It's 11:15pm, and I'm watching this for the 20th time, methinks. Just thought I'd mark the second decade with a comment :) I LOVE this song, bro. So catchy.. And so nice to jam to.
Hey Brother I just wanted you to know that I listen to this song everyday. I love the vibe and the truth in it !! I am so gonna steal this song for my gigs !! I'll give you all the credit. I play a few other songs I've found on youtube !! Man, there are some great artist on here !!! FUCK the Radio !!! PEACE JIM
Your level of honesty in your songwriting astounds me. You're not afraid to lay it all out there, which is what makes you a great songwriter. And the way you arrange your vocals around all of that is just perfect.
can't believe i almost missed this one matt. my ABSOLUTE favorite. your vocal is rougher and grittier than usual to convey the pain and bitterness you mustve felt writing these words, (assuming it's autobiographical.) and sounds AMAZING..
'one day soon she's gonna hear me on the radio'
thats for sure. thanks for bringing me here this morning.
Like the way the melody comes in full force. Sometimes it is a challenge to figure out how a song should begin - will it build? If it comes in full force, how to keep it interesting throughout? - but you made the perfect choice there,
You like to toss in non-standard movements, don't you Matt? The "why she left" line is pining for a C to resolve nicely to G, but you went with an F instead. It has a C in it so there is some resolution, but it introduces a whole new dynamic...
You did it again! The middle bridge wants to land on a C but you go to an F. I'd really like to see what could be layered on top to spotlight the movement. On this part in particular, you could slap a really cool bass mini-solo. The bass could be structured to lead the song into the chorus.
I like the final couple seconds the song closes but the ending does drag a little. You could probably cut out one or two of the chorus stanzas without harming the overall feel...
Either that, or some layering to make the song feel like it is continuing to progress through the repeating.
The second verse would sound super cool with some simplistic lead work on top. You structured it nicely to work as a solo piece while still leaving plenty of room for additional tracks.
Cheers Justin, about the ending, I had just written the song, as I got to the end I was thinking Shit, how do I end this, hadn't thought about the end, thats why It goes on a bit, trying to work out what to do. So it's improvised, wanted to end it on a G but it fell on a C for some reason.
You're incredible. You truly are... and gosh, I know how "old fart" this is going to sound, but I detected a really nice mid-70s Rod Stewart sound to your vocal on this one... having shared chips and dip with him at a house party - I can say that this is a compliment (like the guy - what can I say).
I really love your arrangements and lyrics... wow, I'm real impressed.
Hi, great song I was writing the back ground music in my head when I was listining to you play. Its got alot of potential. I see people like your music. Remember what I said when you first started? You were like an artist waiting to be discovered. A talented one at that--P.S. I still like your chord arangments too.
I'm really envious of how quickly you can write songs! Seems like you always have a new original up! Keep up the good work, I like this one.... kind of has a Glen Hansard feel to it, the raw angst kind of sound. I like!
Another great song Matt . Your voice is really good on this, its got an edge to it. Reminds me a bit of Kelly Jones. Keep them coming man its always good that comes from your channel1
Really great man, good voice and really honest lyrics, keep up the good work, you sound great, have a similar song, check it out, I would appreciate your feedback, its called "Be my wine",
Hey! This is Belgia from BANDE Radio Station! I just wanna tell you that this vid was great and it might just be the next WOW THING! We (me & my friend) are opening this radio to advertise other ppl's vid and also to have a lil fun ourselves! Visit our page, (click on my name) and if you think it rocks, dont hesitate to let us advertise ur vids!
hey man, i have to say this one really comes straight from the heart, love your honesty and straight forwardness, makes your songs really endearing. you are a star in my heart.
The feelings that pored out in your performance has moved my soul.Your song has made my night. I hope you are having a great weekend so far and I would like to wish you a great Sunday tomorrow. God bless you and your family.
Oh wow, at times if I were to close my eyes, I would swear that Rod was right there...let's see...a song about drinking? Yeah, I could see Rod having done that. Hey wait...didn't he do one not too long ago called "Cigarettes and Alcohol?"
I thought this was just great and the sound of your vids is always so clear. One thing I noticed with this one, though was the strange way that everything kept being light and dark. Was that intentional, Matt? Great vocal and song. I mean it.
this is great. lyrics are beautiful bro.
OSNitsJustin 2 years ago
beautiful song
rvsplunder 2 years ago
It's 11:15pm, and I'm watching this for the 20th time, methinks. Just thought I'd mark the second decade with a comment :) I LOVE this song, bro. So catchy.. And so nice to jam to.
milindrakulugammana 2 years ago
Thanks bro
withnailus 2 years ago
Your songs are always so heartfelt Matt, as well as a little sad :(
Brilliant again!
5*****
alpet07 2 years ago
Thanks Holly
withnailus 2 years ago
Thank You Lya
withnailus 2 years ago
Brilliant song! :-) *****
torstenq 2 years ago
Thank You
withnailus 2 years ago
Another great one Matt...Courageously authentic...You have a very distinctive voice, I like :-)
LadyWeaver 2 years ago
Thank You my friend
withnailus 2 years ago
So nice...always a pleasure to listen to your music! hope all is well with you man!
