Why is the actor's voice so squeaky? This looked nice, but the gunshots could have been more than sounds and there were some places that you could have used a tripod.
I guess that squeaky isn't the right word, but his voice maybe seems a little to high pitched to play his part. One would expect a husky, low pitched voice.
Technically, this was very good. Very good all around. The music didn't fit that much, but this is the first one i've seen where the makers of the film actually made their own music and didn't use royalty free or infringe on other people's music, so great work there! The writing was pretty good i thought, and the acting was good, minus a couple over-acted parts, but hey, it looks great, it's coherent, and its a great ad...i loved the "mob wars" written in blood at the end! very clever. good job.
the music is all about perspective. going for something from the 30's or 40's just seemed cheezy. we wanted to go for epic and dramatic. thanks for the comments!
This was awesome! I loved the knife throwing effect! I also liked that you had Asians representing! :) Is Jasmine Rice a real name?? LOL! :) Very nice work!
Outstanding work! It seems to be the only entry so far that actually tries to sell the game and not some pre-produced indie film. Loved the sound track.
Since when is there a knive on mobwars?
harrybilbao 2 years ago
I loved the music in this! The part when the guy gets punched in the face and the drums kick in, epic!
EidolonStudios 2 years ago
Why is the actor's voice so squeaky? This looked nice, but the gunshots could have been more than sounds and there were some places that you could have used a tripod.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
Squeaky? try getting a new sounds system.
TheDeadtreePictures 2 years ago
I guess that squeaky isn't the right word, but his voice maybe seems a little to high pitched to play his part. One would expect a husky, low pitched voice.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
Technically, this was very good. Very good all around. The music didn't fit that much, but this is the first one i've seen where the makers of the film actually made their own music and didn't use royalty free or infringe on other people's music, so great work there! The writing was pretty good i thought, and the acting was good, minus a couple over-acted parts, but hey, it looks great, it's coherent, and its a great ad...i loved the "mob wars" written in blood at the end! very clever. good job.
TheSKPFilms 2 years ago
the music is all about perspective. going for something from the 30's or 40's just seemed cheezy. we wanted to go for epic and dramatic. thanks for the comments!
TheDeadtreePictures 2 years ago
The good and the bad:
-fake acting when hit gun
-voice over (voice and the words) was only OK
-love that it advertises game
-awesome knife effect
-interesting blood logo
AdamCollet 2 years ago
This one was really good :D
ginagag 2 years ago
Thank you!! :)
TheDeadtreePictures 2 years ago
Thank you! It's a stage name, she doesn't want her real name advertised :P
She thought it was funny to have that name.
TheDeadtreePictures 2 years ago
This was awesome! I loved the knife throwing effect! I also liked that you had Asians representing! :) Is Jasmine Rice a real name?? LOL! :) Very nice work!
MobWarsTrailer 2 years ago
are you gonna compile these on a disc?
;-P just fer me of course! hee hee
molz
BriarEire 2 years ago
Thank you ALL for your compliments, we love to entertain and we're very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your input and support!
TheDeadtreePictures 2 years ago
That ROCKED, guys!
Dlinthe 2 years ago
This is so totally cool. :D
skittishgrrl 2 years ago
hahahah! Awesome! Love the lighting!
revamptramp 2 years ago
That was awesome guys! I hope you win!
blushing1devil 2 years ago
Awesome work guys! Great job! I hope you win!!!!!
fleshcouldcrawl 2 years ago
Outstanding work! It seems to be the only entry so far that actually tries to sell the game and not some pre-produced indie film. Loved the sound track.
SLLEPNAD 2 years ago