it was okay. One problem i found is the acoustic guitar player would hit the string too hard or strokee too slowly or maybe it was that he was holding the pick too high but it was making this scratching noise. Plus the lead wasn't hitting the right notes. Either than that it was alright
I thought it was ok. I was kinda distracted by the electric guitar because you were out of tune on a lot of those notes. And it also wasn't very balanced. But other than that it was okay.
Hey, for a first attempt that's not bad at all! At least you guys know how to play guitar (I don't but I think it would be cool to know how). Keep up the good work and practice!
That was cool. Felt like you were playing the lead guitar a little too stiff, but if this is your first attempt, that should be nothing a little practice won't shake off. Good stuff. Very chill. A little torn on whether that was the right chord to end on though.
hey thats very very good :) i like your guitar. and yeah a little balance on guitars valume will be good :) other thatn that is good make some more ;)
sounded pretty good to me but i have never played an instrument. But if this is your starting point then things can only improve and i am sure you guys will make some great music in the future.
Some of the notes sounded off, which might be because it was improvised and you just didn't know what fret to go to next (happens all the time). For this, I say practice your scales (major, minor and blues) so you can have a good bag of tricks to fall back on. Lastly, practice your slides so you really nail the notes you're going for, a missed slide on an electric guitar is a lot like plunked note on a piano or a split pitch on a horn - it just doesn't sound good. Good luck composing! (2/2)
A good first effort, but a few criticisms: First, the progression is solid, but liven it up with some more creative strumming patterns (a little like at 1:44), maybe even some little riffs at the end of phrases to segue into different sections. Second, the tone on the lead guitar is a little flat but that's okay, what's more important is the tuning and sliding. (1/2)
Not bad, I prefer instrument by the way. Better then what I've been able to do with my computer but then again I don't really understand how to write music.
Alright lads that was great!! The lead need to be more so in tune..But good sound overall. I think the rythem should have a quicker strum because that one is dead..Maybe picking or down up.. But yous are gettin there! Great stuff for first song!
Hey guys, very haunting melody with a lot of potential on State of Mind". Don't give that one up because there's a lot more to be found in that tune. Well done, but keep practicing.
bad ass guitars, maybe some Learicks, sing about one loosing their union jobs, planes crashing and helicopters and trucks, so I could post on the teamster board.
For your first song good. Do u guys have a singer?
ww3gecko 4 years ago
that was a pretty rocking first attempt good work.5/5
dragonX979 4 years ago
Satan's couch of music video been their thanks for the friends
Huckelberry777 4 years ago
dude, that was pretty god for a attempt,thums up!
ultimaanthony 4 years ago
Hey that was good man, check out my band through my channel!
dragonarmy1 4 years ago
my name is yugiohfreak95 but i am sik of yugioh but i love your music will you send me some more vids
do u sing and how old r u
YuGiOhFreak95 4 years ago
very good ;)
22bernat22 4 years ago
"the red couch" -there is a photography book about a red couch; is that where you took the name from -for your youtube. site here?
superbooks7 4 years ago
good
THECSAISBACK 4 years ago
Sounds like my early work. Keep practicing you'll get it.
kjigmond 4 years ago
haha its preety cool, i dought of taking guiter lessons you knooww mannn shiiiit
Drakeybaby 4 years ago
its very relaxing, thanks guys
ysc1132 4 years ago
You guys are cool! ^-^'
gorillaznut 4 years ago
a bit soft for my taste, i like rock and stuff, but still, you're stuff's great. i definitely dont have that much skill.
rsfan67 4 years ago
when do you guys gonna perform live
xxAsunderxx 4 years ago
Pretty cool, I've never played with another guitar player... do you play live? Coffee houses, etc?
bowlingballout 4 years ago
Very nice guys, great concept. someday we'll have you on the show.
Bandbo 4 years ago
Hey guys you are avesome!!!
chilikathee 4 years ago
Wow. Nice. Good job you guys. Keep up the good work! 5/5
SharinganStealer 4 years ago
great 5/5
IEatDogs342 4 years ago
good job
blaketransformer 4 years ago
cool thanks for sending it tome five stars :)
dailee3 4 years ago
che che lindo lo que hacen!
pongan mas material!
chau nos vemos osmar!
negroenfermo 4 years ago
it was okay. One problem i found is the acoustic guitar player would hit the string too hard or strokee too slowly or maybe it was that he was holding the pick too high but it was making this scratching noise. Plus the lead wasn't hitting the right notes. Either than that it was alright
andyjstevens 4 years ago
pretty cool
gaelicstorm 4 years ago
You guys have some wicked awesome rock videos!
urukcow 4 years ago
Hey, pretty nice for your first try! ^^ That's awesome!
