Great job! I loved your melodic variation, and especially the ending in single voice. Perhaps now think about some more harmonic depth with more chord changes, and you will have a truly great composition!
OMG!! NO WAY!! Ok in choir we have to compose our own music. And this girls (WHO I HATE) compision sounds EXACTLY like this.. Wow.. That cheater.. AMAZING Compisition btw. Lol :)
This is good!!!! if this were a theme... the part around 1:00 i think would sound really good faster like in a movie or something. but yeah this is cool. good job
its a bit repetitive in the beginning it sounds good tho however i too can't tell where it is going one moment it sad next its somthing else its like you used bits and pieces of the song and just stick in there like it doesn't flow
however i can tell the hints of sadness in the song so yea n_n i enjoy it keep up the good work!
Wow! That's beautiful! I might add a video of my song on the piano! It's hard making up songs on the piano, right? You're great! Keep up the good work! :-)!
Thanks,and yea rather than hard, if you have practiced playing the piano for a while and have decent theory background, you can improvise and make that into a song:)
I like the feeling you bring out in your song, though I would have tried changing chord in your left hand. When you are using the same chord in your left hand it works like a base for your song to bring out one feeling, but it could be pretty boring. Thus, try to keep the feeling and at the same time increase the number of chords in your left hand. 3 or 4 is good, and to keep the trance like feeling be sure to use the chords in ONE order as a loop.
are those sony mdr-nc6's the crappy noise canceling under dog to the v6's which are godly. did you write down the music or is this memory composition?
I am currently writing a piano concerto. Its a bitch. I hope that when I'm done I will be able to get an orchestra to play it... Enjoy how other people can hear your song as is with out it being written down and as you want it to sound. Alexander Scriabin was know for playing a song differently almost every time he played it, depending on his emotion... Keep composing search for the emotion you, truely, want to express when recording notes, and Always check your theory! :)
you are creative i play piano too and i composed 3 songs called
noel of darkness and the sun blues and twas the night
MsSimslover123 2 months ago
Great job! I loved your melodic variation, and especially the ending in single voice. Perhaps now think about some more harmonic depth with more chord changes, and you will have a truly great composition!
jrb040892 6 months ago
check out mine at my chanel lllturralll /watch?v=HexVBFujsa4&feature=channel_video_title
lllTurralll 7 months ago in playlist Piano
verry nice :) i have made a piano piece too
youtube.com/watch?v=DuW8D08z580
pian0boy95 8 months ago
o3o amazing, you should make a tutorial. >.>
ttheFury2157 8 months ago
OMG!! NO WAY!! Ok in choir we have to compose our own music. And this girls (WHO I HATE) compision sounds EXACTLY like this.. Wow.. That cheater.. AMAZING Compisition btw. Lol :)
TheyCallMeAbs 1 year ago
Title idea Dark beauty hidden
Ravenwing1313 1 year ago
This is good!!!! if this were a theme... the part around 1:00 i think would sound really good faster like in a movie or something. but yeah this is cool. good job
tand 1 year ago
i love this i want to use it for my drama solo, any way you could get this onto an mp3 file? :)
annamcevoy21 1 year ago
hey great song! please if you have time check out my new video i composed a song too! rate comment and subscribe :-)!
mscplearnaeu 1 year ago
I love it!!! its the kind of music that makes u think if ya no wt i mean! A++
Leprikorn308 1 year ago
The begining parg is too repetitive other than day is really impressive
whitesnowable 1 year ago
can i have the sheet music?
AnimeLover1215 1 year ago
i love it what is it called
Shikamaru1174 2 years ago
it''s dark in a lovely way
Momentum4u 2 years ago
Honest..peaceful..terrifying and moving you expressed yourself beautifully thank you
shaunbag 2 years ago
its a bit repetitive in the beginning it sounds good tho however i too can't tell where it is going one moment it sad next its somthing else its like you used bits and pieces of the song and just stick in there like it doesn't flow
however i can tell the hints of sadness in the song so yea n_n i enjoy it keep up the good work!
KasumiTriste 2 years ago
you could really feel the sadness toward the end but in the beginning its .... idk can't really tell
KasumiTriste 2 years ago
the beginning is a bit repetitive but its very good
KasumiTriste 2 years ago
choppy near the beginning. work on the upper key some more other then that its all good. I can't follow it though, I can't feel a theme.
bramblehead0 2 years ago
is it minor key?
