have to do is just play cords mainly and people think it's amazing! I have one posted but more of my songs are comming up soon! But you did really good! How long have you been playing?
youdomoo 1 year ago
@youdomoo
2.5 years
monster98012 1 year ago
It reminds me of snow... :3
DecemberPeach 1 year ago
sounds like a pokemon theme song xDD
AkaTrikz 1 year ago
Dis is so pretty!!
MsPerryRocks 1 year ago
wow awesome!
TheGoldenlegend1 1 year ago
Well you might think its already a song that exists, he says not. I compose myself and realise sometimes that i use parts of songs that aleady exist but are stored in my "subconsciousness". thats how it happens.
Famizen 1 year ago
I can tell you have made this up before telephone cause of the date you uploaded this vid. Its a really good piano piece btw
tonkslpslover 1 year ago
cool!
Mozkon95 1 year ago
nice song. really good but needs a kind of order to the parts of the song.
Mozkon95 1 year ago
That's nice original music :)
BrokenBrooms 1 year ago
YOUR AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
ivus10 1 year ago
kinda sounds like lady gaga telephone
Darkdragon8707 1 year ago
@Darkdragon8707
you know what, i made this song long before telephone was invented. i use the the same cords. kinda funny. i wonder what would happen if i had made telephone before lady gaga made it?
monster98012 1 year ago 5
very cool man. did you teach yourself or were you taught? just wondering cause im trying to learn myself...
SimplyMeHooray 1 year ago
precious! :)
PixterPro 1 year ago
Recently I have made a comment here, but I'll just put in another...
This is my fav part of the song (you should make a title for it):
1:00-1:27
By the way... I'm now writing this cool little song for my trilogy I'm making.. soon enough I'll probably post it.
Cadatroopa 1 year ago
Would like to hear you do another original before too long :)
BearKeys 1 year ago
@BearKeys
im making one now. maybe ittl be ready in a few weeks
monster98012 1 year ago
@monster98012 Did you ever do the original? Or did I miss it ? ?
BearKeys 1 year ago
@BearKeys
no i havnt. school has taken over my life! maybe over thanksgivin break ill work on it
monster98012 1 year ago
thats really good. :D x
Belieber132 1 year ago
Awesome!
アウェソメ、 ペテr!
Sant323 1 year ago
nice! *****5
Momentum4u 1 year ago
omg amazinggg
Mii109 1 year ago
Same as BearKeys for me. The video stops at 20 seconds. They player just stops.
dmengeler 1 year ago
Only was able to hear 20 seconds ... didn't sound like anyone else's song ... was nice as long as it lasted :)
BearKeys 1 year ago
What that is awsome !!
Angezz1234567 1 year ago
Hi loved it :D Please check put my videos XD
XOXO Vanessa
Vanny2829 2 years ago
wow this is amazing! and u made it UP?WOW!!!
DEsteban11 2 years ago
This song is amazing! A little on the repetitive side, but its amazing. You should add more to it. I love it though!
seachick12 2 years ago
This is beautiful. <3
LeMinz88 2 years ago
would be ten times better if it was slowed down
xxschnipesxx 2 years ago 4
I am making up several songs of my own too, but I have never heard something like this for a while. I love the song!
Cadatroopa 2 years ago
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg ur gai becoz u sed owenkennedy11111 cant play when u cant spell chords fag fag fag fag i am owenkennedy11111 so u gay and i can play
owenkennedy11111 2 years ago
i made up somethin simalar 2 this
and im diggin it
ledzepplin23453 2 years ago
I have the same keyboard. And is that a talkbox hooked up to it in the backround???
CBUCKPRODUCTIONS 2 years ago
@CBUCKPRODUCTIONS
no i wish. its the electricity. it was broken
monster98012 2 years ago
check out my song on my channel! please :)
BasketballMusic13 2 years ago
great song!! i made one up too! :)
BasketballMusic13 2 years ago
I have that piano:)
wangyaj 2 years ago
I wish i was that good at piano even with playing my guitar I made a vid to have peopl;e help me on my song If you guys can check it out and give me soem advice it would be cool
NukeYNukes 2 years ago
thats a remix of remember the name
LinkinPark841 2 years ago
Very good! 5 STARS!!! Can you please aprrove, watch and comment my video responses????
MrThePianoman 2 years ago
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MyAlphadelta 2 years ago
i love making my own songs
xEpiphoneSG 2 years ago
he did good..this is most defanatly origanal...a lot of people use that kind of chours....why..beacuse it sounds good
:]
on3toughmidg3t 2 years ago
You "defanatly" like to be "origanal" (haha anal) in your spelling
P0rtilla 2 years ago
Well, did you name it?
