The Unfinished Track

[ArmyPig007]

Y U NO POST MOAR VIDEOZ?? :L

[sammygee2thez]

no songs?

[Agentkip1]

@kriscana777 who said he is going to kill himself :S

[kriscana777]

You better not kill yourself bro. We will miss you too much.

[SGTSlashRazor]

You make me think of my buddy Isaac. (total rocker)

[Darniros]

EARRAPE

[ArmyPig007]

You haven't been uploading songs lately :( I love your gaming videos but i get much more enjoyment out of your songs.

[themostroasttoast]

It's amazing when i think of how many hours and different forms of entertainment you have created with a microphone.

[earthwormjim69er]

Um.... When u start singing it's sounded bad but near the end it was much better

[bfhpeyro]

@earthwormjim69er sad faec :(

[flamingwolfz]

1:03 Errrrrh.

[slasherboy1]

sounds the original doom soundtrack speeded  up at the end

[jhorneras]

u should finish this

[SaltShaker719]

Can't stop listening to this

[Accan2]

@MinecraftCrafter28 I dunno, maybe a week ago

[robbyownsyou999]

Utorak sounds like...? A profesional rock singer? He just has the whiney voice for it. I like it

[3JustChillin3]

Why is everyone saying he cant Sing? 'Cause you guys are totally better -_-

You cant judge when you aren't even better than him....

[kissdacriminal]

Please keep doing this, I love your harmonies... amazing

[SaltShaker719]

I was reading through the comments and I burst out laughing when you started singing. Nice song. Freakin epic man

[SaltShaker719]

No offense but you can't sing. Lovin' the song though.

[Dihyyy]

@SaltShaker719

His voice isn't cheap, he can sing, his voice is just different, beginning was bad, but middle & end was amazingly better.

[xCgSx13]

awsome riff at the end.!

[CurranDotCom]

@MadBomberMore which video? D:

[MadBomberMore]

@CurranDotCom pt.twitch.tv/utorak007/b/29206­3919 this one

[MeganSaysLalala]

I don't think the vocals are bad, I actually like them ^.^

[AldasProds]

At first I was like: Hmmm.... Nice music and when he started to sign I was like: Who0a FUCK! that's horrible! But later it kinda started to sound better.

[JMxSantiago]

Did Jamie have a fight with mel?????????

[LibeRatioNZzXx]

OMG did anyone else hear two jamies at one point! I knew he had a clone in the cuboard! :D

[555Zero555]

HAHA AS SOON AS I HEARD YOUR VOICE I ALMOST FELL OVER IN LAUGHTER.

[gzga111]

@555Zero555 that's mean X)

[GMMxNick]

wow jamie really good keep it up <3

[LulzForTehWinz]

too bad you didnt finish it

[CurranDotCom]

reminds me of queen, good job bro!

[lukeharris7789]

This Is really Good Jamie :D Saying it's not even Finished its awesome :D, Reminds me of Dream Theater or something like them 8===D GOML

[Geenazar]

Kind of Bowie-ish? :) I like!

[SUPIMLOUIS]

*hear

[xGeorge1337x]

OMFG YOU CAN BUY THE SONGS LINK IN DESCRIPTION :D

[1234dragonfire]

serenade mel



[aspeggy]

Has a bit of an early Queen vibe about it! Is the piano line done on a computer programme? Sounds a bit blocky :/ You could do with a decent recording of a live piano part

[MrMcTrapper]

You are going to finish this right ? Because that sounded like it could be pretty awesome. But anyhow, keep up the good work =)

[SICKTRICK71]

ARRRGHHH BRAIN Y U NO COMPREHEND HOW GOOD THIS MUSIC IS!!!!!

[DPShade]

You can't sing...

But it's still EPIC and...

It's...

Utorak

[coast3dg3]

You misspelt 'hear' in the description, just to let you know. Also, are you going to finish this? Sounds like it'll be awesome.

[ThTgUyInUrBaSmEnT]

Up the vocalss its a little hard to hearr but i love tha guitar

[lucasfiorella]

You sound just the the singer from enter shikari

[xCxMx]

No, Utorak and Mel are NOT friends anymore. Sadly, this is true. The people saying this, from what is possible for us to know at this point, is true. They had a falling out just a few days ago. This not covered in either of their recent videos.