Shampoo21 4 years ago
Not bad at all,but still practice makes perfect.
Ronin830 4 years ago
The lead needs a few more cords to give it a better harmony.
macphisto80 4 years ago
A nice song for a start. A rather sad one, but ok. Keep it going!
shakspawn 4 years ago
I thought it was ok. I was kinda distracted by the electric guitar because you were out of tune on a lot of those notes. And it also wasn't very balanced. But other than that it was okay.
BlitzWolfZERO 4 years ago
Ps. I can't play guitar, I don't have that skill.(Trombone players are simple minded, or at lease I am)So you don't have to listen to my opinion.
BlitzWolfZERO 4 years ago
Hey, for a first attempt that's not bad at all! At least you guys know how to play guitar (I don't but I think it would be cool to know how). Keep up the good work and practice!
Kevin0089 4 years ago
Hello guys, cool work.. I'm not a musician, but there are interesting ideas. Good first.
MauCT 4 years ago
Good music, guys. It reminds me of Pink Floyd's 'Shine on You Crazy Diamond' in a way. You do need to loosen up a little, though.
kodosIV 4 years ago
That was cool. Felt like you were playing the lead guitar a little too stiff, but if this is your first attempt, that should be nothing a little practice won't shake off. Good stuff. Very chill. A little torn on whether that was the right chord to end on though.
joefiorellofilms 4 years ago
cool
imdakingofny 4 years ago
It makes me cry everytime i wach it.
peter6691 4 years ago
hey thats very very good :) i like your guitar. and yeah a little balance on guitars valume will be good :) other thatn that is good make some more ;)
Chario 4 years ago
sounded pretty good to me but i have never played an instrument. But if this is your starting point then things can only improve and i am sure you guys will make some great music in the future.
deadakaalive 4 years ago
I'm no guitar guru, this song sounds chill. My advice is to level volume of the rhythm and solo. Other than that do what we all should, practice.
AndrewJFS 4 years ago
Thats so cool guys keep up the good work :)
lizzizzmyname 4 years ago
Some of the notes sounded off, which might be because it was improvised and you just didn't know what fret to go to next (happens all the time). For this, I say practice your scales (major, minor and blues) so you can have a good bag of tricks to fall back on. Lastly, practice your slides so you really nail the notes you're going for, a missed slide on an electric guitar is a lot like plunked note on a piano or a split pitch on a horn - it just doesn't sound good. Good luck composing! (2/2)
edoanimus 4 years ago
A good first effort, but a few criticisms: First, the progression is solid, but liven it up with some more creative strumming patterns (a little like at 1:44), maybe even some little riffs at the end of phrases to segue into different sections. Second, the tone on the lead guitar is a little flat but that's okay, what's more important is the tuning and sliding. (1/2)
edoanimus 4 years ago
wow it is a great melody keep doing as well as u can u r great ppl
kuroitaka 4 years ago
Not bad, I prefer instrument by the way. Better then what I've been able to do with my computer but then again I don't really understand how to write music.
selsuru 4 years ago
Alright lads that was great!! The lead need to be more so in tune..But good sound overall. I think the rythem should have a quicker strum because that one is dead..Maybe picking or down up.. But yous are gettin there! Great stuff for first song!
Kaon 4 years ago
thnx for the invite at first ^^ and euhm the song is pretty good i really like these kinds of chill music ^^
i'll be sure to check out other songs of you if you add em ^^
but hey feel free to comment my "vids" to ^^
viviproductions 4 years ago
nice music guys im new here by the way thnx for the request .(#_#)
tumsanglimboo 4 years ago
Wow it is a great track
kuroitaka 4 years ago
hey that was pretty good not bad for ur first song.... all u need is lyrics and make the song a bit longer
jamchino 4 years ago
I think this is a dubplicate of another video you posted here that I commented on. I like this song.
NancyHey 4 years ago
Very nice tune, and good job for your first song.
NancyHey 4 years ago
Hey guys, very haunting melody with a lot of potential on State of Mind". Don't give that one up because there's a lot more to be found in that tune. Well done, but keep practicing.
