Visually well done but is it good enough for a film festival? Depends of course on the type of film festival. In my native country (the Netherlands) there are a lot of amatuer/semi-pro festivals who would show this but the audience would generally not appreciate it to the level that you would want. Apart from a chosen (or unchosen) few, they would not understand it. Although an amateur filmmaker myself I respect this piece of work but it lacks a storyline for me to be emotionally attached.
Very nice. I thought I was going to not like the 1/4 screens but I did.
I was confused by the "Chapter 3" title - didn't want to come into something that I missed the first two but you asked, so I clicked.
I'm nowhere near as good as you so take this with a grain of salt but I don't think you need to whoosh in on the poisons and hit us over the head with them. Also, I got lost with the rose. Was that important?
I just think spliting the screen in 4 wasnt such a good idea.. Too much info at once.. u dont know where to look.. But it has a great artistic value so I dont know.. 4 outa 5.. great job.. keep it up..
Occasionally I do zoom in for a few frames, to the quadrant you should be looking at. Thinking of possibly re-editing this one... thanks for the advice!
I think its your best work ! awesome !
rabbeefazle 3 years ago
cool
MEOSHABEAN1 3 years ago
so sad, great job...
blackrosesforfriends 3 years ago
hey
awsome film! worthy of any festival i think. would be well appreciated for your sheer creativity.
i'd like to subcribe to your channel, feel free to check out mine as well my short film 'the camera'.
thenx alot. keep up the good work
PulpVincent94 3 years ago
Talent for the game ,maybe a touch of bunuel's in there...lookk forward to more.
humanswin 3 years ago
Visually well done but is it good enough for a film festival? Depends of course on the type of film festival. In my native country (the Netherlands) there are a lot of amatuer/semi-pro festivals who would show this but the audience would generally not appreciate it to the level that you would want. Apart from a chosen (or unchosen) few, they would not understand it. Although an amateur filmmaker myself I respect this piece of work but it lacks a storyline for me to be emotionally attached.
eldritchassemblage 3 years ago
Josh, this is very good, and in answer to your question, "is it good enough for festivals?" Hell yes.
good luck to you on your films. This is really good stuff!
cheers,
Your buds at
FEWDIO
We Create Nightmares (too)
Fewdiodotcom 3 years ago
Visually-enthralling and interesting to watch. I liked it.
gorboy 3 years ago
Nice Job
Hippiegeo 3 years ago
Love it!
cassey1228 3 years ago
Very nice. I thought I was going to not like the 1/4 screens but I did.
I was confused by the "Chapter 3" title - didn't want to come into something that I missed the first two but you asked, so I clicked.
I'm nowhere near as good as you so take this with a grain of salt but I don't think you need to whoosh in on the poisons and hit us over the head with them. Also, I got lost with the rose. Was that important?
hwdrebel 3 years ago
Thanks for the input hwdrebel!
verosashadows 3 years ago
very very good and interesting video!! nice work:)
hellxdollx 3 years ago
very cool! i really enjoyed that :)
stotan88 3 years ago
Superb! Great editing and sound! Brilliantly put together. 5 Stars! Favourite and a subscription.
Ronan
RonanG 3 years ago
I like the video..
I just think spliting the screen in 4 wasnt such a good idea.. Too much info at once.. u dont know where to look.. But it has a great artistic value so I dont know.. 4 outa 5.. great job.. keep it up..
Yuri Machado
Authentic Productions
AuthenticProductions 3 years ago
Occasionally I do zoom in for a few frames, to the quadrant you should be looking at. Thinking of possibly re-editing this one... thanks for the advice!
verosashadows 3 years ago
That was something else. Great short man. Now I'm gonna check out the rest of your work.
alteredeffect 3 years ago
nice video man.really liked it.
williamlatraille 3 years ago
very cool.
however, youtube doesn't allow it to live up to its potential (the screen is too small!)
ill attempt to make some much more darker videos and see what you think of them
danthemanporto 3 years ago
Stunning and hugely evocative! I really like this film. I'll favourite it.
Who did your music?
What grading technique did you use?
Best
Rob
thelonefilmmaker 3 years ago
Exceptionally Cool...like cigarettes!
235pics 3 years ago