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  • Sadder story gurl stops meking out n asks boi to get potartz. he dus. den gurl teks deep breff. den gurl sais "bf i am pregnent will u stay ma bf" n he seys "no". gurl iz hertbrokn. ////3 gurl cried n runz awaii from boi wiffout eatin poptart n she has low blood suga so she fols. boi runs ova 2 her. she ded /333333333 boi crie "i sed i no b ur bf...cuz i wona b ur husband!" he screems n frows poptart @ wol....a bootiful diomand ring wus insyd. *** LIK DIS IF U CRY EVERTIM***
  • Ill tell you why this poem is lies

    When the young girl asked the nurse before dying

    '' would you Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,

    And that it's my fault so many have died ''

    Why would the nurse refuse the girls request

    she had no idea what the girl meant

    '' Apologize to my parents '' could just as well have been

    '' Im sorry for killing you, please dont ground me ''

    This is just some sad sappy story here let me try one - Kitten diez ... FIN

  • Yea cant make a something sad rhyme like this. Reminds me of childhood books and gay childrens tv shows ( with puppets and a waaayyy to childish grown up )

  • This one is a copy of one I just watched O_O

  • @Amytaylorful Yea I watched the exact story few years ago, but I know it wasn't in the way this video was made..

  • Awwww<3

  • now im reely sensitive ....

  • There's a clamp of true sadness inside me that cannot be broken up into words.

  • omfg thats soo sad i acctually have no words to explain this :(

  • omg that's so sad! while writing this comment a tear fell out of my eye! :'(

  • Hey guys!

    Watch mine!

    If it gets up to 1k views I'll make a series of it.

    Hope you are one of those. :D

    Its also a scary story! :)

    Also, rate and comment, thanks :)

  • T_T SAD!!!!!

  • so sad!:( the rhyming kinda ruined it thoT_T

  • Aww soo sad TTwTT

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  • ...my name's Jenny T_T

  • This was so sad but I'd want to know if I killed my family

  • Every 15 Minutes.......................­..

  • Very sad, I think it would have been more sad if you had some sad music playing in the background, just my opinion

  • I CRIED!!!!!!!!!!

  • ...0_0

  • This is so shit good

  • @sms01rocks Thats what a poem is...

  • pause at 0:00 hold left and press up at same time enjoy playing snake :)

  • o ive heard this poem before on a cd but it was in spanish

  • Did you make this quote/poem??? It was so freaking sad!! And it rhymed... Skills but sad :(

  • Omg! this is so sad! :"(

  • the last paragraph was so sad :'(

  • really good story, i had to go in a spare account i could remember to post this comment that story almost made me cry.

  • awwww :( whenever it got to the second to last paragraph i guessed that it was her parents in the other car ... i started crying

  • T.T sooo sad T.T

  • dam, this is sad. D:

  • Nurse: Because the people in the other car were her parents THEN U COULD HAVE TOLD HER BEFORE SHE DIED! DUH!

  • Oh wow. that is some sad shit.

  • tears come very easy to this story 

  • i liked it but it was disturbing

  • My math teachers told us this story in class last year. It made me tear a bit. This year again she said the same story. Even though i heard it before I still find it sad.

  • oh dear

    now my tears woke up in the this sad story at the

    fiiiiiiiiirrrrst time

    (because I'm a boy)

  • I had a heart attack when the nurse said "Because the people in the other car were her mum and dad." Awww so sad :) But incredibly true...

  • Well at least she also died

    And then saw her mommy and daddy in heaven ;,3

  • O my god........... soooooo sad!

  • U copied this from someone copycat

  • @BearyXOXO 1 ITS A PUBLIC STORY

    2 copycat wtf?

    AND 3 hai :P

  • ive heard this before but yes its very sad =[

  • That was so tragic... :'( I pity the girl so much. She never even knew who those people in the other car were and she didn't even see her parents before she died... this is just so sad.... :((

  • same here @guyenese11

  • same here @ guyenese11

  • awe how sad :'(

  • omg...

    is tht a true story??

  • @novideosforme123 lol it best not be im cryin

  • omg, that wasnt expected

  • damn, epic ending

  • @batbomb9 i know right.

  • awww thats terrible!!! my eyes are all watery

  • ohmigosh! that's horrible!):

  • That Is Really Sad :'(

  • Nice poetry. =P plus i m an environment freak so i never go in cars or buses unless needed. other wise i either walk or ride a bike so im pretty much safe! ~ =P

  • : * (

  • Type Falalongkornz into the search engine and click the video entitled "The Promise". It's a love story, too, based on a true story.

    :-)

  • wow gay !!!!!!!!!

  • Omg I got the chills at the ending but are u sure this story/poe is even true?!

  • @KittiKatti1 probaly not if rhyming too just wrote his herself thats good and nice writer

  • omg that is so sad

  • I stopped when she wanted to date a guy to get popular. typical highschool slut with no brains, not deserving of any kind of sympathy because they bring it unto themselves.

  • ahaha man they got pwn3d.... jk kinda sad

  • omg.......thats...thats s-so sad : '( im tearying up......i cant imagine this happening to someone....its so so sad : '(

  • wow....... omg sad i couldnt imagine ; (

  • Omg!!! you should be a poet no joke!!!

  • This just tells you one thing. Praying to god doesn't do much for you.

  • @ALEX1010321 that's because God has other plans for you if he doesnt answer your prayers. though it might seem true that praying doesnt help, it doesnt mean that youshouldnt believe in him.