[ikkin05]

@xCxMx yep they don't even follow each other on twitter anymore.. :( SAD

[HatulRehov]

@ikkin05

Why, what happened?

I mean what happened that they are not "friends" anymore..

[ikkin05]

@HatulRehov i don't really know dude.. one day i checked their twitter then found out that they're not following each other anymore then go on to check their recommended youtubers

[Accan2]

@MinecraftCrafter28 Nope they fell out with each other, don't talk anymore.

[SmokeynBandit100]

um did i miss something? people keep saying he and Mel aint friends. Havent been keeping up wit video's the last few weeks, so if someone can fill me in, it would be appreciated :) anyway the reminds me alot of Rush at the start, which i really liked :)

[NightFalcon190]

@TomasLPSamo they r, its just for fun

[DurzoBliint]

I'm really liking this track so far

[BigTuna1994]

The vocal/vocal/guitar harmony was awesome.

[callumwittner]

a bit moshy

[CurranDotCom]

these are really good! keep it up! btw do you play all the instruments in this? if you did the guitars pretty legit :D

[jfoxhurt]

This reminds me of Queen a little bit. lol

[BlackMantis88]

@Utorak007 Your voice is fairly similar to Dio. If the vocal's were solid, you would sound identical.

[supablue09]

ok im sorry i did lauph a bit but it was pretty badass

[oFlamesz]

i love your music

[KillianDunne]

i think this is king diamond-ish

[FibreFilms]

Personally I prefer your instrumental stuff, but I prefer instrumental music in general - so that is probably why. Until the singing kicked in I really liked it, you should definitely finish this song, however you wish to do it.

[Aydz1000]

WHAT it was starting to get EPIC why did you stop making this.

For the love of all that is good and holy PLEASE finish this song.

[AlfieVanPatrick]

Reminds me of Bowie!!

Anybody else agree?

[jakenow29]

It's official. There is no way i can get on your level after this...

[slasherboy1]

this is soooo awesome, I'm gonna fav it :) REALLY hope he starts to finish this

[baneklis]

i like it very much

[lfcgo7]

Thought I turnt my ps3 on at the start

[Jayman8989]

Wow! It really starts to kick off then it ends :O

I hope one day this'll become The Finished Track :D

Nice angsty growl lyrics btw haha

[DanosauRawR]

Keep rockin' Jamie. I listen to alot of music and you and your band (if your not a solo artist) are way up on my list so, keep it up \m/

[Minimikeish]

Love the harmony at 1:35 =]

[Jewbit]

God I wish you uploaded more music... its always really good

[chayzerz]

:D:D:D

[Mattliv12]

Love the brian may guitar mixed with shred at 1:34

[JohnMstudios]

Think it would be better if your voice was slightly softer for this :) ..take Trent Reznor's "Hurt" for example :)

[StretchGargan]

@UtorakMusic I was wondering, If we buy the album now does that mean we'll be able to download future songs for free? or will we have to pay for them separately?

I dont mind doing it either way, I'm just curious how it works

And awesome song, If its this good and its unfinished, one must wonder what the finished song would sound like :P

[TISMETHEDUDEMEISTER]

was the guitar riff at the end a muse riff? or is it just me :/

[JackJohnson6010]

@TISMETHEDUDEMEISTER It sounds REALLY muse in my opinion!

[HeavyMetalHorton]

not my favorite by you jamie, but i still like it and respect it because its better than anything I could compose, and I think some people need to think about it this way too :D

[jacobisalemonDnB]

Damn, some of those guitar parts are really good. I really liked where it was going

[keitorin95]

I love it! I'm soo glad you don't have one of these annoying, auto tuned, peice of shit voices that are everywhere these days, ^-^

[DigitalMatte]

he kind of sounds like the guy from my chemical romance : )

[jrex1415]

Why don't people like this, it's awesome!

[jimmymcquid]

it's good....

[TheOzeen]

terrible singing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ProfessorCyan]

@TheOzeen too bad it's way better than yours.

