I like the concept, but as a commercial It was not very effective. I couldn't tell what it was for or what was being sold. The man running around is the subject where it should actually be the store itself and the products and services it provides. I like how you introduced cinematic elements to a television advertisement, but the focus is oriented towards the character. I feel like he stole something and was trying to escape.
I can't understand shit.. :S He runs like a mad man around the shop, runs out and away without his skateboard. Then the "shopkeeper" takes the mad mans skateboard and start doing tricks.... Can someone explain?
@ArmedSuperPandaYT well pretty much running through the shop was the idea to show the stuff they have in a more interesting manner than most local commercials which are just panning back and fourth in sections of the store with voiceover, and then the shopkeeper doing the trick was really there because its for a skateshop so there should be some skating thrown in
@xxartfaggxx haha yeah, its funny kinda like how people rip into the call of duty video for the dumbest shit
zombifiedmaster 2 months ago
good job but I do agree with @SolarMoth
- GNMfilms
GMatthews537 2 months ago
I like the concept, but as a commercial It was not very effective. I couldn't tell what it was for or what was being sold. The man running around is the subject where it should actually be the store itself and the products and services it provides. I like how you introduced cinematic elements to a television advertisement, but the focus is oriented towards the character. I feel like he stole something and was trying to escape.
SolarMoth 2 months ago 2
@SolarMoth I think you're just thinking to hard about it.
bennyboyuhh 2 months ago
Very proud of you Rich
thatsmyboyrich 2 months ago
Good job.
TurningLeafFilms 2 months ago
@xxartfaggxx haha this super underground electronic band called The Cafe Disco, you should check it out hahahha
zombifiedmaster 2 months ago
30 seconds of my life gone......forever.
IngloriousSob 2 months ago
@IngloriousSob Yeah and another 10 seconds gone with you typing that useless comment.
Good job Rich!
kkrrll123 2 months ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Comment removed
IngloriousSob 2 months ago
I can't understand shit.. :S He runs like a mad man around the shop, runs out and away without his skateboard. Then the "shopkeeper" takes the mad mans skateboard and start doing tricks.... Can someone explain?
ArmedSuperPandaYT 2 months ago 7
@ArmedSuperPandaYT well pretty much running through the shop was the idea to show the stuff they have in a more interesting manner than most local commercials which are just panning back and fourth in sections of the store with voiceover, and then the shopkeeper doing the trick was really there because its for a skateshop so there should be some skating thrown in
zombifiedmaster 2 months ago