Thanks for the comments guys! Yea, there are definitely parts that need revision. Unfortunately it was due today and there are just things I didn't get a chance to fix/missed them. I most probably will revisit this piece in the future :)
yeah theres something totally cool about this. the ONLY thing u cud work on is the way the hands react with the enviroment (objects) around them for the 3d character.
Great work, especially on the girl's hair! A few more hairs for each spot and it will look perfect! However, the rendering looked a little glitchy in places. Great job, but perhaps a quick rerender of a few scenes with Vray might be in order. Also, to meke her glasses refractive instead of slightly opaque might be fun to try. Excellent work, and high five for coughing up the money for Maya!
Very original man! There is something very conceptual and artistic about this.
BY the way, if you ever get a chance check out Immortal Ad Vitam cause it blends both CG characters and live actors. A lot of the stuff was done in CG.
Here's a critique though, at the train station, I would work on the walk cycle a bit more cause she looked like she was sliding a bit. Also some parts the background was a bit still as the train was moving, but it wasn't that distracting. I give this a 5!
Wow! Great concept well executed!
smartbluecat 3 years ago
Cool
RMason89 3 years ago
Thanks for the comments guys! Yea, there are definitely parts that need revision. Unfortunately it was due today and there are just things I didn't get a chance to fix/missed them. I most probably will revisit this piece in the future :)
Cheers!
ArchLimit 3 years ago
I can't wait to see the revision Leo!
jweinrub 3 years ago
wow, very impressive. the story kept me interested all the way through, and the characters actually had some depth to them.
kmattson118 3 years ago
yeah theres something totally cool about this. the ONLY thing u cud work on is the way the hands react with the enviroment (objects) around them for the 3d character.
Alec013 3 years ago
Great work, especially on the girl's hair! A few more hairs for each spot and it will look perfect! However, the rendering looked a little glitchy in places. Great job, but perhaps a quick rerender of a few scenes with Vray might be in order. Also, to meke her glasses refractive instead of slightly opaque might be fun to try. Excellent work, and high five for coughing up the money for Maya!
B44rules 3 years ago
Very original man! There is something very conceptual and artistic about this.
BY the way, if you ever get a chance check out Immortal Ad Vitam cause it blends both CG characters and live actors. A lot of the stuff was done in CG.
Here's a critique though, at the train station, I would work on the walk cycle a bit more cause she looked like she was sliding a bit. Also some parts the background was a bit still as the train was moving, but it wasn't that distracting. I give this a 5!
jweinrub 3 years ago