Love and hug Mary 5*
xoxoxoxoxoxo
MaryAsinger 2 years ago
Thank You Mary
withnailus 2 years ago
Catchy Melody, Great Middle eight !! Beautiful playing !!
Love the vocals, well done Matt !! ATB Terry !!
gherkamum 2 years ago
cheers Terry
withnailus 2 years ago
Hey Brother I just wanted you to know that I listen to this song everyday. I love the vibe and the truth in it !! I am so gonna steal this song for my gigs !! I'll give you all the credit. I play a few other songs I've found on youtube !! Man, there are some great artist on here !!! FUCK the Radio !!! PEACE JIM
jimiller7 2 years ago
Cheers Jim let me know how it goes down.
withnailus 2 years ago
This sounds wonderful my friend! Thanks for taking the time to share this with me! 5 stars as always from me! Love, Tamara xxx
RossiSinger 2 years ago
Thank you Tamara
withnailus 2 years ago
You are more than welcome! Love, Tamara x
RossiSinger 2 years ago
right on original man....
fingercheese 2 years ago
Thanks Rob
withnailus 2 years ago
beautiful :) I love itt, very honest. Your voice is awesome too .x
carolinetopping18 2 years ago
Thanks Caroline glad you like it.
withnailus 2 years ago
Your level of honesty in your songwriting astounds me. You're not afraid to lay it all out there, which is what makes you a great songwriter. And the way you arrange your vocals around all of that is just perfect.
Robby
robby63 2 years ago
Thanks Robby
withnailus 2 years ago
Hey Matt, thanks for sending this, it's great! you're so passionate about your music! it's really breathtaking :)
PhoebeHenry000 2 years ago
Thank you Phoebe means a lot.
Take care
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
This is quality!
Love it! all the stars and a place in my favs:)
theoneandonlyEvilT 2 years ago
Thanks Teajoe
Take care
withnailus 2 years ago
Nice original song and singing. 5 *****..Marc Jones-Vocalist...Los Angeles,U.S.A.
glennmach 2 years ago
Thanks Marc
withnailus 2 years ago
Passionate performance
5
rudyvandam 2 years ago
Thanks Rudy
withnailus 2 years ago
Yay! New music! Awesome job again!
sarahlacroixmusic 2 years ago
Thanks Sarah
withnailus 2 years ago
Very Cool !!! I bet every guy out there has been through this . I know I have !! Peace Jim
jimiller7 2 years ago
Thanks Jim
withnailus 2 years ago
Great song Matt! I liked the changes in the chorus; very cool
amccann7 2 years ago
Thanks Amy
withnailus 2 years ago
A good song yes indeed!
Rick
bios36 2 years ago
Thanks Rick
withnailus 2 years ago
great tune mate well done
11thedogfather 2 years ago
Thanks Mate
withnailus 2 years ago
This is great! :) 5 stars! -Tiffany
TheVolksSongs 2 years ago
Thank You Tiffany
withnailus 2 years ago
thats a good song- like the lyrics. and your singing is really great and special!
jelasings 2 years ago
Thank you so much
withnailus 2 years ago
what a great song.. 6stars ***** from me
8888windu 2 years ago
Thanks Mate
withnailus 2 years ago
Thanks Kimmo, I'll let you know if I find out.
withnailus 2 years ago
can't believe i almost missed this one matt. my ABSOLUTE favorite. your vocal is rougher and grittier than usual to convey the pain and bitterness you mustve felt writing these words, (assuming it's autobiographical.) and sounds AMAZING..
'one day soon she's gonna hear me on the radio'
thats for sure. thanks for bringing me here this morning.
healthyaddixion 2 years ago
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healthyaddixion 2 years ago
Thank you my friend
withnailus 2 years ago
Like the way the melody comes in full force. Sometimes it is a challenge to figure out how a song should begin - will it build? If it comes in full force, how to keep it interesting throughout? - but you made the perfect choice there,
You like to toss in non-standard movements, don't you Matt? The "why she left" line is pining for a C to resolve nicely to G, but you went with an F instead. It has a C in it so there is some resolution, but it introduces a whole new dynamic...
Oswlek 2 years ago
continued....
You did it again! The middle bridge wants to land on a C but you go to an F. I'd really like to see what could be layered on top to spotlight the movement. On this part in particular, you could slap a really cool bass mini-solo. The bass could be structured to lead the song into the chorus.
I like the final couple seconds the song closes but the ending does drag a little. You could probably cut out one or two of the chorus stanzas without harming the overall feel...
Oswlek 2 years ago
continued again...
Either that, or some layering to make the song feel like it is continuing to progress through the repeating.
The second verse would sound super cool with some simplistic lead work on top. You structured it nicely to work as a solo piece while still leaving plenty of room for additional tracks.
Oswlek 2 years ago
Cheers Justin, about the ending, I had just written the song, as I got to the end I was thinking Shit, how do I end this, hadn't thought about the end, thats why It goes on a bit, trying to work out what to do. So it's improvised, wanted to end it on a G but it fell on a C for some reason.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
i can feel the sadness....a bit of sorrow through this song.5 stars Matt...i really liked it
Kaiserks3338 2 years ago
Thanks mate
withnailus 2 years ago
really awesome song, love the bluesy soulful feel! 5 *****
SairahBella 2 years ago
Thank You Sairah glad you liked it
withnailus 2 years ago
good song!
