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  • WOW!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!! :)

  • erm, haha wow. i'd like give ANYTHING to be Demi there...

  • holy fuck i wish i was demi i would do more stuff to him though!!! :P

  • dude, so graphic. xD iloveit.

  • that was great... kinda turned on now... and you sure do now alot about sex. When he came so many times... if only we could find out if the real deal could do that... mmmmmm

  • Man that made me horny

  • oh well shit , lol yu were so detailed with it ! it was so good lol

  • DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMNNNNN­NNNNNNNNNN lmao awesome

  • ummm how old are you? cuz you sure know alot about sex...

  • 16. but thats better than the little 12-13 year olds who write it

  • yes that is quite true. haha

  • lol(:

  • UMMM WOW!!! I cant stop reading this is that normal?? :P I Love it!!! <3

  • that was awesome

  • poison ivy by the jobrosss :]

  • that was sooooo graphioc!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!

  • yes it was

  • Is Demi's Mom deaf?

  • "Her boobs were so big they were almost hitting her face."

    LMAO! How is that even possible? xDD

    Anyways, KEEP WRITING!

  • it was my version of a metaphor....kinda.... lol

  • well damn that was intense but really good lol

  • Wow that was the most graphic chap I read good job lmao

  • why thankyou

  • wow that was amazing so intense... i would replace demi anyday haha jk :)

  • OMJ! AWESOME!

    So gooood! =))

  • it would have been cool if the song in the video was "Best I Ever Had" by Drake

  • i <3 that song

  • Pshh Who Doesn't??

    Did you see the official music video for it?

  • sweet

  • Reason three: ITS ILLEGAL!

    LOL :)

    holy shit that was pure graphicness it was like... INTENSE :| aha

  • wow

  • damn

  • WOW....intense chpt. ur a great writer awsome epi!!!

  • whered her mom go xD

  • Wow i didn't even read half of that cause i don't like how it is DEMI and not MERCY AHEM JOSEPH

  • i would say so. lol was not ready for that!

    but isnt her mom right downstairs? lol

    as Joe would say it AWKWARDD! lol

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