I thought I commented on this a while back when I first saw this -- I must be getting old. Anyway...
I really liked this. It was well shot and directed, had good production value (something I envy in everyone else's short films) and a cool premise. I also dug the opening shot and how that paid off. The music also added to the atmosphere. Best of all, it leaves you wanting more. Well done!
I once watched a movie in which somebody played the last image imprinted on a corpse's retina. I don't remember much more about it, so I assume it wasn't too good. About Optical... it's great, but there's a question the plot doesn't answer. Why was the FBI agent interested in killing that girl? Maybe you should make something bigger with this basic idea.
Nice work. I enjoyed the mystery/sci-fi thing you did with it. I kind of predicted some of it while watching, but the concept was still really cool. Good production values and well executed.
I thought I commented on this a while back when I first saw this -- I must be getting old. Anyway...
I really liked this. It was well shot and directed, had good production value (something I envy in everyone else's short films) and a cool premise. I also dug the opening shot and how that paid off. The music also added to the atmosphere. Best of all, it leaves you wanting more. Well done!
cherrera7 5 years ago
I once watched a movie in which somebody played the last image imprinted on a corpse's retina. I don't remember much more about it, so I assume it wasn't too good. About Optical... it's great, but there's a question the plot doesn't answer. Why was the FBI agent interested in killing that girl? Maybe you should make something bigger with this basic idea.
molondrongo 5 years ago
Actually I have a full 150 page script to this, I had to take a short sceen and condence it into about 5mins for school.
ERiCARDeN 5 years ago
I like the cadaver memory idea. Really neat. Great job.
FaithWillLead 5 years ago
Wow, well done, interesting concept and well executed, deserves a 5.
Alrekx 5 years ago
awesome work
bssr3333 5 years ago
I like the video. Great idea. I really like the forshadowing shot at the begining.. great work
hecticfilms 5 years ago
Nice work. I enjoyed the mystery/sci-fi thing you did with it. I kind of predicted some of it while watching, but the concept was still really cool. Good production values and well executed.
TheReelTodd 5 years ago
MASTER HERE>>> LOVED THAT ONE>>>> SERIOUSLY>>>> THIS COULD BE SO MUCH MORE THAN A 3 MIN CLIP>>> YOU R GOOD>>>
masterohalo 5 years ago
Wow! That was really well done and really cool.
JBuckley 5 years ago
liked them both
clayidiot 5 years ago
Great video! Good acting, could have been better w/ stable cameras and better shot angles.
genemaks 5 years ago
ooh...that's really go_od! 0_0
animefreak13535 5 years ago