Flirting With Death ... Act Of Suicide!

[poppy19787]

this is sad, not to be glorified! what are you people doing? Clever words is only masquerading hurt, the thought of flirting with death is not romance, its desperation, hopelessness. If u ever need someone to talk to inbox me and i'll shoot you my number, even call on my own dime!

[gy214]

One of my all time favorite things in this world is poetry it really is a way to say " hey I'm tired and Im gonna fight with my words " the pen is mightier than the sord .... Keep up the guud work bro they are really guud

[nathjimusic]

AWESOME!

[Codawinx]

Is that you or some guy you got to read it?

[TroubledPictures]

@Codawinx yeah that's me :-(

[maximusD11]

disturbing

[ulealt]

invite God into your life, invite Jesus spirit inside you. all will end here in earth one day for you. but there youll live there forever. Heaven or hell is up to you. Dont be like satan people, dont reject Holly God who loves you.. Say: Jesus , please forgive me, for my sins and give me eternal life with you. i believe that you died for my sins and youre alive. i accept you into my life as my LOrd and saviour. Heal me oh Lord, help me to endure in this earth until the last breath. amen

[Sugabear1976]

How very depressing! I'm excited about life & I hv ALOT to live for...life can be trying & down right ruthless but the reality is there'll be good days & bad days but the darkest hour is RIGHT B4 DAYBREAK & we hv 2 keep tht in mind. EVERYONE has them (no ones exempt) but God will give U PEACE THAT SURPASSES ALL UNDERSTANDING & as u go thru ppl will wonder y ur not in a psyche ward or taken ur life, it's bcause Jesus'll allow ur good days to OUTWEIGH ur bad ones =) ahhhh life, LOVIN IT!

[EbonyJMurphy]

This was very gooood!!!!!! The message is so clear. Whoever didn't like this video needs to watch it again, maybe then it will make more sense.

[LadyShyye]

Can't say things are hunkie dorie but I manage. gotta look for those poems. wrote some of my best stuff in my worst times. the more depressed the more morbid and nicer the poems were. ??  oh well Keep writing and don't leave. I want to hear more. It takes time and time is a process. Keep in touch. will send you those poems when I locate them. was thinking about puttin them in a book. I think I have enough for a thin paper back. Toodles sweetie ~ :-D

[LadyShyye]

Wow! Nice. Now can you do a rebuttle?! Syke out that ol devil. you know... Syke! I ain't goin! Ex: Syke!, I said with a grin. You thought you had me with the state I was in. I'm betta than the life I'm livin in. Tired of sinkin in the sin I was in. Syke! It is I who has the upper hand. My Jesus gave me the victory over the shape I am in. He is mine and I am His I can do nothing in His presence but Win! No Matter where ever you may go, you are not and never will be in control! Amen! :D

[TroubledPictures]

@LadyShyye yes so true, wish i felt that way lol

[LadyShyye]

@TroubledPictures Been there baby trust me I got you. It's a lonnng process to get to that state just as it was to get to this. Had a good childhood but was just on another plane. Lasted a long time. Could always encourage but not follow my own advise. Betta now bbut I get where ya comin from and where you're at. But we all know and see the trap b ut sometime just too down or tired to even bother to be uplifted. write your poems. believe you me they were my letout as well. cont'd

[themiticteyux]

wow nice video :)

[SanjayMalhotraSongs]

Good stuff dude. Keep it up.

[followjesusonly1]

Intensely sad, but don't we all at some point in this existence of corruption. I thank Jesus that he found and rescued me before the date went too far. YHWH bless you.

[AkiiesThePoet]

You are officially one of my favorite poets. This is beautiful.

[TroubledPictures]

@AkiiesThePoet i'm only posting on my facebook page now, ... hey thanks Akiies, thanks 4 listening to a not so good life moment lol thanks a lot.

[AkiiesThePoet]

This is undeniable and I can relate to it because I have a troubled past but thankfully I've spiritually progressed and feelling great everyday.

[nemeth59]

You are possessed by a great talent, depth.....thank you...

[thomasriley111]

Interesting, compelling, good word usage, obvious talent.

My preference however is to flirt with life. ;-)

[ChaosControl1997]

I like it, dark and deep.

[36whitewolf]

I think im gonna show this to my teacher

[36whitewolf]

Ive been learning about Edgar allan Poe and he seems to be very good ... I like this to very dark.but good

[iLikeHouse1]

I love this alot

[infowazz]

@FrancoPepeKalle that's part of the plan. for us all to be miserable unhappy consumers who look to fill our voids. it is not a coincidence that record companies sign untalented puppets who will do anything to make money and get worshipped. the sins are so seductive

i've turned inside and attacked myself for no reason. hating how i look,how many of me are out there? how many are powerless because we've been programmed to be weak as the elites continue their domination

not trying to be deep

[sirdelrio]

Brother, i'm still wondering how you found me and sent me your video. But i appreciate it. And i'm not an expert in poetry, i've tried and read many classics and contemporary masters, but apparently don't have sensible ears fot it. One way or another, i liked your poem. I've always admired the artitistic soul, the refined sensibility that only finds expression in his art. Thanks.