TheVirtualconsole 2 years ago
did somone say arpeggio... :P
fetus909 2 years ago
noo...
monster98012 2 years ago
Nice job! It sounds great!
hollyhappybunny 2 years ago
simple yet awesome.good work man
SoWatx 2 years ago
beautiful.
omgitsemily127 2 years ago
not bad but i could do better
owenkennedy11111 2 years ago
Umm no you couldnt. Your probably someone who doesnt even know how to play a musical instrument and has nothing better to do but say your better than everyone else at somthing you probably cant even do
urickdarocker 2 years ago
watch the tempo
its a really good song i like the chords and the way you put them together but the timing is very sporadic , try playing it with a metronome good work tho :)
Skate4Avenged 2 years ago
It is so awesome it made me cry 6/5
zeldaootmm 2 years ago
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Toraishikuru 2 years ago
Awesome but kinda predictable :]
ToontownMad2605 2 years ago
couldnt of put that better
MikeWoohoo 2 years ago
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Toraishikuru 2 years ago
Nice work man!! Sounds really cool!!
I made up my own solo piano song too and made a video!
check it out if you get a chance! Thanks a lot!!
matthewfisherpiano 2 years ago
i always make random tunes on my keyboard, ive got lke 20, but im working on perfecting this one at the moment, i may upload it im not sure.
good song!
Bickerz123 2 years ago
Yeah I know how that is, Im working on my next CD so I need to perfect all my songs to my liking, so far I got like 4 perfected. and Im currently making two more. But you should upload it when your done! Check mine if you want, I need some criticism anyways.
Skateboarder52 2 years ago
you shouldent perfect songs to YOUR likeing, you should perfect them to other people's liking, increases your ammount of sale an how much people like your music, if you only perfect it to your liking, only people that like the same kind of music that you do will like it, thats what i have found out anyway, dont know if its the same for everyone.
MandD64 2 years ago
well, I dont think I should really make my songs sound anything other then what I would pefect them to be. Alot of people like my music and I write songs for a reason. Personaly if Im pissed one day Il write a song about it, Im not going to make that song sound like a club beat. And the other way around.
Skateboarder52 2 years ago
lol, thats not what i was trying to say, i dont mean change the entire genre of the music. usualy perfecting means minor ajustments to the music, ask other people what they think of it when you are perfecting it, and what you should change. if you ask other people what they think, generaly it will help you become a better musician, and more people will come to respect your music.
MandD64 2 years ago
When I say perfect, I mean what you just said. And I ask what people think of a song and if they say its okay, I make it better.
Skateboarder52 2 years ago
wicked
brooke2617 2 years ago
BEASTY XD
THEXTEARSXOFXHATE 2 years ago
i havent heard this anywhere.. i hate when ppl see previous comments and they feel like saying the same thing to not sound dumb.. what is this other song ppl say it sounds like?
PierreLombardini 2 years ago
dude. you are an idiot. this song is in snow white
EricMunster 2 years ago
chourds?
chords ;)
veerlebregman 2 years ago
ur preety good
cuttyGirl997 2 years ago
ay man i have that exact same keyboard. its a pretty popular
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JJGodlyproductions 2 years ago
Winter Song I shall call it! ( If you haven't came up with anything tho.)
SparklieGirl12 2 years ago
dude i swear i have heard this melody before. but i dont blame you, sometimes i make up a song and come to notice it sounds very much like another song.
snowboardman720 2 years ago 7
its like that because your brain remembers it and copies it but in your own way
violinmaster2539 2 years ago
i reconise please don't stop the rain from james morrison in the beginning.
veerlebregman 2 years ago
well i made this video before that song came out, and it kinda sounds like it but not a too much
monster98012 2 years ago
yes i know, i've seen the date ;)
veerlebregman 2 years ago
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Loser. Can't make up a song.. ON PIANO!?!?!?! I've heardthis song on a C.D you freak. Do somthing better with your life than trying to steal other peoples work.
BambooTiger4 2 years ago
what CD is thi., this song is mine. i dont steal other peoples work
monster98012 2 years ago
ehh, it was ok, nicely played though :)
I believe you should experiment the different tones on your keyboard and see if it sounds better as a different version, and if you find a good one, you should upload it :)
L0rdDark 2 years ago
awesome
Evanesance661 2 years ago 2
wow! you did soooo great on this song!
PLEASE MAKE A TUTORIAL!!! (if you havent already lol) :D (the song been stuck in my head forever lol)
lilemofox 2 years ago
u r so talented i wish i could lern the piano like that i teach myself and im making a song at the mom but its reali dificult to choose the rite kyes
gwd job
badgirl4life911 2 years ago
please make a tutorial im beggin u:(
TheJoeb1991 2 years ago
love the sound...relaxing...
paul0337 2 years ago
amazin ^_^
SparkleHappyBunny 2 years ago
wow that was really good.
you should check out this Elliott kid and listen to his made up song 2.
Yours was really good!
Hearingtones 2 years ago
omg that is like amazing u r like super talented
jebuscatz 2 years ago
its good. but it sounds alot like the justin timberlake song.
