May the Lord Jesus Christ help you and carry you in your life!
He will, because God said: "And even to your old age I am He; and even to hoar hairs will I carry you: I have made, and I will bear; even I will carry, and will deliver you." [Isaiah 46:4]
Very well done, you've expressed yourself in a way that everyone can relate too. I've found that in my life, the best poems.. the best art has always been done when I was depressed. Writing your thoughts down is an excellent way to deal with your depression, and for a young man of 16 to express himself so beautifully, well, let me just say, I can't wait to see what amazing things you write in the future.
Very well done, you've expressed yourself in a way that everyone can relate too. I've found that in my life, the best poems.. the best art has always been done when I was depressed. Writing your thoughts down is an excellent way to deal with your depression, and for a young man of 16 to express himself so beautifully, well, let me just say, I can't wait to see what amazing things you write in the future.
that was so lovely, Ur really talented, exactly how I feel sometimes, and I'm pretty sure there are many out there who feel the same way, maybe you should write a sequel to it on ways to actually escape it, you write, and deliver your poems so articulately It may be able to touch others just as much.!:)
omGee..u are like really good...totally subscribing.. ((:
youshago1 2 weeks ago
This is beautiful!
evedek07 1 month ago
God bless you for uploading this, this really hit home for me. Thank you!
wizards147 1 month ago in playlist More videos from MrRobAtchison
You are really awesome at writing poetry. Keep em' coming!
chocolateblue101 2 months ago
goottt daaammm U not only beautiful ur amazing too!! wowww!! where did u come frm!! im in -3 -3!!
toni22coelho 2 months ago
Beautiful, love this poem.
datgurlshay22 2 months ago
Thank-you.
SleepingPug 2 months ago 2
Speaking the truth !
misschocolatechick2 3 months ago
May the Lord Jesus Christ help you and carry you in your life!
He will, because God said: "And even to your old age I am He; and even to hoar hairs will I carry you: I have made, and I will bear; even I will carry, and will deliver you." [Isaiah 46:4]
Lots of blessings!
Marialash 3 months ago
keep up the good work bro
CHIBOY847 3 months ago
Beautiful :0!! As you recite, I cry!
tearsangelz 3 months ago
I Feel You Bruv!
BlackSapphire8804 3 months ago in playlist More videos from MrRobAtchison
I love this poem! Your good!
evilpoet03 4 months ago
That was very beautiful.....I'm startin to try written spoken word and this was very inspiring
MissSuperlative 4 months ago
Very well done, you've expressed yourself in a way that everyone can relate too. I've found that in my life, the best poems.. the best art has always been done when I was depressed. Writing your thoughts down is an excellent way to deal with your depression, and for a young man of 16 to express himself so beautifully, well, let me just say, I can't wait to see what amazing things you write in the future.
AliciaHoover77 5 months ago
Very well done, you've expressed yourself in a way that everyone can relate too. I've found that in my life, the best poems.. the best art has always been done when I was depressed. Writing your thoughts down is an excellent way to deal with your depression, and for a young man of 16 to express himself so beautifully, well, let me just say, I can't wait to see what amazing things you write in the future.
AliciaHoover77 5 months ago
Snaps from a fellow poet...
kafrazier 5 months ago
that was so lovely, Ur really talented, exactly how I feel sometimes, and I'm pretty sure there are many out there who feel the same way, maybe you should write a sequel to it on ways to actually escape it, you write, and deliver your poems so articulately It may be able to touch others just as much.!:)
kimmy31488 6 months ago
I feel this *nods* *snap,snap,snap*
Edog2345 6 months ago
i lyk wot u do....
mustafaakasha10 7 months ago
Hey your good dawg
XD3v0M3rchX 8 months ago
OMG, sounds like my life....
khrystalwatts21 8 months ago
this is amazing.
ItsJeffreyDahmer 11 months ago
Very nice if more men could be like you and write down their feelings or express them the world would have a lot more brothers like you.
thewritegift 11 months ago
MAN another one & you wrote that at 16... Keep on Man, keep on...
edwitness3 11 months ago
ur poems are very touching and so true, and i can relate and i asume others can too.. ur very good at what you do, please dont stop
honeydip1031 1 year ago
Your amazing. !
TheAdorkable03 1 year ago
nice i love it so much great writing
marinai94400 1 year ago
Good stuff, I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more emotion it in.I can tell it comes from the heart, if you add some fire it put it on the next level.
TheNavac 1 year ago
can u convert this in mp3 form!
MoMurda408 1 year ago
Wow wow wow man u expressed what i couldn't express!!!! TY GB
musicengineer08 1 year ago
I WAS REALLY FEELIN THIS ONE. I COULD RELATE. NICE JOB. -RISA
shawtythug65 1 year ago
u r a very good poet from one to another
blessedstreet112 1 year ago
i feel u bro...nice job
ladymuziklover 1 year ago
i feel ya
thenamesfrancisco 1 year ago
Man, Once again... AWESOME!! I totally get this.. Keep up the amazing work
MrMikel27 1 year ago
Wow!....he's good
dlee4god 1 year ago
Rob! I am you and you are me.... thank you my brother..thank you. SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!!
ceeceelove68 1 year ago
wow randomly found you... clicked it wasnt expecting much... proved me way wrong
yaboo09 1 year ago
a i like that you touched a area i been trying to voice and understand myself.
THEVOICEOFRACING 1 year ago
boy you better do this thang
HAIRMODEL4YOU 1 year ago
that was a really good poem
*thumbs up*
5starsz
subscribed
RazeGeneration 2 years ago
MrRobAtchison ,You keep doing what your doing you have message that needs to be heard and may God continue to use you to touch our souls..Rene'e
711wildflower 2 years ago
Thanks. I really needed that
CRock126 2 years ago
Damn! You reached me.
shetech1 2 years ago
really nice.. i needed to hear that
madcell 2 years ago
Very very good
TruSticKyBudZ 2 years ago
Thanks bro!
wrzelitex 2 years ago
thats exactly what i needed!!! cheers...
Ogroovey 2 years ago
Dang.. That Was Awesome! U Go Boii!
black1992orly 2 years ago
whoa...awesome
TLowgurl92 2 years ago
Good work, enjoyed it.
drognun 2 years ago 4