[TroubledPictures]

@FrancoPepeKalle thanks Franco

[Lgreatdesign]

pure talent! and very thought provoking. God has bless you with a way to paint picture with your words. Keep up the good work.

[TroubledPictures]

@Lgreatdesign thanks Lgreatdesign lovely of you

[gerdenshed]

A great video my friend. A little dark but from the heart.

Mark.

[nadalele]

i dont understand Suicide.no matter how hurted people put it in a phillosphic way,there is nothing romantic abt it,u will die enentually anyway.ppl want stop the killing pain that kills them alife 100 times by Suicide, but it isnt a smart idea, coz u dont really disappear,u will go smwhere else u dont know anything abt, and propably its worse, as a punishment of taking ur own life, if dont beleive in religion then put a 50/50 chance that it is correct and dont go to a place u dont know.

[prettylissa10]

Ok, I have to ask...did you write this out of a dark time in life?

[tizzybutt]

This is wonderful dark poetry i love it everyone thinks good poetry is happy but the best poetry in my opinion is dark n mysterious poetry so staightforward but not. This is amazing i enjoyed it very much.

[IdaSputum]

POWERFUL. But please DON'T!

[bradcarsontube5]

Don't kill your self.

[Pretzeleminems313]

good job! this was deep! keep it up man

[CGZVIDEO]

I don't like suicide, but this video has a strong appeal

[underloved1]

Hi! guy Great poetry worthy of Edgar Allen Poe.Wish you success for your future.

Bye!

[akurtula]

i like it, very interesting. a creepy topic but you're great

[melaniietalk]

Amazing.

just awesome, you should write more poems you have talent (:

I loved it, great job!

[EndOpressionSession]

DO NOT and I repeat DO NOT commit suicide! No matter how hard life gets, NEVER COMMIT SUICIDE what comes after is terrifying!!!

[vnjgh]

it's depressing when you're not in such a mood... but very good job though !

[MrCartoonguy]

Don't kill yourself. You have no idea what is on the other side.

Beat your mental enemy.

Find strength.

[enest94]

Very deep and poetic. You have a poetic talent my man, so keep on writing!

[Noblyuntruthful]

Hey thats not bad.

[Mohonnova]

Most poetic an hero EVAR!

[XbLIcecoldkila15]

I have a small penis.

[TroubledPictures]

@XbLIcecoldkila15 don't worry, as long as it works you'll be fine

[JenkenMedia]

This is excellent. I'm a professional writer & television producer and I'm really impressed. God blessed you abundantly with talent. Don't waste that gift by hurting yourself. I'm here if you need to talk.

[TroubledPictures]

@JenkenMedia hey thanks JM

[bsggurl18]

I haven't any commentary on the prose itself, or the delivery. Tell me why you made this, what you want to achieve, and why you thought it was relevant to me. Actor or not, when people make videos like this they have something going on in their head. Was this reaching out to raise awareness, or reaching out because you need attention? And "attention" isn't a pejorative, folks.Some people ACTUALLY need & deserve it,it doesn't have to have a negative connotation. You have an ear for the moment

[TroubledPictures]

@bsggurl18 and yeah i have things goin on in my head ... thats why i write and post them, to express them.

[4lifelg]

you need Jesus Christ

i was in the darkest place in my life when i turned to Him repented and trusted in Him

He saved me and now i try to tell people i meet that Jesus saves from our sins and temptations but also eternal hell

be blessed

[Urza26]

Out of curiousity, how do you know I'd be interested in this? I've been thinking of reciting my poetry online as well. Anyway, nice take and nice poem.

[mrdee11091]

thanks nice poem



[099kimi099]

I know exactly how it feels... beautiful poem, you really are tallented!

[MissyKayBay555]

You have a wonderful way with words.. I'm a writer myself, and have some of my writing published online... I am a memeber of a site that shares writings... And none of the pieces I've seen flow so wonderfully, and rhyme and don't sound cheesy. I love this... Especially becuase I as well have been in a place where I wrote like this.. Is still do sometimes... The writing in this.. It moved me.. Keep writing, you're amazing.

[TroubledPictures]

@MissyKayBay555 thanks MissyKayBay

[SomethingSea1]

@TroubledPictures You show an appropriate amount of defense. I now totally withdraw the accusation, apologize for the intrusion, and thank you for showing me another sort of my reaction to things.