  • @MochiMochable god should cancel his (? is "god" a he) plans for me. I don't believe that bullshit. Don't waste your time messaging me about god.

  • F22raptordude, how can you read the comments but not the story?

  • I guessed that either her parents were in the other car, or her parents were the doctor and nusre, but he didn't know it.

  • lol 

  • Woah;

    1] it rhymes;

    2] That was super powerful.

    This shows you that second chances arent available.

  • damn u made me tear...

  • omg thats soo sad ad very powerful!

  • awwwwwwww i feel so bad is this a true story??

  • aww :(

  • his been copied so many times

  • Looks sad from the comments but its hard to read with my bad eye sight, sorry but i still rate thumbs up :)

  • I can't stop crying

  • omg this is soo sad..:(

  • mom dad i love you so much <3333

  • mom dad i love you sooo much <333

  • that ending was just .. WHOA . that story was very sad :'C

  • this story is so sad. :( Man... poor girl.. her poor family :(...

  • i read this in my Driver's Ed class and I started to cry. This is so sad

  • guys, please go to my channel and watch my sad love story! please,please!! please,please!! please,please!!

  • It's really, really, really sad =' (

  • @farzanjava her parents would also have had to live without a daughter if it hadnt been been them, and they would have felt guilty for letting her out. ALSO they would have died thinking that Jenny was an orphan anyway

  • :'( im in tears! ='(

  • wheres the real story?

  • badass poem yo, good stuff, but sad T.T

  • WOW... icryedddddddddd :T & WOW it Rhymeedd EVEN BETTER & it was SOO Un expectingg.

    Juss HEart Breaking :(

  • I never expected the ending =o

  • the ending surprised me. thats sad. D:

  • oh....sooo sad...

  • Thats a good story but a load of bullshit

  • Omg I cried and my gf had to comfort me

  • that was so sad! if she were alive I bet she would regret that!

  • i think i may cry.......:(

  • Fuck urself ,hope he died

  • i saw this video except different at the end i cried

  • Sweet jesus IT RHYMES =O!!!

  • tht was sad

  • is tht story real!!

  • Yea, Sadly that is a real story it was in the news 2 months ago

  • common people lets be realistic! if jeff was half drunk and then smoked two joints the weed would have evened it out and he would have drove fine for the moonlit ride.

  • i think its true but i just went kool (:

  • this was the best story ewer it almost maked me cry and i never cries to a video like this

  • Omgz IT RHYMES !

  • lol

  • @goldstargirl1 Omg you noticed too? =O

  • My cuz said that during her the beginning of highskool, freshman year, some dude that use to be in jail, sumthing like that, told them a sad story, and then read them a poem. It was exactly like this!!!! True story!!!! supposably!!

  • omg......im crying....its sooo sad ='(

  • i cry everytime i watch this :'(

  • that was good.

  • It's sad, but NOT true. -.-

  • This story was brilliantly written, you should become a poet if you wrote this, so utterly sad!

  • ive heard this story before but it dosent make it any less upsetting. im scared of cars because my friend got killed by 1. altho thats kinda different.....

  • T_T so sad... i didn't expect the girl's parents to die...

  • omg is this a true story?!

  • wow.... when i read the part tht talked about the man asking y the nurse didnt agree, i was like "OMG THE OTHER PPL WERE HER PARENTS" i was rite :(

  • lol it took me a while to relize it rhymes:P

    but that was soo sad i'm actually tearing up...

  • @guyenese11 Same here.

  • i cried !!!

    My names Jenny to !!

    :(

  • Oh, poor girl! Thats sooo sad :(

  • omg so sad, ;'[

  • i read this story before!!!!!

  • aw.. :(.. this is the saddest story. :(

  • life leason. not lisening to your pearents hurts more then just you. it could hurt everyone around you. think before you go off against perentle permmsison. becuse you never know, you might end up like poor jenny.

  • that was sad... =(

  • omg so sad

  • it wasnt sad but i liked the ending.. it could have benn you..

  • she didnt write it poohbabi its a real story thats why like 34738493 other ppl have it DUH .

  • omg that was really sad nd yes that can happen thats why u should really listen nd think before doing anything

  • almost cried .

  • wow.

    thats so upsetting.

    at least they are all in the same place i guess.

    i wont lie to my parents about a party and die that same night!

  • I don't think it was the joint....hmmmm could have been ALL the booze he consumed,

    420

  • O.M.G that is soo sad i cant stop crying:(

  • oy that is so sad

  • omg that was so sad

    good job

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  • i love this so sad

  • thats sad i nearly cried but not quite as usual. :¬[

  • ur right this story is sad...

  • omigosh! i cnt stop crying!

  • You kknow this happened to a friend of mines. She was driving home late from a party with her boyfriend and they got into a wreck and it was her parents but she's still alive. :-/

  • I cried when i read this =[[ its so sad!!!

  • that i so freakin sadd....

    bt im out of tears and im so happy im out b/c ii wud b crying so hard rite now

  • sad, but still can't make me cry.

  • damn, really sad

  • Yeah...I agree..

  • omg :(

    datz sad :(

  • :'(

  • oh my god :(

  • awh,

    i cant imagine if this happened to me .

    my parents are in bankok now and im scared to death . because of the bombing ,

    im with my sister ,

    and i just want to be with them .

    xo

  • the last part oh! my! i cried

  • ahhh! i remember seeing this already. yeah, its sad. i still get tears in my eyes