Great vid! All I would say is keep the music a bit more fast-paced/ Add some camera-shake at times. The bit at 2:10 is awesome! 2:18 to 3:24 seems pretty pointless/boring and should be cut down. Add some filter effects and better bad guy costumes to make it seem more movie-like and you've got a 10/10 vid on your hands!
@obadets3 thanks for the constructive criticism. we made up this video as we went so it's completely free-styled, that could probably explain the boring parts and the costumes. I did originally plan to cut out the pointless running through the woods part but never did.
@jjjproductionsssssss It's got to be music that gets you hooked into the action, especially if you want to build suspense. don't get me wrong some of the music you chose was spot on. If you want to see kind of what I mean you could watch my video SILENT, don't let the name fool you, there is some music in there.
I was going to be an overly critical ass, but I enjoyed this. Nice!
TheDarkerTide 2 months ago
Great vid! All I would say is keep the music a bit more fast-paced/ Add some camera-shake at times. The bit at 2:10 is awesome! 2:18 to 3:24 seems pretty pointless/boring and should be cut down. Add some filter effects and better bad guy costumes to make it seem more movie-like and you've got a 10/10 vid on your hands!
obadets3 2 months ago
@obadets3 thanks for the constructive criticism. we made up this video as we went so it's completely free-styled, that could probably explain the boring parts and the costumes. I did originally plan to cut out the pointless running through the woods part but never did.
jjjproductionsssssss 2 months ago
It was good, the only thing is I think the music choice could have been different. Other than that it was fine, good work.
jalbaugh24 2 months ago
@jalbaugh24 thanks man. i thought the music was pretty good, what kind of music would you like to see in the next video?
jjjproductionsssssss 2 months ago
@jjjproductionsssssss It's got to be music that gets you hooked into the action, especially if you want to build suspense. don't get me wrong some of the music you chose was spot on. If you want to see kind of what I mean you could watch my video SILENT, don't let the name fool you, there is some music in there.
jalbaugh24 2 months ago
@jalbaugh24 i see what you mean.
jjjproductionsssssss 2 months ago
Nice, the quality is visibly improving
IamIBAM 2 months ago
LOL, your scripts are getting better. Awesome effects!
xFrShizzLEx 2 months ago
Amazing :D
austintrent18 2 months ago
awesome
mb74012 2 months ago
@mb74012 appreciate the feed back.
jjjproductionsssssss 2 months ago