[MadeInTheMilkyWay]

Yeeeah there's a pretty large amount of rage and picking on eachother's spelling in the comments section. Anyway, I honestly don't like the singing :/ Other than that, some parts are quite good (:

[MrStephen254]

i apologise for anything i said

[awate3]

Sounds sick man :)

[MeatHeadGaming]

OMG awesome ending riff thingy, you need to finish it! I want to know the ending! :D

[stepeckz]

the comments to this video are hilarious... just saying

[AHybrten]

Are you going to finish it or are you leaving it like this? I would love hearing the rest.

[MrStephen254]

I wanted to apologise to Jamie and his fans i admit i took it to far and shouldnt of said some stuff SORRY

[HereLenny]

Maybe if you write Mel a song you guys will become friends again :)

[yanntemar]

@HereLenny lol



[Laytonlink]

@HereLenny yeah do that i really liked you guys together

good times

[xGeorge1337x]

@HereLenny Why are they friends ??

[xGeorge1337x]

*arent

[bachepologreece1]

@HereLenny why what happened?

[RFFcomrade]

@HereLenny why arent they frends?

[sebMinecraft]

@HereLenny there not friends?

[Modomancs]

@HereLenny and who said that they are not friends?

[BigTuna1994]

@Modomancs Mel did.

[iSuicidalReptar]

@HereLenny wait what happened between them?

[themoderndayhippie2]

jamie has a real british punk voice

[MerriEFC]

You song like the guy from Darkness :)

[1stFretGamer]

there should be a song of Utorak raging. Thumbs up if you agree!

[IKillBabyKittensLOL]

James, I think you are sexy. Metaphorical question: Would you fuck a fourteen/fifteen year old if they wanted it?

[M3vinOfficial]

@IKillBabyKittensLOL LOL

[MrKongssund]

poop! poop's good =)

[German4HireKEN]

I approve.

[Wickershiver]

I don't see why people are hating on this, I really enjoyed, I understand it's a draft so the vocals aren't the best... meh

[BlackSquareVideos]

not gonna lie dude but you should get that song finished. was fucking great for what you'd done with it. as soon as i can be bothered downloading i-tunes again i'll definately buy your music. its awesome

[KHarHar]

@Utorak007 Thats really good (aprt from the draft vocals ) but I really love it with some work it could be great

Are you stationed in Dublin?

[AdstarGaming]

@utorak007 i really like it :) keep it up

[NotMeAgain69]

My ears are bleeding from your singing. I mean that in the nicest way.

also the instrumental part was very good.

[flyinhindu]

you should make a song and sing it with kevin.!

[DeluxeTwinkies]

@flyinhindu Hahaha that would be AWESOME!!

[BlibbleBlob]

Nice tune my friend (8)

[ThePeoplesJoyce]

Would you consider doing a spyro playthrough?

[TheRiCkJaMeS182]

is this on itunes too? :D

[Utorak007]

@TheRiCkJaMeS182 Unfortunately not because it's not complete.

[TheRiCkJaMeS182]

@Utorak007 too bad, but thanks for posting this, it's really good!

[shark758]

your vocals are outta tune mate you should fix that in next draft. but i like the guitar, also i think you need to decide what type of song its gonna be before you start instead of just changing halfway through. Queen did it but it need to be a really well written song to be able to pull it off. your pretty good but you not as good as queen. also sometimes i struggle to see what the lyrics really do. i would rather have an instrumental then a song made bad by random vocals that have no meaning

[Utorak007]

@shark758 It is a draft, if you read the description you could see that i wrote the vocals weren't solid, and the lyrics were never complete but do have meaning.

[244Lydia]

Oh and <3 @UtorakMusic / @Utorak007

[jbowering9]

I love this utorak! But may i ask? What program do you use to make your music??

[Boky505]

You sir, are amazing at making music,

you better finish this track!

[AdstarGaming]

Utorak your music is seriously good i never thaught you could sing like that . Your talented and i like it

[XxTheResurrectionxX]

i like it

[LOL14081]

If Utorak can reply to this comment. i will forever love him :) alll homo <3

[MrStephen254]

U should seriously stop singing in ur songs tats fucking bad

[244Lydia]

@MrStephen254 You should seriously Stop being a dick and You should Shut the fuck up. Your a dumb oh and by the way nice spelling

[MrStephen254]

@244Lydia its called text writing but u wouldnt know tat cause u hav no life,u just waste it watchin Jamies shity videos,and 'Your a dumb' makes no sense

[Utorak007]

@MrStephen254 I think there are a few thousand people that would disagree with you there buddy. And ur a dumb obviously makes sense, because you are dumb. =)

[DeluxeTwinkies]

@Utorak007 O HAI!!

