Clash of the Worlds Movement IV

[link0099]

after listening to all 4 movements, i have to say im sort of left wanting more out of them.

The fact is, the melodies are sort of bland, and the whole thing is this minor tonality romp, there's no change.

some major 7th chords at the end of this piece would of been amazing.

[JrvUnleashedMusic]

@link0099

Lol dude, this is like the 3rd piece I've ever written. Go check out some of my newer pieces. I'm aware that these old songs aren't any good, but I've improved CONSIDERABLY since then.

[B8Av3]

You did great job at keeping the tune going. The ending also well concludes the song and the percussion was a strong point as well. And your right, the oboe was a bit lacking, but it sounded great nonetheless =] Perhaps you could work on making listeners sort of "crave" each note. Make each note after the one before a desire. To make them want it, then give them that reward and some.

Just some positive advice Id thought Id give to maybe help you out a bit and improve your mood.

[JrvUnleashedMusic]

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