[SomethingSea1]

I want to apologize for what I've said. I think I responded prematurely, and since it is a subject rather close-to-home for me, was frustrated with this expression of it.

[SomethingSea1]

You don't want to kill yourself. You want the attention of it. Go ahead: kill yourself. You won't. Then you couldn't get more attention from people. Or perhaps I'm mistaking the intention? Why, then, do you emphasize for dramatic effect? You're not suicidal; you're a performer.

[TroubledPictures]

@SomethingSea1 just because i am a performer does that mean i am not suicidal?? so i am assuming now you think performers cant be suicidal? really?

[jazzythetank]

@TroubledPictures You have an amazing way with words...great job...

[sticksbass]

@TroubledPictures gee wiz dude. i struggle w suicidal thoughts myself even though i know its horribly wrong. why do you?

[sleekcartim]

 "AT 13" a spoken word poem, here on youtube.

[BitterBetsy]

Thumbs up

[sleekcartim]

kinda irresponsible... should never glamorize suicide. You have to think of how others will percieve this, you could have blood on your words. you should list suicide hotline contact info in the tags too

[TroubledPictures]

@sleekcartim irresponsible? well i'm sorry for writing a poem about how i wanted to meet death and kill myself! Glamorize? i wrote it and i fail to see any glamor at all in the poem, creativeness? yes! glamor NO! matter of fact i find it horrible and eerie that i have/had such feelings!

[sleekcartim]

@TroubledPictures 0:51 to 1:00 1:16 to 1:26  this is all a sucidal kid will hear

[SomethingSea1]

@sleekcartim And now we're on to politics and controlling other people, considering them as lesser than yourself. Oh, but the suicidal person is in a compromised state? Because of those who were controlling the suicidal person! The want for suicide is rooted in the feeling of a lack of control; a feeling of helplessness. Expression of the feelings, being able to talk freely about things, and not being PC about shit is the way to help suicidal people, but that shouldn't be the goal.

[SomethingSea1]

@sleekcartim What's the goal? Talking with another human being. Because that's what a suicidal person is. Someone else. Another person. Not a fucking child incapable of thought. Not a fucking imbecile whose IQ is less than 0. A person. Treat them the way you'd treat an equal, because that's what they are.

[TheGreenPlague]

I been there.

[Serpentium7]

very well versed...great video of expression

[333ShadowFire]

This gave me chills. You, sir, are talented.

[WhatABadAssArmy]

u are good like da vid and thats deep i will inbox u a poem i wrote later on it is about my ex bf who was murdered.

[dangerman22379]

This kid is obviously a talented poet. Although I think he might have just smoked a super blunt before making this,hopefully his next attempt is a little more up tempo and less depressing! PEACE

[TroubledPictures]

@dangerman22379 yeah send me that SUPER BLUNT ok i give it a try lol this page i write all about my lows!

[kirsteninsane]

oooo. :). that was great. :)

[CopingvsMoping]

This is amazing - did you make this yourself?

[TroubledPictures]

@CopingvsMoping thanks, yeah sadly i did make it myself ...

[AussieTheOztralian]

Thanks for sending the vid.

[Kimerats]

I really like really like this, it feels like part of my own thoughts.

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[JamesSeattle]

I've flirted with her several times

Through the acts of others.

Pain is not the magic pill

In dialogue.

Chic words to cloth an unending rot,

I see her often, waiting for my error,

Which I will make.

We all do.

Her song approaches.

[jodywhiteley]

Spooky. Well done.

[ToddBoyle]

Most people who suicide tell of their plans :- ( never ignore their cries. sometimes they really don't want to die.

[MariaFortiz]

Very cool. Reminds me of the work of John Donne.

[beastpimpreborn]

sup brah sweet poem!! im sure your not because i know writers like to take characters of other people but. If you are think of killing yourself instead of shooting yourself in the head go do something awesome and dangerous like some james bound shit, or go and fuck to brazil and party can fuck some hookers with some STDs. go see the world, and then maybe after ur done doing all that stuff you wont want to kill urself because you will see how beautiful the world really is.

[NoelleC4]

scary, but so deep excellent job!

[loftusboy9]

wow,,,that's a serious poem,,beautifully put to-gether & recited...liked it..

[DTmusic003]

Great video!

[JAYCZero]

Beautiful is what I can say , Absolutely Beautiful. I feel your pain, and I'm here to show you Brotherly Love. Great Poem

[chuckmalmsteen]

40 clocc?

[leonardfr1966]

merci pour le partage 5*******

[Ejoy4]

You have must of really got hurt. I am so so sorry. I undersand this poem totally. I've been through it and in it. This is fabulous. I really hope you took my last advise about submitting your poems to REAL poetry contests.

[NintendoPaperboy]

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