some of the effects were interesting but at times i felt you just didn't try...
2/5
Next time try working on keeping the audience entertained... even the one's who don't like the song(not saying i don't). Putting clips in without any thought process or with any creative story background is quite boring. This type of song would've made a great story amv... but let's say you were doing an action amv. try using effects that keep the viewer interested or try an keep a sort of emotion...
like 2:21 - 2:41 you had that sort of "blank" emotion going on... you almost made it seem like something major was about to happen... but sadly just kind of ruined it when you put in an action scene...
Then you should know more about it. :P This isn't for the casual AMV watcher or someone who doesn't know Bleach. It's got plenty of action to hold interest for the moderate, and for someone who actually knows the story behind Bleach, it makes alot of sense.
Basicly what I'm saying is your AMV (as you say) does have a story... But there isn't enough potential or anything to keep a viewer watching... Wat I'm saying is it wasn't obvious that it was an AMV that would keep people watching. It just seems like to a regular person, wether or not they've seen the anime, that it's just another AMV that has a number of random action scenes that don't make sense to the AMV. You didn't folow the atmosphere of the AMV and that's what keeps people watching.
now your just getting defensive... I'm saying the AMV Didn't keep the viewer's attention... and in case you want to know... I'm actually quite intellegent for a 13-year old... and I've been making and watching AMV's for 2 years now... I know what keeps a viewers attention...
also If it makes you feel better here I'll redo my review of the amv
3/5
I liked it... the sync wasn't bad, the effects weren't bad, but my problem with it was that I couldn't keep paying attention... Nothing seemed interesting, it felt like I was watching an episode with effects... You just didn't seem to match the emotion at some parts... maybe more clear messages as to what you were trying to give as a story here... to me it seemed like it was the fights Ichigo went through (cont)
that was the story... And it's been done... in a more proffesional way(no offense) so the story wasn't very complex and it wasn't origional either... I suggest you keep working on it... it seems like your really close to the breaking point at which you figure it out...
(take not I'm being as I was a month ago, before this argument...)
damnit, When I watched I was blown away, not just for the song, and how the action went with it, but how every thing that was shown in the amv, had EVERYthing to do with the main main lyrics of the song, How can Ichigo try to have hope in not only saving the main people he cares about and loves, but in the long run it seems he kind of has to save EVRYone point is theres constant battle within himself, good.vs evil.
nice, I love this song
a4finger 6 months ago
Awesome Video,its really kickass and the song goes perfectly with it...actually makes me want to do some Epic battling myself ;P
HidanCrazyImmortal 8 months ago
Makes perfect sence for me. ^^
Temparable 1 year ago
cool vid, i felt bad for grimjow tho, he was a badass lol
Forthias 2 years ago
really, good, still have a long way to go though
lordrazar 2 years ago
wow epic vid! 5/5 stars! you should check out my amv if you get a chance i used a stabbing westward song too :)
xxCrazyForAnimexx 2 years ago
o_O
Holy crap, one hell of an argument.
Love the vid I3
FlameArceus 2 years ago
4/5
coolio
tbdragon111 3 years ago
Good first RC, btw its steph...
YourFavValentine 3 years ago
some of the effects were interesting but at times i felt you just didn't try...
2/5
Next time try working on keeping the audience entertained... even the one's who don't like the song(not saying i don't). Putting clips in without any thought process or with any creative story background is quite boring. This type of song would've made a great story amv... but let's say you were doing an action amv. try using effects that keep the viewer interested or try an keep a sort of emotion...
Arrowman568 3 years ago
like 2:21 - 2:41 you had that sort of "blank" emotion going on... you almost made it seem like something major was about to happen... but sadly just kind of ruined it when you put in an action scene...
Quite part of song + action = BAD!!!
So basicly it had a lot of potential but...
don't get discuraged, keep trying!
Arrowman568 3 years ago
You either don't watch Bleach or you don't understand the purpose of the video. :/
There's story here; it's about Ichigo fighting himself while he fights outside enemies; and is still somehow expected to save his friends.
TheBlarggs 3 years ago
you didn't make it very clear... actually, it just seemed like all you did was put random fighting clips... and yes I've watched bleach...
Arrowman568 3 years ago
Then you should know more about it. :P This isn't for the casual AMV watcher or someone who doesn't know Bleach. It's got plenty of action to hold interest for the moderate, and for someone who actually knows the story behind Bleach, it makes alot of sense.
TheBlarggs 3 years ago
Basicly what I'm saying is your AMV (as you say) does have a story... But there isn't enough potential or anything to keep a viewer watching... Wat I'm saying is it wasn't obvious that it was an AMV that would keep people watching. It just seems like to a regular person, wether or not they've seen the anime, that it's just another AMV that has a number of random action scenes that don't make sense to the AMV. You didn't folow the atmosphere of the AMV and that's what keeps people watching.
Arrowman568 3 years ago
The story is very simple. x.x It's a Fight --> Training --> Fight --> Training --> Fight, using the training to finally win. --> Training's outcome.
There's nothing complicated about the way it's set up, and if you can't understand it, then you must not be very intelligent.
TheBlarggs 3 years ago
now your just getting defensive... I'm saying the AMV Didn't keep the viewer's attention... and in case you want to know... I'm actually quite intellegent for a 13-year old... and I've been making and watching AMV's for 2 years now... I know what keeps a viewers attention...
Arrowman568 3 years ago
also If it makes you feel better here I'll redo my review of the amv
3/5
I liked it... the sync wasn't bad, the effects weren't bad, but my problem with it was that I couldn't keep paying attention... Nothing seemed interesting, it felt like I was watching an episode with effects... You just didn't seem to match the emotion at some parts... maybe more clear messages as to what you were trying to give as a story here... to me it seemed like it was the fights Ichigo went through (cont)
Arrowman568 3 years ago
that was the story... And it's been done... in a more proffesional way(no offense) so the story wasn't very complex and it wasn't origional either... I suggest you keep working on it... it seems like your really close to the breaking point at which you figure it out...
(take not I'm being as I was a month ago, before this argument...)
Arrowman568 3 years ago
@TheBlarggs
Dude, I gotta say I am TOTALLY with you man.
damnit, When I watched I was blown away, not just for the song, and how the action went with it, but how every thing that was shown in the amv, had EVERYthing to do with the main main lyrics of the song, How can Ichigo try to have hope in not only saving the main people he cares about and loves, but in the long run it seems he kind of has to save EVRYone point is theres constant battle within himself, good.vs evil.
He has to save hims
Rampant7990 1 year ago
KICK ASS AWESOME! great job dude
mikesholler27 3 years ago
awsommmmme
md777 3 years ago
Awesome Video .... Grimmjow is badass !!! .... I know he's still alive ....
killmecutme696 3 years ago
Nice work, Yaygar
Joekitteh 3 years ago
dude that kicked ass and you picked a really good song so all in all kick ass job
freegod22 3 years ago
Thanks alot. :D
TheBlarggs 3 years ago
This is a lot better than my crap. Good job.
SirBettyDirector 3 years ago
AMVs are SOOOO HARD GAY
MFnRhino 3 years ago
No you, good sir.
TheBlarggs 3 years ago