ERICROBILLARD1 2 years ago
Thanks Eric
withnailus 2 years ago
I really like this song Matt! Great vocals and lyrics! ;)
KarenEng 2 years ago
Thank you Karen
withnailus 2 years ago
Matt....lol...nothing like a nice up-beat Mother's Day song...!! I like it,a lot. Now switch back to Mountain Dew and follow your dream *****
tps607 2 years ago
Will do.
withnailus 2 years ago
Great job Matt! Very passionate! *****
JuanLorenZerimar 2 years ago
Thanks Juan
withnailus 2 years ago
You're incredible. You truly are... and gosh, I know how "old fart" this is going to sound, but I detected a really nice mid-70s Rod Stewart sound to your vocal on this one... having shared chips and dip with him at a house party - I can say that this is a compliment (like the guy - what can I say).
I really love your arrangements and lyrics... wow, I'm real impressed.
Bflatblues55 2 years ago
Thank you very much, had a few people mention the Rod Stewart sound, but I don't think any of them have shared chips and dips with him.
Thanks for the compliment.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
Hi, great song I was writing the back ground music in my head when I was listining to you play. Its got alot of potential. I see people like your music. Remember what I said when you first started? You were like an artist waiting to be discovered. A talented one at that--P.S. I still like your chord arangments too.
Smokinbonez 2 years ago
I remember my friend, you were the first to discover me, never forget that.
Thanks my friend.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
I'm really envious of how quickly you can write songs! Seems like you always have a new original up! Keep up the good work, I like this one.... kind of has a Glen Hansard feel to it, the raw angst kind of sound. I like!
pianogirl8 2 years ago
Thank You, never heard of Glen Hansard I'll check him out.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
Another great song Matt . Your voice is really good on this, its got an edge to it. Reminds me a bit of Kelly Jones. Keep them coming man its always good that comes from your channel1
davemorag1 2 years ago
Thanks Dave
withnailus 2 years ago
i love it dude reminds me of James Morrison
btw keep an eye on my secret account I'll be uploading some new songs that i been working on
Indiekidd3051 2 years ago
Thanks Mate, I'll keep an eye out.
withnailus 2 years ago
;-)
DamianNixon 2 years ago
Your doing some serious soul searching on this one bud, a truly great song.
baldyholly79 2 years ago
Thank you my friend.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
Oh. I can so relate. I swear. Beautiful, mate. My favourite so far. Absolutely excellent. It's like you can read my mind :)
milindrakulugammana 2 years ago
Thanks man, hope you are ok mate.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
Really great man, good voice and really honest lyrics, keep up the good work, you sound great, have a similar song, check it out, I would appreciate your feedback, its called "Be my wine",
Keep rockin dude!
anonanomaly 2 years ago
Thank You anonanomaly will check out your song.
withnailus 2 years ago
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~Belgia
BANDEradiostation 2 years ago
Oh my this is a heavy one....sung with your heart matt....
put all your songs together and you will have a great album .. thx you for sharing ......x
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
Thank You my friend
withnailus 2 years ago
hey man, i have to say this one really comes straight from the heart, love your honesty and straight forwardness, makes your songs really endearing. you are a star in my heart.
soulofbass 2 years ago
Thank you my friend.
withnailus 2 years ago
The feelings that pored out in your performance has moved my soul.Your song has made my night. I hope you are having a great weekend so far and I would like to wish you a great Sunday tomorrow. God bless you and your family.
JoeFielding72 2 years ago
Thanks Joe, all the best to you and your family.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
Hi, Matt!
Oh wow, at times if I were to close my eyes, I would swear that Rod was right there...let's see...a song about drinking? Yeah, I could see Rod having done that. Hey wait...didn't he do one not too long ago called "Cigarettes and Alcohol?"
I thought this was just great and the sound of your vids is always so clear. One thing I noticed with this one, though was the strange way that everything kept being light and dark. Was that intentional, Matt? Great vocal and song. I mean it.
westpoint64 2 years ago
It keeps going light and dark because of the camera, the light from the window and me moving me head, glad you liked the song.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
the singing is good, kinda rod stewartish
efbeckley 2 years ago
Had a few people say that this week, never before, thanks for the listen.
withnailus 2 years ago
thanks for sharing the music! It's a nice tune!
jeremyfrancis 2 years ago
Cheers Jeremy
withnailus 2 years ago
Great tune! Thanks for sharing!
Antonia
asidgw19 2 years ago
Thank You Antonia
withnailus 2 years ago
I like your ending fingering ^ ^
marywinmusic 2 years ago
Hi Matt, enjoyin' your mellow tweedy-esque vibes ;)
Five stars. And boy your lyrical content. Hope it gets sunnier
^ ^
marywinmusic 2 years ago
Thanks Mary, thanks you for all your comments. Hope you are well, am looking forward to you collab with Soul Of Bass.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago