-use brighter colors, you have a couple of shots that are darker than the others. The scene with the kneeboarding needs to be bright and colorful to give us a fuller sensation of what this guy is feeling.
I do like the video; it's a great concept; it was shot fairly well. I'm just offering some constructive criticism to your videographer.
I hope to see more good stuff like this come out form them.
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-use brighter colors, you have a couple of shots that are darker than the others. The scene with the kneeboarding needs to be bright and colorful to give us a fuller sensation of what this guy is feeling.
I do like the video; it's a great concept; it was shot fairly well. I'm just offering some constructive criticism to your videographer.
I hope to see more good stuff like this come out form them.
commishtm 3 years ago
Nice little video. I think it would be better though if you made these changes:
-he took out the drink quicker, we sit here for a long time waiting for him to choose it when he just needs to take it, we already see the brand name
-a quicker cut from the fridge to the guy, we shouldn't have top look at a full second of black
-cut to black at the end and have the text appear there instead of over the image
-cut out the last 5 seconds, we don't need to see him walking out
-and use brighter colors
commishtm 3 years ago
This is not one of the 10 finalists, right? They have not chose them yet, right?
TammyToe 3 years ago
haha nice John
marlinman814 3 years ago
Nice video, Next time i go out on my friends boat im gonna try knee boarding, I dont think im going to be able to do it tho
BigDiesel85 3 years ago
kool
deltatenzero 3 years ago
thanks :)
bighaile88 3 years ago
no prob
deltatenzero 3 years ago