Nicie6817 2 years ago
no its G flat major
jojopooo 2 years ago
SO gorgeous. o.o
krystta 2 years ago
Inspiracional....
malcalas 2 years ago
SPLENDID!
IcePlknhty 2 years ago
wow!!! wat a beautiful piece of music! ur really good.
sesshy2404 2 years ago
absolutely beautiful...i wish i could play this well...and to compose it all on your own? thats just....(speachless)....Wow
Icec33 2 years ago
can i use part of this for an audio project im using? thanks
chunkybutt420 3 years ago
sure! go right ahead
mike3yo 3 years ago
Cool shit bro! Keep tickling and banging them keys!
brkdaice 3 years ago
thank mate!!
mike3yo 3 years ago
Nice !
LargeMagneticCloud 3 years ago
thx!
mike3yo 3 years ago
i loved the melody you really could be an expert.
wildstalion1 3 years ago
thank you.. i hope i can be :)
mike3yo 3 years ago
that is really pretty sounding. great job! i love the bass part too. keep up the awesomeness!
cultclassic182 3 years ago
thanks !
mike3yo 3 years ago
Beautiful sadness in your song.I like your work!
But I think it's in your first creations, isn't it?
You play with hesitations so i think it's your beginning.Great creation for a starting point
good luck for the next.
mndeeeo 3 years ago
Thanks!! yea this is my first creation.
mike3yo 3 years ago
love the end..
=)
nice work. i'm really impressed =)
f4st1ll0 3 years ago
thanks :)
mike3yo 3 years ago
Wow! That's beautiful! I might add a video of my song on the piano! It's hard making up songs on the piano, right? You're great! Keep up the good work! :-)!
SugarxPopxCandy 3 years ago
Thanks,and yea rather than hard, if you have practiced playing the piano for a while and have decent theory background, you can improvise and make that into a song:)
mike3yo 3 years ago
einsamer mond or lune isolée would make an appropriate name.
beautiful work btw.
AdonijahAvenged 3 years ago
true! thanks :)
mike3yo 3 years ago
;) you're welcome
AdonijahAvenged 3 years ago
I like the feeling you bring out in your song, though I would have tried changing chord in your left hand. When you are using the same chord in your left hand it works like a base for your song to bring out one feeling, but it could be pretty boring. Thus, try to keep the feeling and at the same time increase the number of chords in your left hand. 3 or 4 is good, and to keep the trance like feeling be sure to use the chords in ONE order as a loop.
avatarelite 3 years ago
thanks! I will keep that in mind. :)
mike3yo 3 years ago
are those sony mdr-nc6's the crappy noise canceling under dog to the v6's which are godly. did you write down the music or is this memory composition?
Jhierry7 3 years ago
yea those are sony headphones. Currently I am in the process of writing down the music. Thanks for watching!
mike3yo 3 years ago
I am currently writing a piano concerto. Its a bitch. I hope that when I'm done I will be able to get an orchestra to play it... Enjoy how other people can hear your song as is with out it being written down and as you want it to sound. Alexander Scriabin was know for playing a song differently almost every time he played it, depending on his emotion... Keep composing search for the emotion you, truely, want to express when recording notes, and Always check your theory! :)
Jhierry7 3 years ago
good work
Junyar 3 years ago
beautiful!
arulfis 3 years ago 3
thanks!
mike3yo 3 years ago
I really like it!
speedytheturtles 3 years ago 2
thanks, I'm currently working on some more pieces :)
mike3yo 3 years ago
wow dude
its hard for me to write a song
xNextStepx 3 years ago
haha meh I'm sure it'll work out for u if u keep on tryin! :D
mike3yo 3 years ago
lol this is the type of song that'll come out in like amadeus lolll nice!!
IvanDenis90 3 years ago
Sad meh??? Where got sad...
yipkc 3 years ago
at the end lol, the rest is scary/sinister
mike3yo 3 years ago
Excelent!
Erportux 3 years ago 4
gracias!!
mike3yo 3 years ago
damn...!
wolfmanlol 3 years ago 2