Andy
atouchet2 4 years ago
hmmm.....now all you need is bass, drums and lyrics...you have lead and rythme(?) but it was good all the same, should be extended though
femalekurama15 4 years ago
Very Nice!
HappyGerman1 4 years ago
its just amazing! lol you guya are talented
mac12T 4 years ago
Nice song, guys! I would like to see you play other songs, like RHCP songs, to know what's done ;)
superGGfr 4 years ago
Um....enjoyable.
deadpanther 4 years ago
nice ^_^
DasBoomGirl 4 years ago
At least the kid in the back is good.....the long hair wannabee rockstar sucks more than jenna jameson!
vendetta52290 4 years ago
u should tell people to start requesting songs
boringtacostand 4 years ago
you guys are very good
akinto18 4 years ago
tht's really good im still trying though
afirocks94 4 years ago
nice video guys. you guys rock
thdj 4 years ago
HEY...
Thanks for the invitation. I just posted something for you guys over at GENIUSPONIFICATES.
Yeesh...I hope it turned-out ok
Keep up the good work.
GENIUSPONTIFICATES 4 years ago
a good start. keep working and keep posting.
cwbell 4 years ago
i liked it =P
MaYbeNot44 4 years ago
It's nice, I like it. ^_^
Avarwen 4 years ago
Yeah, nice music ... Its good for soundtrack !
Madabasto 4 years ago
we jammin in the name of the lord
secksiefish 4 years ago
you good.... :) i liked it.....
HyeThugz 4 years ago
Hey, sounds good! Nice little jam session. Mellow and good!
letstalkaboutstuff 4 years ago
Pretty good you guys!
Keep going with it
Kosherpicklesweet 4 years ago
dudes its not to bad....love acoustic guitar..very nice
jaghetermary 4 years ago
lol i play the guitar 2!! But im no way as good yet tho hehe. Hopefully i will be as good as you one day.
mac12T 4 years ago
this sounds like nin. pretty cool. the acoustic should work on timing maybe.
bassist88 4 years ago
Cool, not bad for a 1st song. Gl with your band & keep it up
liquidstl 4 years ago
mmm.... Need Voice and the music is to relax and the lirycs have some of Holiday.
Sorry but im not write and talck English Very Good
Hammerh5 4 years ago
hey, smile some when u make a vid.. hehekz.. don't get too serious.. takecare and godbless..
gstacouztica12 4 years ago
Yea! verry good. U work well together
doomscreen 4 years ago
thanks everyone!
RedCouchMusic 4 years ago
Hey you got the talent, the rest of the way is hard work to improve. Congratulations.
cronosmty 4 years ago
Play it with a little more feeling. tap the beat or something, you're not together.
kimnghs 4 years ago
not bad keep working on it!
brucecobain 4 years ago
Cool song!
Kidnin 4 years ago
It doesn't seem that you give much heart for this song
xHproductionsx 4 years ago
that was nice and simple, the guitars were together, nice job
refici222 4 years ago
great! thanks!... you should learn that song called, " lord send me redheads, i'm tired of squeezin blackheads"
ronshalita 4 years ago
I like it!! Keep on.
britchiche 4 years ago
wow! go you guys! :) thats acee =]]
lukester1990 4 years ago
Not for nothing but the guy with the gretsch is hot ;)
oh and u guys play well :)
LiLAnnie0206 4 years ago
Nice. You guys are pretty talented!
Fightthemachine1 4 years ago
Thanks guys, well keep trying our best to make good music.Stay Tuned!
RedCouchMusic 4 years ago
cool. this would be good with lyrics. i love your name!
xXAddictedToMusicXx 4 years ago
That's pretty cool, keep it up you guys. ^_^!!
LilDashOfCrazy91 4 years ago
Keep it up!
lslewis 4 years ago
Nice One !
winstonbabe 4 years ago
bad ass guitars, maybe some Learicks, sing about one loosing their union jobs, planes crashing and helicopters and trucks, so I could post on the teamster board.
KamikazeKoscki 4 years ago
make sure you spell your LYRICS right about guys LOSING their union jobs...
akinto18 4 years ago
Great job dude!
Kok301 4 years ago
Thats awesome, well done guys
Sharma17 4 years ago
nice
xHappygolucky 4 years ago
Great job!
peter6691 4 years ago