Loved it - really awesome for your first pieces! Got us both dancing here - the lady really loved it. Please upload more of your work soon! The energy is excellent but agree with scotty that you have room for still more vocal energy and I also think it could benefit with harder gestures. I'll be replaying this for while! Keep it going!
For the theme of the song it was a bit to Vanilla Ice. Your flow was good but you need to increase the intensity in your tone. I would like you to see you do this over with more rage like how Eminem raps. I am not saying you should be Eminem, but say the words with some energy and anger where you carry the music instead of the music carrying you. I gave you a thumbs up.
is this on itunes? its amazing!
alwaysdarkwolf227 2 months ago
Loved it - really awesome for your first pieces! Got us both dancing here - the lady really loved it. Please upload more of your work soon! The energy is excellent but agree with scotty that you have room for still more vocal energy and I also think it could benefit with harder gestures. I'll be replaying this for while! Keep it going!
egcharles57 5 months ago
did your parents make you go into the garage to dance? or did you decide to do that yourself? i liked it.
fuzzayD 5 months ago
For the theme of the song it was a bit to Vanilla Ice. Your flow was good but you need to increase the intensity in your tone. I would like you to see you do this over with more rage like how Eminem raps. I am not saying you should be Eminem, but say the words with some energy and anger where you carry the music instead of the music carrying you. I gave you a thumbs up.
scottyphoto 5 months ago
@scottyphoto Very good feedback, thanks man. I'll definitely take this into consideration when recording
Insanatey 5 months ago
hahahahahahaha its adorable. I'm sorry its really adorable [:
AmethystMuffinRose 6 months ago
Haha, what a story Mark
DaanoBanaano 6 months ago
omg i cant stop listening to both of these songs !!! its awesome good job you should do more :)
alexandher2016 6 months ago
Pretty dirty! The AC/DC connection was sick!!!
titinater011 6 months ago
Actually really nice :) good job bro
Sk8revolution27 6 months ago
Nice flo
iratedu6 6 months ago