"LONGING FOR TOMORROW" short film (Psychological horror, slasher, Halloween, Friday The 13th)

[RealmofJocken]

It was okay, however you didn't take the time to develop any characters or give out any details of the story. Everything just sort of happened. What would leave a lot of people confused would be the ending, as you never established that the guy even escaped, nor did you establish that the scene in the end was a recurring nightmare. You just showed him in a field with a hammer.

Next time you should take your time to develop the story, and show more scenes that explain what's going on.

[eddieenigma666]

@RealmofJocken I made it for a competition with a 3 minute limit, that's the reason why it's so brief. I plan to make more films with the hoody with more development and depth. I've done longer films before now with the content that this one lacks. It was just a 3 minute shocker you know? Maybe a little ambitious for the time limit but at least it introduces the audience to the hoody

[RealmofJocken]

@eddieenigma666 Alright, I just encountered this video when looking around for some nice indie films to watch. I decided to drop a comment pointing out what I thought it was lacking, but if you had a three minute time limit it's understandable, however I still think you should've explained his escape.

[Ktkat77162]

that was great!!! especialy loved the ending

[dyl40011]

very random gr8 filming not so much story err



[MrSimiansam1213]

Well that sucked

[callerofmusic]

looks like a guy from the beatles :P

[tk5800thesecond]

i have to say, most horror films dont truly scare me, but when his toe nails scraped on the concrette i vomited, well done guys

[UberJamesMan]

2:07 - he's tied to a wheely chair - he could roll to freedom!

[ProductionsEnigmatic]

Thanks for the great comments guys!

[FairyHero57]

Nice opening, it really drew me in. I like the music, lighting, and the scenery you used.

[seacoon11]

what does the end mean??? i am so confused...

[heavytransit]

@seacoon11 he scaped and killed his kidnaper with the hammer he used to break his finguers

[ProductionsEnigmatic]

@seacoon11 It's meant to be a recurring nightmare after the victim's experience. He holds the hammer at the end because he had to go through a lot of shit to escape. It also represents the power the attacker still has over him. If you got attacked and had to be brutal to escape your subconscious may think you're the same as them.

[iabubabu]

nice short =) verry well done =) lil senseless but i like it this way =) (i also do senseless shorts :p )

[ThePsychwardFilms]

Cool. I jumped a little when the guy appeared on the roundabout. I've seen a million torture based shorts like this one.

Normally they don't take the time to establish relatability like you did with the poem, which was refreshing.

Any clue as to the motive of the abduction?

[ProductionsEnigmatic]

@ThePsychwardFilms Thanks for the comment :) We didn't intend to give him motive. It's always more frightening when there isn't one. We might make a longer film with the masked psycho.