MurphyBros70 2 years ago
Your pretty good not that sucked balls justvlike u and thatsva theme song to a vidoe game dumb
Dukentimer 2 years ago
sweet
TheLostSoulX 2 years ago
It has elements of loads of acoustic stuff I've listened to before, but yeah.
Pretty cool
IvyPianoMan 2 years ago
i swear ive heard this before i cant think where
lildread97 2 years ago
nicee
CelinevanElterenx 2 years ago
Very nice, I wish I could compose something like that!
esmine86 2 years ago
make a turtorail?
TehSabreShow 2 years ago
awesome!
daveebella09 2 years ago
its nice i just heard a song that simailer to it maybe ALL OF YOU GUYS HAVE thats been saying they did
GirlBubblePop 2 years ago
ive herd it too before
kingkonaha 2 years ago
Very nice to listen to. beautiful!
Alyssa71808 2 years ago
i herd that song before man
Hugogears 2 years ago
no, you havnt
monster98012 2 years ago
u cant have
spongebobremixyeye 2 years ago
herd before
lavagirl09money 2 years ago 4
can i have a copy? i luv it!!!
Caseyerincullen 2 years ago
pretty good job but 2 make it even better than the amazing piece it all ready is u could add a bit more variety
4everhidden 2 years ago
it will be da bomb
cokezebno 2 years ago
That is very cool! Good job
thomashanson8 2 years ago
nice song you made
AZNGIRL101101 2 years ago
I love it :)
courtneyandtammy 2 years ago
oh wow its beautiful!!! i want ot learn it
KittyLover6545 2 years ago
sweet dude... i wish i can make a song like that
y2k123 2 years ago
around the 49 to 53 second area sounds like halo. did you get some chords off that?
filigold 2 years ago
noo
monster98012 2 years ago
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Skateboarder52 2 years ago
omg you're amazinnggg. I can play piano but I'd never be able to make something up like that!
please do the tutorial!! :D
panicwithmermen 2 years ago
sure
monster98012 2 years ago
love it love it
stinsonstorm 2 years ago
that was sooo beautiful!
i play piano too and i cant make a song like tht ever!
can you please play twighlight i drempt of edward ppprrreeettty please
crazyary8 2 years ago
I like the 31 second area...still, after it reaches one minute it sounds kind off and weird...no offense but I'm just saying it doesn't connect well and the the right key doesn't match well with the bass keys...
Niwabari 2 years ago
i loved it!
It's beautiful!
5*****
<3 Jessica
jessicakobe 2 years ago
if anyone wants to see a song I made up on piano look up Isaac pwning homeschoolers. i am 10 years old
HiIAmAHamSandwich 2 years ago
Awesome you are so talented. I love your piano music. Thanks Joyce for sharing
5*'s+
jes941 2 years ago
niicce, i like it, how long have you played? its awesome, and not to be rude but im 300th comment haha, but still, your awesome
Holmezbx 2 years ago
This is very creative work, well done!
The only part that was kind of awkward was between 1:15 and 1:30, but overall cool! 5 stars
iintodin 2 years ago
great song but your keyboard sucks
IxPKEDxUTUBE 2 years ago
i know
monster98012 2 years ago
lol its better then mine.... ahaha
tiberiusjojo 2 years ago
nice
northciy 2 years ago
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QueenOfTheShlong 2 years ago
Epic! I like it.
KairosVids 2 years ago
make a tutorial plz!!!!
jwittorp 2 years ago
I got the same piano :P
Kevin9631230 2 years ago
OMG tis is nice!!!! 5/5
parkour1975 2 years ago
cool
munchlaxfan12345 2 years ago
make a turtorial plz ☺♥☺♥☺♥☺♥☺♥☺♥☺
lowblowwww 2 years ago
great job! 5'd
Ackdin 2 years ago
love it!
ssjboy55 2 years ago
good job
toxicbabydollz 2 years ago
LOVE IT!!!!!! plz make a tutorial
j0aNneL0w 2 years ago
awesome!!!!
shadowlibraboy 2 years ago
goood video now sub
bdudey 2 years ago
TUTORIAL PLZ
lasermountain 2 years ago
THATS WHAT I CALL AWSOME!!!! It was a verylovely song and made a very good first empression of you. Very sweat song. and you are good at the piano!!!
Christine486 2 years ago
awesome! Make the tutorial!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ
JonasBros651 2 years ago
very nice video
algebraguy11 2 years ago
hey
lespaullover624 2 years ago
Awesome song! =D
jurassicfan109 2 years ago
That was awesome!!!
Can you guys please listen to my 2 made up songs because I want to know which one is better. If you like it please can u tell everyone because i would love to have more comments views and subbs.
I'm only 11 but it's still pretty good!
Thanks
ElliottHerrington 2 years ago
smooth song dog. i think you should make a tutorial.
l0k0b0i 2 years ago
AWesome...
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