Fabulous voice, but you really need to think about some beats. The music is all over the place and signifies changes in the tone of the piece/character/mood, but you keep the same vocals throughout the entire song. When you say "Do you want your daughter to end up like me?", the character just doesn't hate her job/life enough for that to really make sense. The last line is "Life is a bitch and it starts in third grade!". Show how your life is/has been a bitch!
Fabulous voice, but you really need to think about some beats. The music is all over the place and signifies changes in the tone of the piece/character/mood, but you keep the same vocals throughout the entire song. When you say "Do you want your daughter to end up like me?", the character just doesn't hate her job/life enough for that to really make sense. The last line is "Life is a bitch and it starts in third grade!". Show how your life is/has been a bitch!
xAEJunky 3 years ago