This song sounds great indeed, but the chord progression should be improved in the first minute part, because it's foreseeable. But aside of that, great orchestrations, instrumentation, and melody driving.
@samlab0920 In other words, you can tell that I wrote it when I was 17? :-) Thanks for your criticism; I agree with your comment, and didn't change that section when I revised this piece last year (basically) for nostalgic reasons. Perhaps I'll create an alternate version.
This song sounds great indeed, but the chord progression should be improved in the first minute part, because it's foreseeable. But aside of that, great orchestrations, instrumentation, and melody driving.
samlab0920 7 months ago
@samlab0920 In other words, you can tell that I wrote it when I was 17? :-) Thanks for your criticism; I agree with your comment, and didn't change that section when I revised this piece last year (basically) for nostalgic reasons. Perhaps I'll create an alternate version.
daddywags214 6 months ago
sounds great
ChrissysVideokids 1 year ago