[9510haran1]

@MrStephen254 you fucking shitbag should really stop commenting on vids you dont like n' just watch something else! Fucker!

[MrStephen254]

@9510haran1 i like his gameplay videos i dont like his music all i said was i dont think u should sing in ur videos then other ppl start all this shit its constructive criticism

[9510haran1]

@MrStephen254 constructive criticism? you called him a hippie! wow you must be really dumb

[kellecatastrophy]

@MrStephen254 if you think his videos are oh so "shitty" why do you watch them? because you would have had to long enough to know about the duck thing? you sound so dumb right now. and telling him he is the outcast of his family? really get some better insults bro

[MrStephen254]

@kellecatastrophy why dont u stay out of this shit i didnt start with the insults Jamie and other ppl did

[kellecatastrophy]

@MrStephen254 wow, really because im pretty sure you started it by insulting him saying his singing sucked?

[MrStephen254]

@kellecatastrophy i siad he shouldnt sing in his videos hes not tat good its constructive criticism

[XNickdaninjaX]

@MrStephen254 Constructive criticism is pointing out flaws in his singing, and giving him a way to improve, not saying "u shud not sung ur bad"

[kellecatastrophy]

@MrStephen254 no, you straight up insulted him. saying its fucking bad. In no way shape or form is that constructive criticism.

[PartyInTheCAeh]

@MrStephen254 DUCKS ARE AWESOME DONT FUCKIN DISS DUCKS

[MrStephen254]

@PartyInTheCAeh GET A LIFE

[PartyInTheCAeh]

@MrStephen254 youre the one causing shit over youtube, you dont like him, DONT WATCH HIM. ffs your as bad as the BF and COD fanboys

[MrStephen254]

@PartyInTheCAeh i like his gameing videos i dont like his music i apologised and i hope he see it

[244Lydia]

@MrStephen254 Oh I have no life? Your problem on the fucking computer ALL the fucking time and Your saying I have no life.... Get the fuck out you fucking piece of shit. Why the fuck would you put worthless comments and troll on here like a fucking dick? You my friend have just earned the place of #1 Asshole

[MrJordan38]

@244Lydia I agree

[244Lydia]

@MrJordan38 xD

[drunkchicken22]

@MrStephen254 fuck u utoraks vidz ar da bomb and if u dont like them got out of his fuckin level dickhead

[TheIcefang]

@244Lydia Penis

[lobsterhannah]

@244Lydia Ironically, it's you're, not your... (:

[244Lydia]

@lobsterhannah Lawl :)

[ge0rgedcool]

@244Lydia what did he say?

[tehZwok]

@ge0rgedcool Bottom of page >"View All Comments" > Ctrl-F > Search his name.

This can be used on any video to find any comment.

[florf619]

@244Lydia BOOM! You smoked his ass!

[244Lydia]

@florf619 Loool 

[MrJordan38]

@MrStephen254 Do you know your about to get trolls on you and ruin your whole fucking life you dick. :)

[snorlaxpulls]

@MrStephen254 shut the fuck up

[MrStephen254]

@snorlaxpulls GET A LIFE 

[MrJordan38]

@MrStephen254 i think you need to get a life and don't hate.

[MrJordan38]

@MrStephen254 And by the way IT'S A FUCKING DRAFT!!!!!!

[244Lydia]

@MrStephen254 What the fuck do you not understand by SHUT. THE. FUCK. UP?

[snorlaxpulls]

@MrStephen254 i have one if i didnt i couldnt comment i could not be on youtube and my kid would never be born so you are taking 2 lifes but nah

[MrStephen254]

@snorlaxpulls i guessing ur an adult since u hav a child so why are u watching these videos why not go out get a job go to clubs hav an adults life

[snorlaxpulls]

@MrStephen254 Yes i go to bars and such somedays or i just go out with friends while my child is having fun with my sister and her child and yes i do have a job wich provides money to buy food pay bills etc my girlfriend also has 1 so we get around 5,600 euros a month so we can live in a good away and i have a good house with pool and all so yes i have a life and nothing yous ay will offende me anything else?